Tales from the Wardrobe...

Status
Not open for further replies.
Well, Dayhawk has been on-forum again, and once again has not posted anything on this RP. Either she's constrained by real-life obligations, or she simply is content with the unelaborated inference that Lucy killed one or two Ogres. Accordingly, I'm going to do what I can to bring forward in time the major characters who are still stuck in the previous night: Edmund and Angela. Of course I can't add anything to Angela's situation right now, because Powl has a definite plan for it; so the following will move Edmund forward sufficiently that Powl, if it suits her, can decide at any point that he "finds" her.

""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""

Edmund had not yet retraced the recent journey quite as far as the Swerving Swan, when he heard the voice of the male hawk Yarkisoth calling to him: "Your Majesty, Edmund the Just! King Edmund, are you down there?"

"Yes, it's me! "Edmund called back. "Here, I'll hold up my right arm for you."

The tiercel hawk perched as invited, and got to business: "Your Majesty, not long after you left, Princess-Consort Angela, without consulting anyone, suddenly left also! It was determined that no one took her by force; she rode out on Sultan. The most logical supposition was that she had decided she no longer wanted to be apart from you..."

(Edmund kept to himself the irony of being told this about his wife--when, while he was most recently with her, she had not even responded to being kissed.)

"...Since she knew the general direction you would be taking, we would have thought to find her either with you, or in the process of overtaking you. But as I was assigned to find you, while Vesta the leopardess and Snowpelt the dog followed Princess Angela, it was to our dismay that my route and theirs could be seen to diverge. I therefore implore Your Majesty to turn from your journey for the present, and help look for your espoused wife."

Edmund knew that, under Aslan and Aslan's justice, he could have no higher priority than the well-being of his wife, even if she did have coldly unaffectionate moods. He turned his horse Phillip around, even as Phillip was remarking, "Sultan is a good steed for night travel: very careful about his footing. If the Princess-Consort felt the need to sally forth in the dark, she at least chose the right horse for it." Soon Edmund and Yarkisoth were on their way to find the place where Vesta and Snowpelt had first noticeably veered away from Edmund's course; from there, they would overtake the leopardess and the terrier, and there would be _four_ talking animals and a King searching for the missing Angela.
 
Copperfox said:
Well, Dayhawk has been on-forum again, and once again has not posted anything on this RP. Either she's constrained by real-life obligations, or she simply is content with the unelaborated inference that Lucy killed one or two Ogres. Accordingly, I'm going to do what I can to bring forward in time the major characters who are still stuck in the previous night: Edmund and Angela. Of course I can't add anything to Angela's situation right now, because Powl has a definite plan for it; so the following will move Edmund forward sufficiently that Powl, if it suits her, can decide at any point that he "finds" her.

""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""

Edmund had not yet retraced the recent journey quite as far as the Swerving Swan, when he heard the voice of the male hawk Yarkisoth calling to him: "Your Majesty, Edmund the Just! King Edmund, are you down there?"

"Yes, it's me! "Edmund called back. "Here, I'll hold up my right arm for you."

The tiercel hawk perched as invited, and got to business: "Your Majesty, not long after you left, Princess-Consort Angela, without consulting anyone, suddenly left also! It was determined that no one took her by force; she rode out on Sultan. The most logical supposition was that she had decided she no longer wanted to be apart from you..."

(Edmund kept to himself the irony of being told this about his wife--when, while he was most recently with her, she had not even responded to being kissed.)

"...Since she knew the general direction you would be taking, we would have thought to find her either with you, or in the process of overtaking you. But as I was assigned to find you, while Vesta the leopardess and Snowpelt the dog followed Princess Angela, it was to our dismay that my route and theirs could be seen to diverge. I therefore implore Your Majesty to turn from your journey for the present, and help look for your espoused wife."

Edmund knew that, under Aslan and Aslan's justice, he could have no higher priority than the well-being of his wife, even if she did have coldly unaffectionate moods. He turned his horse Phillip around, even as Phillip was remarking, "Sultan is a good steed for night travel: very careful about his footing. If the Princess-Consort felt the need to sally forth in the dark, she at least chose the right horse for it." Soon Edmund and Yarkisoth were on their way to find the place where Vesta and Snowpelt had first noticeably veered away from Edmund's course; from there, they would overtake the leopardess and the terrier, and there would be _four_ talking animals and a King searching for the missing Angela.
Click to expand...

