Read the Story of the Thousand of years that wasn't told...

[BarbarianKing]

So far I've read the first three posts. It's really interesting, but like I said in my visitor message, the bit about Jack Sparrow is not a good fit in my opinion. Overall it's good. I will read more then I'll comment more.

 

[Ginny_JillPole]

Thanks!! I changed it, haha, Copperfox will be pleased as well, hopefully. It was made for you to enjoy.

 

[BarbarianKing]

I did like how Edward discovered Narnia and the dialogue with the talking dogs.

 

[Ginny_JillPole]

Hahaha, it was fun to do as well!!!! It's just like I would have reacted, actually

 

[Jill_Pole_Wannabe]

WOW SIS (ginny) I LURVE HOW EDWARD GETS INTO NARNIA! And i feel sorry for tumnus at the begining

 

[Ginny_JillPole]

Hahhaa, yeah. Actually, like Aslan said in the book, Telmarines came from our own world, through a cave and they were pirates as well. My mind just travelled and imagined that maybe the story could be different than what everyone imagined. I tried to keep a conection between our world and Narnia, and how everyone felt about the Pevensies and the fact they were gone, dead or alive.

 

[QueenSusanofNarnia]

I like it, but I think there could be a little less dialogue, or at least more narrative in between.

 

[Ginny_JillPole]

Yaaa, I've been told about it But you know, everyone has a different style. However, I'll just put that in practice next time. Thanks for the advice

 

[Ginny_JillPole]

Oh, and I still have that "Movie Script" thingy... you know, where there's much more dialogue than narrative.

 

[QueenSusanofNarnia]

Oh yeah no I totally agree everyone's got their own style.

 

[Ginny_JillPole]

Thanks, girlie!
Please, everyone keep reading and comment, so the story doesn't get buried again!!!