Rp - Hhb

Bowofmystery said:
"I am afraid that I do not know the answer to that question" panted Tumnus "i don't like it all tho, i doubt that a Calomene Prine could meen any good here at Cair Paravel"

(I can only post at this time guys cos i have school, sorry. Plz continue the RP and i will be able to do more on the Weekend when you are on)

"now Tumnus we don't know that for sure.... thiers always the possibility that he could mean us no harm...." Lucy hesitated trying to choose her words carefully, "but to be truthful I don't guess that a Prince of Colorman could mean any good here either....but all the same we must join the others and see what he wants" she took ahold of Tumnus's hand gently and started towards the garden where her brother and sister had already arrived to meet the Colorman Prince.
soon they arrived in the garden and Lucy qiuetly led her Dear friend Mr. Tumnus up to where her two sibleings were meeting Rabadash.

((heh, thats ok I understand how that is))
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
Susan smiled at her younger brother and King of Narnia; thankful for his company and for escorting her to Prince Rabadash. when they arrived in the Garden Susans heart began to race as soon as she layed eyes on Rabadash the Prince of Colorman. she forced a polite smile, allowing him to have the pleasure of kissing her hand, "Prince Rabadash, whatever brings you to Cair Paravel on as lovely day as this?" her vioce was soft as usual but filled with somewhat reluctance, though she never let that part of it show enough for any of the ones around her, exspeically the Prince to notice.

Rabadash smiled the most bewitchingly handsome smile slowly releasing Susan's hand.
" What would be a stronger pull to Narnia than to beg an audience with the most beautiful of Humans that ever stepped foot on this soil." Edmund grinned a bit but he had no patience for Rabadash's lulling words and showering compliments. “ Susan you look more beautiful than ever I have seen you. She has such a wonderful glow about her doesn’t she Edmund?”
“ Yes Rabadash she has always been like that. Why do you think Princes and Nobles come from the farthest corners of the earth to beg her hand in marriage?” Rabadash flashed with a bit of what seemed as irritation.
“ You are too right Edmund, why wouldn’t they?” He smiled again and Edmund could feel his sister fidget a bit by his side in an uncomfortable manner.
“ Yes well Rabadash I doubt you came to discuss my sister so what does bring you here today to Narnia?”
“ I would like to speak to Susan alone if you would permit?” Edmund looked at Susan asking if being alone is what she wanted but he didn’t have to say a thing for his look said everything.
 
The Forgiven Traitor said:
Rabadash smiled the most bewitchingly handsome smile slowly releasing Susan's hand.
" What would be a stronger pull to Narnia than to beg an audience with the most beautiful of Humans that ever stepped foot on this soil." Edmund grinned a bit but he had no patience for Rabadash's lulling words and showering compliments. “ Susan you look more beautiful than ever I have seen you. She has such a wonderful glow about her doesn’t she Edmund?”
“ Yes Rabadash she has always been like that. Why do you think Princes and Nobles come from the farthest corners of the earth to beg her hand in marriage?” Rabadash flashed with a bit of what seemed as irritation.
“ You are too right Edmund, why wouldn’t they?” He smiled again and Edmund could feel his sister fidget a bit by his side in an uncomfortable manner.
“ Yes well Rabadash I doubt you came to discuss my sister so what does bring you here today to Narnia?”
“ I would like to speak to Susan alone if you would permit?” Edmund looked at Susan asking if being alone is what she wanted but he didn’t have to say a thing for his look said everything.

Susan somewhat hastily took her hand back, feeling feel her heart jump into her throat due to the nervous, uncomfortable feeling she felt from Rabadash's words....did he just ask to be alone with her? now this was an idea Susan felt the most uncomfortable about for when her brother was there standing right beside her he gave her the reassurnece she needed to get through this....but without him there she felt afraid.....she looked back from Edmund to Rabadash trying to decide weather or not to allow Prince Rabadash the pleasure to be alone with her even though she may have hated the idea inside she new she had to atleast try and be polite....maybe it wouldn't be as bad as she thought it would be.....she nodded her head giving a facial expression that told her brother her ansher was yes.....
 
Edmund smiled an uncomfortable smile and nodded towards Rabadash.
"well I shall leave you to alone to talk." as he left he turned around and said half jokingly, " Susan just don't be late for dinner." After he left Rabadash took a step closer to Susan and put out his arm, as a gentlemen should. He smiled again waiting for her to take his arm.
 
The Forgiven Traitor said:
Edmund smiled an uncomfortable smile and nodded towards Rabadash.
"well I shall leave you to alone to talk." as he left he turned around and said half jokingly, " Susan just don't be late for dinner." After he left Rabadash took a step closer to Susan and put out his arm, as a gentlemen should. He smiled again waiting for her to take his arm.

Susan smiled uncomfotably towards Edmund, "oh, don't worry Edmund I'll be there" she said jokingly though there was a hint of nervousness in her tone...she looked back to Rabadash seeing his arm held out and took it somewhat reluctantly; taking a step towards him. she smiled nervously, "well Rabadash what is it that you wanted to talk to me about that you feel it so important that you had to talk to me alone?" her tone was soft as she tried to fight the nervousness she felt.
 
