New Narnia

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Susan sat on the cold stone on the top of the last tower of Cair Paravel, her castle, her home. or what was now left of it. The tears streamed down her face, but were unnoticable because of the rain that also splattered onto her cheeks. She was soaked from head to toe, but it did not matter to her.
Thoughts of the past week ran through her head, as if on repeat. The horrifying scenes of battles and near death experiences. Of fear and of the anticipation of what was to come. She knew not of what was ahead for her or any of her brothers, sister, or friends. she knew that the journey was going to be rough, but that they would stick together and do whatever they needed to save Narnia.
 
ooc: im going to use some peoples characters cause no one is on.

ic: "Susan? Are you up here" Peters soft voice said. Susan glanced behind her to see her eldest brothers head popping out in the stairwell.
"Oh Su! look at you you're soaked!" Peter began, but seeing the upset look on his sisters face he stopped short, knowing this was no time for patronizing.
He looked questioningly up at the clouds overhead and then stepped out into it, and sat down next to his sister.
"Chlo and Joseph are discussing whats to be done about Crystal." he sighed. "honestly, i dont ever see an end to this. i mean, i trust chlo and all and i know narnia affects her just like it does us. but still, it seems outta proportion." Susan interuppted him
"thats your problem, peter. you dont know how to trust people." she said firmly without even glancing at him.
Peter sighed. "i know im not the best judge of character, and that i sometimes dont want to trust whats the right thing. but im trying susan. we all are. this is all we've got left of home. weve got to do all we can to save it."
suddenly something stirred inside of Susan. She stood up almost before she could think and declared "and thats just what we are going to do." without any time for peter to reply or even think of replying, susan was flying down the stairs with only one thought in mind.
 
Thoughts were flying through Susans head as she trampled through the group sitting in a circle in the room below.
"susan! ow you stepped on my foot" Lucy cried out grabbing her left foot rubbing it.
"Susan! whats wrong with you!" voices rose and began to argue about her interrupting them.
"listen. we have to do something. something. anything. weve got to prove were stronger than them. prove that we wont give up!!" Susan declared pacing back and forth in the center of the group.
"Susan, what are you talking about? lets be reasonable here." peter said as he entered the room, out of breath from running down the stairs.
"NO PETER! im done being reasonable!! Im sick and tired of sitting here waiting for something else to tear us all apart!! i dont want to have to leave Narnia, because there is no more Narnia!!" Susans eyes began to gleem with a strange inner power.
"Is something wrong with susan?" Lucy leaned over and asked Edmund.
"I think shes gone mental." he said eyeing her sister with concern.
"I'm not mental!" Susan screamed at Edmund and Lucy. She stood up quickly surveying the room. Everyone looked at her like she was a crazy person, on a rampage. The faces stared blankly back at her. "I get it. thats fine. you dont wanna help. thats fine." she said calmly as if nothing had even just happened.
 
that night, as everyone lay sleeping, susan was wide awake. She tried to fall asleep, but knew that she was being called to do what she felt was right.

It was morning, and Lucy was the first to awake. Everyone else woke to her shriek of "SUSANS GONE!"

ooc: dundundun!
sry lady chlo. do you want me to update you?
 
Nay.....

IC: Chloe aroused after hearing a scream out in the hallway. She was beginning to fear sleep, fearing that if she slept she would dream and encounter the same spirits that attacked her. Getting up she walked to the door. Opening it she ran into someone. "What in Aslan's name is going on?!" Chloe said shocked....
 
"Oh no! Susans gone!" Lucy cried out again. she began to cry, fearing the worst.
"dont cry Lu! Im sure shes near by." Peter said hugging his little sister.
"lets search all around the tower for her!" he said

ooc: you mentioned a hallway, chlo, isnt there just one tower left?
 
Chloe gasped, rushing back into her room she grabbed her sword and cloak and rushed back out. Running down to the garden she looked and looked. "Susan! Susan? Susan where are you?!" she called as she ran through the maze.
"She is no longer here," a voice spoke to her.
Removing her sword in defense, Chloe searched for the source of the voice. "She isn't? Then where is she, voice?" Chloe asked pausing, but still prepared for an attack. But no attack was to come, a young girl no older than Ocean stepped out from behind a bush. Lowering her sword Chloe listened. "I know not where she is, but I know she is gone. She is in grave danger, Lady Chloe. Only you can save her now...." The girl said as she disappeared.
"What? Hey! Wait!!" By the time Chloe had spoken the girl was gone. "What do you mean by only I can save her?!" She called out in aggrivation. "Where is she?!?!?!"
Tears flowed as Chloe kneeled on the ground. Prayers for Susan flowed forth from her lips. "Oh Aslan, Jesus, My Savior. Protect her, wherever she is.... Oh God help me to find her swiftly....." Standing she sheathed her sword and returned to the castle. Walking up to her room, she dressed in traveling attire and packed a bag. She was going to search for Susan far and wide. She wouldn't loose a friend. And if it was Aslan's plan for this to happen then there must be a meaning behind it....
 
Su has gone missing, I don't know where she's at, but she emailed me a little something that gave me some idea of what was ahead, but I can't tell! It's a suprise!! :p
 
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