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Karla's Arrival

Karla woke up insted of being in her bed at her house in England. She found herself on a bed of Heather she looked up and saw Cair Parivel in Ruins only the one tower remaining.Everyhign seemed to be dark and grey and slightly chilly. I say what happened here she thought to herself the last time she arrived Narnia was more colorful and not as dark feeling she walked toward Cair parivel hoping she could find someone to help her Oh where is Aslan or someone when I need them. She felt for her weapons to her suprise she had her bow and arrows on her and her sword clipped to her belt in its scabberd Guess Iam ready for anything.
 
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skyla sue said:
Karla woke up insted of being in her bed at her house in England. She found herself on a bed of Heather she looked up and saw Cair Parivel in Ruins only the one tower remaining.Everyhign seemed to be dark and grey and slightly chilly. I say what happened here she thought to herself the last time she arrived Narnia was more colorful and not as dark feeling she walked toward Cair parivel hoping she could find someone to help her Oh where is Aslan or someone when I need them. She felt for her weapons to her suprise she had her bow and arrows on her and her sword clipped to her belt in its scabberd Guess Iam ready for anything.
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You might want to be updated on the story. Here is a just of it:

So far the plan is that Crystal (a Witch) and her armies is going to battle the Narnia forces. she will then be defeated by Chloe (fulfilling the prophecy). Mizar (A all powerful Dark Lord) will attack Archenland and overthrow it. Afterwards Mizar with his armies will attack Cair Paraval and gain victory. Resulting in turning all the lands in darkness. Most of are characters will go into hiding, and after nine months will come together to retake Cair Paraval. Mizar then will be killed by Aslan and Narnia will be restored to it's former glory. So far that's the plan thus far....

Nice post, by the way....
 
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It had been several days since the attack and Chloe was resting on the ground as the sun rose. Eringuard had promised that if she had slept well, and her wounds were healing, he would consider leaving today. Yet he didn't want to. Something made him want to stay here.
He had gotten to know Chloe a lot better, even if she was slightly angry with him and Sheerik for making her stay. Yesterday had been interesting, his wounded leg had completely healed, and the gashes on Chloe's back were still red, swollen and scabbed, but the hadn't reopened, and most signs pointed to her not having an infection from the wound.
Smiling, he watched her roll in her sleep. Sheerik who had been sleeping beside him aroused, pulling himself to his feet. "Are we?" he asked quietly.
"I do not know. I would have to see Chloe's wounds," Eringuard said turning to him, but keeping Chloe in sight.
"She will not stay for much longer, Eringuard. She is a strong willed woman. If she had not seen reason she might have struggled against the bindings for a much longer time," Sheerik said.
Eringuard nodded. That she was. "Shall we arouse her?" Eringuard asked. Walking forward Sheerik brought his nose down to nudge Chloe's sleeping form.
Moving she opened her eyes, smiling when she saw Sheerik's face. "Good morning."
"Good morning," Sheerik and Eringuard replied.
She readjusted her cloak as she stood. Stretching carefully, she asked Eringuard whether they would leave in the morning. "Yes," he said watching her bite her lip to keep from smiling. "Let me see how your wounds are progressing first."
Chloe removed her cloak and turned to allow Eringuard to check. As he undid all the buttons on the top half of the buttons he took in the sight of such a gastly mark on such beautiful skin. She'll have scars forever... he thought as he looked them over. "Alright, we shall leave." Chloe nearly jumped as she waited for him to redo her top.
Once the last button was done she turned her long red hair flying out before rippling gracefully onto her back. The look on her face told him everything. She was happy to be able to move, yet her concern for Susan, and the other Kings' and Queen, were plauging her.
"We will leave after breakfast," he said leading her to eat.


They had been traveling for several hours, Chloe sitting ontop of Sheerik, Eringuard beside. As they spoke, the silence of the forest made every sound echo. Since they had last seen the werewolves, there had been no signs of life.
"So what do you intend to do after the battle?" Chloe asked from atop Sheerik.
"I intend to leave Paravel and find myself a mate," Sheerik said in his horsy voice.
Chloe laughed. "You deserve to live out your days in pleasure, brave Horse. May you have many fouls!"
Sheerik nayed happily at the blessing. "Thank you, Daughter of Eve."
"And you, Eringuard? What do you intend to do?" she asked curiously.
Eringuard thought a moment. "I do not know. To be honest, I haven't thought about it." After another moment he looked up at Chloe. "What do you plan?"
Silence followed for a moment as she thought about it. He watched her face cloud over. "I have nothing after this battle, at least nothing in Narnia," she said quietly.
"I know the prophecy states that I will become Queen of Narnia, but I do not want such a title," she sounded sad. "I do not deserve it," she continued with conviction.
Silence surrounded them again. It seemed like a security blanket. Everyone knew everyone else intimatly, and at times they would just know what the other meant.
Sheerik spoke cutting the silence. "I may only be a horse, my lady, but I believe you will make a great Queen."
A smile brought out the beauty in Chloe's features as she leaned over to hug Sheerik about the neck. "Thank you."
"No thank you needed, Daughter of Eve," Sheerik responded. "I merely spoke the truth."
She laughed, wiping a tear from the corner of her eye. "You are such a blessing, Sheerik!"
He nayed, his head held high.
"Maybe, if I stay, I will find love and have children," Chloe said. "Maybe I could live away in the countryside! Do you think High King Peter would allow me out of his sight long enough?" Chloe said with a laugh.
Sheerik laughed his horsy laugh. Eringuard smiled at the last comment. "Maybe..." They all laughed.
 