Leading her a bit farther into the garden Rabadash said nothing until they stood in the middle of the garden where the huge lion fountain stood. “ Susan you are be no mistake the most beautiful woman any man has ever seen or will see in the future of the world.” Taking a few steps away from her he turned his back as he plucked one most brilliant white rose from the bush. “ I do not flatter you as to win favor but I speak merely the truth.” He then handed her the rose with a bit of a bow. Rabadash was by no means unhandsome…quite the contrary. He had many Kings wishing him to wed their daughters and even more women that wanted to persuade him to take them as his wife. His fetching blue eyes could win any woman’s heart and his golden brown hair shone in the sunlight like a crown. He was Tall and very strong built like a soldier but as gentle as a dove. Yet with all these qualities he had an air of snobbery about him. He knew that in looks he was grand and in that he was proud. “ Have many asked for your hand in marriage?”
 
The Forgiven Traitor said:
Leading her a bit farther into the garden Rabadash said nothing until they stood in the middle of the garden where the huge lion fountain stood. “ Susan you are be no mistake the most beautiful woman any man has ever seen or will see in the future of the world.” Taking a few steps away from her he turned his back as he plucked one most brilliant white rose from the bush. “ I do not flatter you as to win favor but I speak merely the truth.” He then handed her the rose with a bit of a bow. Rabadash was by no means unhandsome…quite the contrary. He had many Kings wishing him to wed their daughters and even more women that wanted to persuade him to take them as his wife. His fetching blue eyes could win any woman’s heart and his golden brown hair shone in the sunlight like a crown. He was Tall and very strong built like a soldier but as gentle as a dove. Yet with all these qualities he had an air of snobbery about him. He knew that in looks he was grand and in that he was proud. “ Have many asked for your hand in marriage?”

Susan could feel her heart beating a mile a minute, seeing Rabadashes kind gestures and hearing his flattering words almost maid her have second thoughts about how poorly she thought of him....she gently took the buetiful white ros in her soft hands; studying it for a moment before she looked back to the handsom Prince standing before her. it came as no surpirze to her that Rabadash has asked this qiuestion though she was hesitant on anshering him...."probaly too many to count Prince Rabadash but I've always turned them all down...most of them were only after me becuase of my buety" her vioce was soft yet in a way sort of firm for she didn't want to be won over by the handson Prince but at times she had found hard not to end up doing so....

((heh, I hope I'm doing ok...I don't really remember much of Hbh lol))
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
Susan could feel her heart beating a mile a minute, seeing Rabadashes kind gestures and hearing his flattering words almost maid her have second thoughts about how poorly she thought of him....she gently took the buetiful white ros in her soft hands; studying it for a moment before she looked back to the handsom Prince standing before her. it came as no surpirze to her that Rabadash has asked this qiuestion though she was hesitant on anshering him...."probaly too many to count Prince Rabadash but I've always turned them all down...most of them were only after me becuase of my buety" her vioce was soft yet in a way sort of firm for she didn't want to be won over by the handson Prince but at times she had found hard not to end up doing so....

((heh, I hope I'm doing ok...I don't really remember much of Hbh lol))
((I don't remeber much of the HHB))
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
Susan could feel her heart beating a mile a minute, seeing Rabadashes kind gestures and hearing his flattering words almost maid her have second thoughts about how poorly she thought of him....she gently took the buetiful white ros in her soft hands; studying it for a moment before she looked back to the handsom Prince standing before her. it came as no surpirze to her that Rabadash has asked this qiuestion though she was hesitant on anshering him...."probaly too many to count Prince Rabadash but I've always turned them all down...most of them were only after me becuase of my buety" her vioce was soft yet in a way sort of firm for she didn't want to be won over by the handson Prince but at times she had found hard not to end up doing so....

((heh, I hope I'm doing ok...I don't really remember much of Hbh lol))
((This isn't an official Rp so I don't think we have to stick totally to the books.))

Rabadash smiled at her reply. “ Is that so wrong?” Immediately seeing that this response did not please her he turned away and studied the fountain before him. He slowly removed his day crown, which was no more than a band of gold with a few Calorman designs on it. “ What would one have to do to prove that beauty was not all that mattered?” Turning back to face her Rabadash knew this would not be easy.
 
The Forgiven Traitor said:
((This isn't an official Rp so I don't think we have to stick totally to the books.))

Rabadash smiled at her reply. “ Is that so wrong?” Immediately seeing that this response did not please her he turned away and studied the fountain before him. He slowly removed his day crown, which was no more than a band of gold with a few Calorman designs on it. “ What would one have to do to prove that beauty was not all that mattered?” Turning back to face her Rabadash knew this would not be easy.

