The Chronicles of Narnia: The Mistaken Lords

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Starstorm Spare oom i remember the ancient kings and queens of old talking bout that place

So do I a friend of mine back at school came thru a odd way as well

Starstorm "Let them go Horman she tried to stamp down the fire with her hooves."

Jill thought "if we can get some water to take these flames out we might have a chance of escaping "
 
Hormon flew further away from the forest untill he was out of site. But suddenly two arrows struck him. He gave a loud screeching scream. He dropped Elizabeth and she fell into a lake below. Hormon looked down and saw several Centaurs shooting arrows at him. He quickly flew to his castle, with Alidia.
 
Starstrom and Jill fired there Arrows at the enemy as he walked away


Starstorm leaped over the flames and got some water off the flask of her hip and started pouring it

She called to the river god "Sir we need your help"

the river God sent water towards where they were trapped and softened the flames a little.
 
KathrynJanewayChakotay said:
Starstrom and Jill fired there Arrows at the enemy as he walked away
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ooc: Hormon is flying not, walking. He is a winged nightmarish monster. I am going to add in a new character. He will be the "action hero" of the story.

Name: Kaoden
Age: 23
Lookse: Brown hair, 6ft 4.
About: Unkown at the moment

Hormon flew into his tall dark castle. The floors were filled with dead skeletons. Cobwebs were all over the place. Hormon walked down a long spiral staircase to the dungeon. He threw Adaila into a cell and locked the door. The prison bars were made of bones. "By Nightfall", Hormon spoke with a demonic voice, "you will be eaten by my petssss. Dark creaturesss, that lussst for blood. You ssshall be beaten, ssscared, cut open, your flessh will be eaten, and your blood will be drank." He laughed evily and Walked away. Little did he know, Kaoden, a long time enemy was about to sneak into his fortress.
 
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Okay I will explain what has happend. The Pevensies' children Andrew, Steven, Elizabeth, and Ruby go through the wardrobe in the proffesser's house during Susan's wedding. In Narnia they meet a girl called Jill and a Centaur called Starstorm. Then Hormon, the God of Death and Torment(who is the brother of Tash), attacks the kids. With his breath, Hormon traps the kids in a Ring of Fire. A girl called Adalia, comes to the area and tries to help the kids. But Hormon kidnaps her and Elizabeth and flies away(he has bat like wings on his back) to his castle, leaving the other kids to be killed by the spreading forest fire. Centaurs from below shoot Hormon with arrows. In the fight, Hormon accidentally drops Elizabeth into a lake. But he does manage to keep Adalia. He flies Adalia to his castle and logs her in the dungeon. Then a man in his twenties called Kaoden sneaks into the Castle of Hormon.

Meanwhile Elizabeth manages to swim out of the lake. The remaining Pevensies(and Jill and Starstorm) are trying to stamp out the fire, and escape the burning forest.

Does that help?
 
Josh said:
Okay, Im going to be the villain of the story.
Here is my bio
Name:Hormon
Age: 2,000
Looks: 9 feet tall. Body completly covered with black scales. Dressed in rags. Has glowing red eyes, and two antler like horns on his head. Also has dragon like wings.
about: He is the Calormen god of death and torment. He is the brother of Tash. His goal is to kill every good person he comes in contact with. He is creating an army to takeover the world.


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Before anyone could say anything, the sky grew dark. Hormon flew down and landed on the ground. He the shouted "I am Hormon, God of death and Torment. Feel my fire!" Fire came out of his mouth and a circle of fire surrounded the kids. For Hormon did not want to kill them instantly. He wanted to trap them and eat them one by one.
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ooc: Josh I love your character, very cool :D
 
Josh said:
Okay I will explain what has happend. The Pevensies' children Andrew, Steven, Elizabeth, and Ruby go through the wardrobe in the proffesser's house during Susan's wedding. In Narnia they meet a girl called Jill and a Centaur called Starstorm. Then Hormon, the God of Death and Torment(who is the brother of Tash), attacks the kids. With his breath, Hormon traps the kids in a Ring of Fire. A girl called Adalia, comes to the area and tries to help the kids. But Hormon kidnaps her and Elizabeth and flies away(he has bat like wings on his back) to his castle, leaving the other kids to be killed by the spreading forest fire. Centaurs from below shoot Hormon with arrows. In the fight, Hormon accidentally drops Elizabeth into a lake. But he does manage to keep Adalia. He flies Adalia to his castle and logs her in the dungeon. Then a man in his twenties called Kaoden sneaks into the Castle of Hormon.

Meanwhile Elizabeth manages to swim out of the lake. The remaining Pevensies(and Jill and Starstorm) are trying to stamp out the fire, and escape the burning forest.

Does that help?
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Steven swung around and looked at the flames that were engulfing the Narnian woods. He turned to Ruby. " STAY BY MY SIDE " He yelled. He looked towards Andrew and then turned to Jill and starstorm. " Where do we go ? " he said loudly trying to be heard over the falling trees.
 
King Of The Hallows said:
Steven swung around and looked at the flames that were engulfing the Narnian woods. He turned to Ruby. " STAY BY MY SIDE " He yelled. He looked towards Andrew and then turned to Jill and starstorm. " Where do we go ? " he said loudly trying to be heard over the falling trees.
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Starsorm tossed another bucket of water and the reiver god tossed waters on the fire stopping the burning.

"Come on what are we waiting for come to the woods the Beruna woods where i guard the passages no one comes that way. She grabbed Jill by the hand. and ran thru the break in the fire that the river god made. "

Jill "You can turst her come on guys"
 
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