(ooc sorry but I cant think of something good...errr plus im talking to Mello:rolleyes:)
 
OOC: If you can do any good with Mello, I'll be the first to agree that this is more valuable than furthering a roleplay thread. As for what to do when you DO have time for this roleplay--are you sure you can't think of _anything_ good? How about showing some interest in whether your brother Peter, and Horatius, live or die after fighting a Manticore?
 
Copperfox said:
OOC: If you can do any good with Mello, I'll be the first to agree that this is more valuable than furthering a roleplay thread. As for what to do when you DO have time for this roleplay--are you sure you can't think of _anything_ good? How about showing some interest in whether your brother Peter, and Horatius, live or die after fighting a Manticore?
Click to expand...

ooc lol, well yeah thatd work but you see usually in fight scenes I do sort of a mental/emotional take on the scene rather than just the fighting, Idk maybe I need someone to be about to die or something....
 
After Ebony had rushed toward the scene, Lucy and she were in battle with the ogres. But Lucy could not recall what happened, everything was going so fast. After the battle seemed to end she saw three ogres laying at the feet of her horse. It was almost as if she had woken from a dream. This had never happened to her before, but yet there was something familiar about it, almost like a trance.

She saw Peter and Horatius bleeding. She went for her flask and ran toward Horatius first. As she dropped the liquid in his mouth, she saw everything as if it were about to become still. Peter was walking slowly toward her...as he did she heard a whizzing noise from the trees.

Immediatly she jumped toward him catching an arrow with her shoulder, and screaming in pain afterwards. No one had see the shooter.
 
>im gonna change a lil something here<

As Peter was about to give her the cordial, Lucy stopped him.
"No," she said, "it needs to be done. I'll be fine."
She took the cordial away from him, after she insisted he'd use some, and gave two drops to Ebony who had been badly injured.
"Poor dumb horse, did you have to charge like that?"
"Well did you have to intercept that arrow? And what is up with you not accepting your own cordial."
"ok touche`," she said, and never answered her question.
 
OOC : Ok, Copperfox, you really mind about the refuse of Edmund's kiss, it's ok ... I don't care. But please don't insist, anymore, I understood :)

--------------------------------------------

When Angela turned back, she saw a little white creature, it wasn't ungly, but not beautiful, Sultan wasn't saying anything, he was afraid of the white thing he had in front of him.
"I'm sorry to disturb you, but what are you ??" asked Sultan carefuly
"Hum, I asked you who you two were, I didn't ask you to aske ME who I was." responded the stranger
When he looked at Angela, he kneeled in front of her
"Oh in the name of the White Witch, you're here !!"
"Hum, sorry, but the White Witch doesn't reign anymore, the two daughters of Eve, and the two sons of Adma are the right Queens and Kings now ..." said Sultan, he was laughing now
"Huh ?? We don't know a lot about the overland ... But I can't believe you here" he said to Angela
"Me ???"
"Don't you know what you have promised ??"asked the white thing
 
hey everyone, tell me if I make some mistakes, I wasn't there since the begining, and tell me if you want me to make some changes :)
 
When Adilia came to where the ogers had been she took in the scene quickly then walked over to Lucy and asked her if there was anything she could do for her.
 
"What have I promised ??" asked Angela"I never saw you before, I've never been here !!"
"Well your Makesty, you have promised tocome back"ansewered the white creature
"Hey !! How do you know she's a royal person ? And what are you talking about ??" said Sultan, he really wanted to get out of here.
"But my queen, don't you remember ??"
"Remember what ??" asked Angela again.

"Milion years ago, we had a Queen, she was the greatest queen of the Underland, unhappily, she left to go to the overworld, for reasons nobody knew, but people thought she wanted to invade the unknown countries ... But she promised to come back one day, and to reign again . Since she left, we've been the unhappiest land in the world. We were waiting for you." he said.
"Me ?? I already told you I've never been here, and I'm not that old !!!"
"Well the legend, since it's just a legend, but we find some drawings, on the walls of our land, and apparently it said that our queen would come back, with a dear friend, and would help us to become the happy people we used to be."
"But how do you know she's the one ?? Why couldn't it be someone else ??" asked the talking horse.
"Well, no stranger never comes here, and you look like those drawings ... Come I'll show you"
They followed him
"What if it was just a trap ?" whispered Sultan to Angela
"Calm down, what's the poblem ?? We're already in trouble, what could be worst ??"said the Princess-consort.
"It's here, have a look" said the "guide"
"Oh my gosh, in the name of Aslan, this really looks like you !!"said Sultan louder than he used to talk since he arrived in this strange land.
"You're right ..." said angela surprised.
She was thinking about something. Then she asked the stranger if she could talk o her dear friend for a minut, he agreed.
"I have an idea"she whispered
"What ??!"
"Shhhh !! Ok, if I'm their Queen, they have to obey me right ??
"Right." So we will ask them to bring us to the (direction where the Pevensies are, which one is it ?? North, West, East o South ?? :confused:) then we'll thank them and we'll go"
"But he said you were supposed to reign and to make them happy for ever"
"I know, that's why I'll just go to see my husband, and we'll tell them we'll take care of them once we finished or task"