((oh, heh, thats good to know ^.^))

"one would have to prove that they loved one for who one truly was and not just becuase of ones beauty.....I'm not looking for just another Prince or King whos after a women becuase shes buetiful thier heart must be pure and soft and show the women that he cares about her becuase of who she is as a person and not just becuase shes buetiful for what does beauty matter without love?" her words were slightly harsh but she was tired of men who were only out for her buetify and she was going to make certain whoever she married loved her for who she was and not just becuase she was buetiful.
 
Rabadash did not smile, as was his custom after anything and everything she said, he simply stood there contemplating what she had said. He fingered his crown looking around the garden then back at the woman that stood before him.
“ You have standards of a dream…yet I do not condemn them in any way. I am just curious to know if you think that one day you will actually find such an honorable man?”
 
The Forgiven Traitor said:
Rabadash did not smile, as was his custom after anything and everything she said, he simply stood there contemplating what she had said. He fingered his crown looking around the garden then back at the woman that stood before him.
“ You have standards of a dream…yet I do not condemn them in any way. I am just curious to know if you think that one day you will actually find such an honorable man?”

Susan sighed, letting her gaze wander off to the ground, "I don't know yet...but thats what I'm hoping and praying for and I know someday if I'm meant to be married then yes Rabadash I will find a man whos everything I've ever dreamed of and so much more" she said, bringing her gaze back apon the Colorman Prince who stood before her.
 
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“Susan, I know I am not your ideal. I am a prince and not a man of such fantastical proportions. I have my faults but in the same token I am sure I have good qualities about me.” Rabadash then knelt down on one knee setting his crown at the feet of Susan took her right hand in his. “ I know you do not like me entirely too well but I can improve if I set my mind to it. I set my royalty at your feet and beg you to be my wife.”
 
The Forgiven Traitor said:
“Susan, I know I am not your ideal. I am a prince and not a man of such fantastical proportions. I have my faults but in the same token I am sure I have good qualities about me.” Rabadash then knelt down on one knee setting his crown at the feet of Susan took her right hand in his. “ I know you do not like me entirely too well but I can improve if I set my mind to it. I set my royalty at your feet and beg you to be my wife.”

Susan was only slightly surpirzed at Rabadashes beging her to marry him for she had known many other kings and Pinces who had done the same....yet she never fell in love with any of them and thats why she never married...she loked down at Rabadash and her heart began to race again, "Rabadash.....I'm sure you do have many good quality's about you....but I cannot give you a deffiniant ansher to what you beg of me at this time....I'm going to need a lot more time to think this over and get to know you better and see who your really like....and then I will give you an ansher" her vioce sounded nervous and unsteady. her right hand was almost shaking slightly in Rabadash's hand for she only remembered feeling this nervous at vary rare times in her young life as Queen of Narnia.
 
Slowly standing to his feet Rabadash did not release her hand but slowly raised it to his lips and kissed it ever so gently. He looked her right in the eyes searching them trying to find the right words that would penetrate directly to her soul. “Thank you for your honesty, Susan.” He then once more kissed her hand.
 
The Forgiven Traitor said:
Slowly standing to his feet Rabadash did not release her hand but slowly raised it to his lips and kissed it ever so gently. He looked her right in the eyes searching them trying to find the right words that would penetrate directly to her soul. “Thank you for your honesty, Susan.” He then once more kissed her hand.

Susan felt a warm yet sort of uncomfortable feeling rush through her when Rabadash kissed her hand, she looked him strait in the eye seeing his was searching for the right words to say to her...."your welcome Prince Rabadash and thank you for yours" she said barely above a whisper, her eyes still locked with his.
 
Rabadash slowly let go his gentle hold on her hand yet not tearing his eyes away. He executed a handsome, royal bow and turned to leave, but just before he went out of sight he turned back to Susan. “ Please do not forget what I have said and do not exempt me from your future. I wish to be a part of it.” With that he turned and vanished out of sight.
 
The Forgiven Traitor said:
Rabadash slowly let go his gentle hold on her hand yet not tearing his eyes away. He executed a handsome, royal bow and turned to leave, but just before he went out of sight he turned back to Susan. “ Please do not forget what I have said and do not exempt me from your future. I wish to be a part of it.” With that he turned and vanished out of sight.

Susan slowly reclined her hand from Rabadashes gentle hold, she smiled politely seeing his bow, for a moment she thought about what Rabadash said before watching him dissapear out of view.
she stood there in the garden for a few minutes reflecting on Rabadashes visit and what he asked of her before she finally began her walk back inside the castle where her brother Edmund was waiting for her.
 
Edmund was pacing back and forth in the hall hands clasped behind his back. Seeing Susan walking towards him he half ran in her direction. “ Well? What happened?”

((I am retiring for the night y’all but I will be back on tomorrow. God Bless))
 
The Forgiven Traitor said:
Edmund was pacing back and forth in the hall hands clasped behind his back. Seeing Susan walking towards him he half ran in her direction. “ Well? What happened?”

((I am retiring for the night y’all but I will be back on tomorrow. God Bless))
((awww ok seeya tomorrow)))
 
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