Mirrorpass

It would be slightly annoying, but all stories have their slightly annoying points. So I suppose I wouldn't really mind.
It would be able to give us a better picture of Aria's background, which would be nice.
 
I won't be annoyed. I don't mind stories that jump back and forth between characters. As long as they connect somewhere. So go ahead, write from Katka's pov.
 
Thanks for all the comments, and sorry for not writing. I hit a slow patch and haven't written anything new. I'm trying hard not to push this story, so I'm not sure how long it will be until I have something new to post! I'm not giving up on it or anything. Just writing as it comes to me :)

I am working on a siggy for the story, though.
 
Take your time, rushed work is rarely as good as otherwise. And we are all patient readers (I hope). So take your time, and come up with something great! :)
 
Interesting update. I like getting to know more of the background. :)

But I've got a question. So ships are able to travel through the mirrored sphere? Beyond that, they end up in space? But when someone falls through, they end up on earth?

Well, that's the impression I got, I'm just wondering if it's correct.
As I said before, great update.
 
Wow! Big update. Terrific update. :) There was a lot of information there, which was good. Now we have a much clearer picture of whats going on.

And poor Katka... It must hurt so much. :( And poor Raura too.

So Zaire is Aria's twin, and Zephir is her father, Rea her mother, Raura her aunt (mother's sister) and Katka her cousin (Raura's son). Forgive me, but I have a habbit of reorganizing everything I read. >.<
Only missing name there would be Raura's husband. Or was it mentioned and I missed it?

Anyway, great writing as usual. :)
 
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Thanks you guys! :)

Lossendil - wow! :eek: Either you're a genius, or this story is not nearly as complicated as I thought it was. You got the whole family correct. And no, I didn't name Raura's husband; just didn't find a good place for it.

Question about the names. Do they work well? I wanted them to have an obvious sci-fi feel without resorting to "Omega" or 'Ronaokaa" or something. And I didn't want them to be confusing, either -'Zephir," Zaire," "Aria," Rea," "Raura." Are they too much alike?

And oh look - I finally got my siggy up! *does happy dance* Do you guys like it?

Here's more story.
 
Question about the names. Do they work well? I wanted them to have an obvious sci-fi feel without resorting to "Omega" or 'Ronaokaa" or something. And I didn't want them to be confusing, either -'Zephir," Zaire," "Aria," Rea," "Raura." Are they too much alike?
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The names work perfectly! They're something not quite familiar, but not out right weird either. And being in ways similar, you could see that theey're related, e.g Zaire daughter of Zephir, or Rea sister of Raurathey're. So yeah, I'd say that they work perfectly. :)


And I love your new sig. It's beautiful. :)

And the update was good. But poor Raura and Katka!
 
The names work perfectly! They're something not quite familiar, but not out right weird either. And being in ways similar, you could see that theey're related,
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Great! That's exactly what I was trying to do.

Great updates on Katka!! This story is really good. Great job Mandy!! b:)d
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Thank you! :)

I'm going away for the weekend. More story when I come back.
 
I loved the ending to that chapter! It was so.. um... touching? Uplifting? (Ack! I'm no good with words!)

Anyway, I really liked it. :)
 
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