She turned back to the white thing
"Ok, you can bring us to my people, I can't wait to see you all" and they started walking, Angela on Sultan's back.
"Ok, you decide, but don't do anything stupi, you've already done too much"said the horse quietly
"Hey !! I already asked you to not talk to me this way"

she turned back to the white thing
"Ok, you can bring us to my people, I can't wait to see you all."
And they started walking, Angela on sultan's back.

OOC : Please, I know it's long but read my texts, I don't make them for nothing :)
 
One more for you, Powl

Then you can control Edmund's actions for yourself when you meet him.

=============================

"I know she went this way, sire, and the scent is very fresh," said Snowpelt in his cute terrier fashion.

"No tracks of anything but Sultan so far," added Vesta the Leopardess.

"Do you want me to go aloft and look now?" said Yarkisoth the hawk.

"Not yet," replied Edmund. "It's too dark to be sure you'd find anything."

"I think I hear some kind of sound ahead," remarked the horse Phillip. "Can't tell what it is yet."
 
OOC: ok, I'll control him, thanks Copperfox for your help, too bad you "leave us", come back sometimes :)
 
The dust from the battle began to settle, and Cor climbed down from the cliffside behind Redclaw. Windchaser greeted them at the bottom of the cliff and Cor rode on his back over to where the others had gathered. Immediately when he arrived where the others were standing he was greeted by Aravis, who grabbed him and held him tightly.

"Oh my love, I have missed you so much." said Aravis

"As have I" said Cor

"What has happened to Lucy?" he suddenly asked noticing that she was holding her shoulder

"She was hit by an arrow while protecting Peter. We don't know where it came from though. No-one saw anyone shoot it." said Aravis

Redclaw sniffed the air "I smell something. It's not a human, a beast, or an ogre, it's something different." Redclaw then took off like a bolt of lightning running as fast as he could towards a thick cluster of trees. As he approached one of the trees he paused for less than a second before bounding from the ground onto one of the lower limbs. He then made his way up into the trees and all of a sudden the group heard a loud scream coming from the trees. Redclaw suddenly emerged carrying a black dwarf by the collar of his mail shirt much like a cat would carry a kitten. Redclaw walked over to the group and dropped the dwarf down on the ground. Cor walked over to him and drew his sword and held it out at the dwarf.

"Who are you, and what are you doing here?" said Cor with anger in his voice

"I am Gallibrik, one of Queen Jadis' top soldiers!" said the dwarf

"Jadis? She was defeated over twenty years ago. Why do you still claim to be a part of her army?" Cor asked the dwarf

"Our Lady Jadis is preparing for a return, but before she can come back, we have to kill those horrid kings and queens. That's why we enlisted the help of those brutish ogres." said the dwarf who was snickering at the group
 
this rp is officially done. sorry yall. if you like rp-ing with me you can join my newest one with vampires and what not. its called Lust for Purity, check it out. ;)
 
WHAT????!!!!! :eek: but I haven't started yet, you can't stop ot :( I wrote so much to got to a point, can't we make just the end???? :(:(
 
Powl, Dayhawk is not a Mod. She can refuse to acknowledge posts you write here, but she can't actually stop you from writing them. Go ahead and try to play out something coherent, and I _will_ support you in it.
 
thanks, but the end I planed won't work, because I wanted Angela and Sultan to join the Pevensi, but since averyone left, what am I supposed to do, let Angela reign alone in the underworld ??? :confused::(:(
 
No, just figure out what connection the underworld may have with the pro-Jadis holdouts who have been revealed as responsible for both the Ogre attacks and the slanders against Peter. Then Edmund and Peter, controlled by EITHER you or me, can sufficiently stand for the Pevensies collectively, to achieve some conclusion.
 
humm ... I'm not sure about the ogres story, I don't really know it ... Sorry, but I'll write Angela's trip until she finds the Pevensies, and Edmund join them, and they lived happily ever after :)
 
Status
Not open for further replies.
Back
Top