Mirrorpass

BarbarianKing said:
If you notice I have not asked many questions because I like your style of writing. I want to be surprised and find out about things later. It does not make me confused. It makes me want to read it further to find the answers. Nice work!

Aww. Thank you! I feel gushy; that was such a nice thing to say. Hopefully I can keep it up and don't disappoint :)


Lady Callandra said:
ahem...it's after the weekend.
That didn't take long. I'm posting, I'm posting! Make your avatar stop scowling at me! ;) :p
 
It's getting pretty exciting. It's going really well Mandy. I like your story a lot. And I don't read many stories here. They have to be really good. Yours is.
 
Barbarian - Thank you! That means a lot to me. Seriously. I appreciate it.

Meerkitten - Coolness :) I hope you'll like the rest of this scene...it gets even better.

I'll post more after the weekend, yeah guys?
 
Aria fell. Once a long time ago she had dreamed that the sky could catch her, that if she released her hold on the world, it would wrap her in a sun-streaked embrace, and she would be safe. But now the sky was an empty thing, a sucking void. Somewhere beyond the howling of winds and the slashes of ice crossing her body, she heard the distant cries of Katka, and once the gleaming hull of their ship flicked in her peripheral. But that was all. The ship did not turn around. No one dove after her, not even Katka.

They were too close to space. Too close to the mirrored bowl that clung around the edges of their atmosphere. The Pass.

She was lost.

The cold bit her wings, and she did not flap them, couldn’t. It’s suicide to go through the bowl, Katka had told her. Suicide to pass through the mirror. How many times had they argued about this?

Aria’s eyes were torn open by the wind. She saw the sphere before her—a slivery opaque shell, her reflection caught in it: wings tangled around her body, her crystal plummeting after her, letting out a rising shriek of warning. Aria fell upward. Beyond the mirror, inside it, she saw a new world.

The unknown region.

The inside-out.

The mirror shivered, flexed, gave way.

Aria crossed her arms over her head—

—and it twisted inside out around her. The scream of her crystal sliced into silence. She was falling up now, toward the clouds and the globe, and her whole body knew it was wrong, that this whole world was wrong. Something unknowable and terrifying filled her. It was pulling her in, faster than she’d ever gone in her life, faster than she knew anything could go. It wanted to suck her in. It wanted to destroy her.

With that thought, she pushed her wings out into the teeth of the wind. But it only caught her and threw her aside. It tore her in two and then shoved her below; it snagged her arms and wrenched them in their sockets; hair lashed her face like blades; and the big globe rolled belly up under her, swelling to swallow her flailing limbs.

The speed matched the screaming in her mind, the terror that splintered through her and the burning in her lungs and the blackness creeping around her vision; as the globe swelled ,and opened it’s yawning mouth, and the blackness came from behind and below and she thought to herself, fly, fly! -- but the wind caught her wings and spun her like a kite, and she saw a thin bit of silver flicker in the void, and then a huge claw lunged out of the darkness and snatched her.

Her consciousness snapped like a thread.





(More to come)
OMG that is AWESOME!!! I love it. I've always wanted to write a "narnia /parallel world' type thing but I can't come up with names and such. LOVELY!
 
that was am "i don't know...hmm' response. :p I love the new installment. I can't wait to see when Aria finally understands why the girl kept her in the house.
 
Wow....I didn't realize how much I missed your stories Mandy until I read this! ^_^ I missed them tons! You should have written them all on here, dang it! :p
 
You've got a new reader. :)
I've always liked your stories, and here's a new one!!:D
It's interesting, as usual. I look forward to reading more.
I suppose finding her crystal isn't going to be as easy as she hopes, with NASA and the other guys on it's tail...
And could that be a family member in the cave?

Anyway, I look forward to more. ;)
 
Lossendil! Hiya! Nice seeing you again :) I definitely plan to answer your questions as the story goes on. There's a lot more I need to happen to Aria besides just finding her crystal :D

You're welcome. Call me Michael. Great update in that previous post!!
*extends hand* Hi Michael. I'm Mandy :) And thank you! It might be a couple of days before another update, as I haven't written anything new...I'm considering writing a chapter from Katka's point of view, but I wouldn't want to annoy someone by hopping away from what they really want to read about, AKA, Aria.

You guys are readers. Would it annoy you? ;)
 
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