Lady Chloe said:
It had been several days since the attack and Chloe was resting on the ground as the sun rose. Eringuard had promised that if she had slept well, and her wounds were healing, he would consider leaving today. Yet he didn't want to. Something made him want to stay here.
He had gotten to know Chloe a lot better, even if she was slightly angry with him and Sheerik for making her stay. Yesterday had been interesting, his wounded leg had completely healed, and the gashes on Chloe's back were still red, swollen and scabbed, but the hadn't reopened, and most signs pointed to her not having an infection from the wound.
Smiling, he watched her roll in her sleep. Sheerik who had been sleeping beside him aroused, pulling himself to his feet. "Are we?" he asked quietly.
"I do not know. I would have to see Chloe's wounds," Eringuard said turning to him, but keeping Chloe in sight.
"She will not stay for much longer, Eringuard. She is a strong willed woman. If she had not seen reason she might have struggled against the bindings for a much longer time," Sheerik said.
Eringuard nodded. That she was. "Shall we arouse her?" Eringuard asked. Walking forward Sheerik brought his nose down to nudge Chloe's sleeping form.
Moving she opened her eyes, smiling when she saw Sheerik's face. "Good morning."
"Good morning," Sheerik and Eringuard replied.
She readjusted her cloak as she stood. Stretching carefully, she asked Eringuard whether they would leave in the morning. "Yes," he said watching her bite her lip to keep from smiling. "Let me see how your wounds are progressing first."
Chloe removed her cloak and turned to allow Eringuard to check. As he undid all the buttons on the top half of the buttons he took in the sight of such a gastly mark on such beautiful skin. She'll have scars forever... he thought as he looked them over. "Alright, we shall leave." Chloe nearly jumped as she waited for him to redo her top.
Once the last button was done she turned her long red hair flying out before rippling gracefully onto her back. The look on her face told him everything. She was happy to be able to move, yet her concern for Susan, and the other Kings' and Queen, were plauging her.
"We will leave after breakfast," he said leading her to eat.


They had been traveling for several hours, Chloe sitting ontop of Sheerik, Eringuard beside. As they spoke, the silence of the forest made every sound echo. Since they had last seen the werewolves, there had been no signs of life.
"So what do you intend to do after the battle?" Chloe asked from atop Sheerik.
"I intend to leave Paravel and find myself a mate," Sheerik said in his horsy voice.
Chloe laughed. "You deserve to live out your days in pleasure, brave Horse. May you have many fouls!"
Sheerik nayed happily at the blessing. "Thank you, Daughter of Eve."
"And you, Eringuard? What do you intend to do?" she asked curiously.
Eringuard thought a moment. "I do not know. To be honest, I haven't thought about it." After another moment he looked up at Chloe. "What do you plan?"
Silence followed for a moment as she thought about it. He watched her face cloud over. "I have nothing after this battle, at least nothing in Narnia," she said quietly.
"I know the prophecy states that I will become Queen of Narnia, but I do not want such a title," she sounded sad. "I do not deserve it," she continued with conviction.
Silence surrounded them again. It seemed like a security blanket. Everyone knew everyone else intimatly, and at times they would just know what the other meant.
Sheerik spoke cutting the silence. "I may only be a horse, my lady, but I believe you will make a great Queen."
A smile brought out the beauty in Chloe's features as she leaned over to hug Sheerik about the neck. "Thank you."
"No thank you needed, Daughter of Eve," Sheerik responded. "I merely spoke the truth."
She laughed, wiping a tear from the corner of her eye. "You are such a blessing, Sheerik!"
He nayed, his head held high.
"Maybe, if I stay, I will find love and have children," Chloe said. "Maybe I could live away in the countryside! Do you think High King Peter would allow me out of his sight long enough?" Chloe said with a laugh.
Sheerik laughed his horsy laugh. Eringuard smiled at the last comment. "Maybe..." They all laughed.
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Hi Matthew *tehehe twahaha tehehe* :D
 
Mizar's Background: (Condensed Version)

Mizar's Ancestor:

Mizar is the decendant of Vade Satcious, an evil tyrant that once ruled the Lone Islands and made war with Narnia. vade was a very vile man who sued the Dark magic. vades pwoers grew each battle he foguht and after servnig his King for many years he killed him. vade then took control of the aries and wagged war against the western lands (Narnia and Achenland). It is said that Vade put a curse on his family line. It mentions in his memoirs that he dedicated his soul and his desendants to the Dark Magic.

Mizar's Parents:

Mizar's parents met during the Battle of The Lone Islands. Mizar's father Vald was soldier of the Lone Islands. Vlad met Mizar's mother Lady Terra when he wwas wounded in battle. she took care of him and after reoverying Vald and Terra fell in love. When the battle was over, Vlad and Terra wedded and sailed to the Galma. After spending a year there Terra became pregannt with a son. A they named him Mizar.

Mizar's life:

At a youg age Mizar wasn't the idea child. He enjoyed making other kids suffer and he was found at times killing innocent creatures. When he was twelve he did the most evil thing ever. He took a tourch to his home and sat it on fire with his parents inside. He watched thme burn with a vile smile. Mizar then headed east to the Lone Islands where he met powerful Magician known as Darith. Seeing Mizar potenial, Darith took Mizar as his pupil. Teaching him spells and powers. Nine years later Darith took another apprentice named Maze. Mizar didn't care much for Maze, infact he hated him.After six more years of training, Mizar killed his Darith in his sleep. Mizar then abandoned Maze and taking Darith's spell books with him.

Mizar then spent ten years of solitude on a unkown island in the east. He practiced every spell to mastery and he even created his own spells. Infact Mizar became so impowed by the Dark Magic that it literlly became a part of him. Manifesting when ever he used his powers. Mizar would practice his spells on victims he captured during his travels. But it wasn't enough, he wanted to conquer and make all suffer. Thus Mizar devised a plan to overthorw the lands of the west. He would gather allies from all dark realms to aid him. Mizar would tkae the Lone Islands and Galma within days, he thne would seige Archenland and overthrow it. Finally he would head into Narnia and attack Cair Paraval.
 
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Mizar's Ancestor:

Mizar is the decendant of Vade Satcious, an evil tyrant that once ruled the Lone Islands and made war with Narnia. vade was a very vile man who sued the Dark magic. vades pwoers grew each battle he foguht and after servnig his King for many years he killed him. vade then took control of the aries and wagged war against the western lands (Narnia and Achenland). It is said that Vade put a curse on his family line. It mentions in his memoirs that he dedicated his soul and his desendants to the Dark Magic.

Mizar's Parents:

Mizar's parents met during the Battle of The Lone Islands. Mizar's father Vald was soldier of the Lone Islands. Vlad met Mizar's mother Lady Terra when he wwas wounded in battle. she took care of him and after reoverying Vald and Terra fell in love. When the battle was over, Vlad and Terra wedded and sailed to the Galma. After spending a year there Terra became pregannt with a son. A they named him Mizar.

Mizar's life:

At a youg age Mizar wasn't the idea child. He enjoyed making other kids suffer and he was found at times killing innocent creatures. When he was twelve he did the most evil thing ever. He took a tourch to his home and sat it on fire with his parents inside. He watched thme burn with a vile smile. Mizar then headed east to the Lone Islands where he met powerful Magician known as Darith. Seeing Mizar potenial, Darith took Mizar as his pupil. Teaching him spells and powers. Nine years later Darith took another apprentice named Maze. Mizar didn't care much for Maze, infact he hated him.After six more years of training, Mizar killed his Darith in his sleep. Mizar then abandoned Maze and taking Darith's spell books with him.

Mizar then spent ten years of solitude on a unkown island in the east. He practiced every spell to mastery and he even created his own spells. Infact Mizar became so impowed by the Dark Magic that it literlly became a part of him. Manifesting when ever he used his powers. Mizar would practice his spells on victims he captured during his travels. But it wasn't enough, he wanted to conquer and make all suffer. Thus Mizar devised a plan to overthorw the lands of the west. He would gather allies from all dark realms to aid him. Mizar would tkae the Lone Islands and Galma within days, he thne would seige Archenland and overthrow it. Finally he would head into Narnia and attack Cair Paraval.
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HI POLLY!! I wanna call you Lily now :( can I call you Lily
 
Sir Godfrey said:
you know I'm a guy, why would you call me lily?
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I call Benny: Ashley.

I call Chloe: Matthew

I call Oxford Girl: Leon.

Sarah (brightlywound): Eduardo

Sarah (LT): Benny

KoN: Summer

Apple_of_Life29: Pepsi

yaahhh
 
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