The Chronicles of Narnia: The Mistaken Lords

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Adalia felt herself being pulled of the horse and then she hit the ground and tumbled for a minute than she heard Kaoden say that they needed to hide. She looked all around her but didn't see anywhere to hide then she heard Kaoden yell "Quick! LEts hid in there!". As he started to drag her away from where they had been standing she noticed that they were making there to a cave. She couldn't tell if Harmon was following them or not.
 
As Kaoden pushed her into the cave she started to run back into it. It felt as if the cave went one forever but suddnely she hit the back of it with so much force that she fell onto her back. When she sat up she felt pain in her left cheek, when she reached up to touch it she felt something wet. She finnaly figured out that it was blood. "I hit the back of the cave really hard" she thought to herself. Then out loud she said (in as quite a whisper as she could) "Kaoden are you there?"
 
Kaoden had actually fallen into a huge hole in the cave. After falling for about 5 seconds he fell into an underground lake. He swam to the surface, and looked around him. About fifty feet from him there was land(or rock from the cave). He swam to it. Once he got out of the water he looked around. He had fallen far from the upper levels of the cave, and he couldnt find a way to climb to the surface. He turned around, and saw a dark tunnel. He decided since he couldnt find his way back up he should try to go see if the tunnel could lead him out. Adalia was still shouting "Kaoden, are you there!", but Kaoden was too far down to hear her. So he entered the tunnel. He walked in total darkness for about two minutes. He lost all senese of direction quickly. But he walked into something. He put out his hand and felt what it was. He felt a handle and pulled. It was a door. He had found a door to a underground chamber in the cave. There were some torches on the walls that lit it up. The floor was filled with dead skeletons. In the center of the room was a chest. Kaoden decided to open it. Inside there was some golden coins and diamonds. Kaoden digged into the gold and uncovered a skeleton clutching a large golden staff that had a head of a dragon(at the top). Kaoden picked up the staff, and as he did it glowed. There was some mystical power in the device he held. And he was eager to know what it was.

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Hormon and his army had almost caught Kaoden and Adalia, when they jumped off their horses and ran into the cave. "Ssstop!", he told his army. He pointed a little to the side of the cave. From a fair distance he saw Starstrom, Jill, and the children running towards him. The Centaur was trying to shoot him, but did not succeed. Hormon's army started shooting at the kids. The kids were outnumbered, and from Hormon's point of view, it looked like they were fleeing for their lives into the cave. The soldiers asked Hormon if they should go after the children. "No." Hormon said laughing. "The children think they are running to sssafety when they are really running into a dark, twisssted maze filled with horrorsss, that even I would fear. They are all going to die." Hormon then traveled back to his castle. While he was eating dinner(a Narnian knight. Hormon likes to eat his prey alive so he can hear them cry in pain.) he felt something inside of him. It was like a magical force calling to him. He turned to the cave. His eyes grew wide open. He dropped every thing. And ran to his room. He turned to his wall and shouted in the tounge of the demon gods "Gathro esssar Fithro Gamar!". Suddenly the wall opened a portal. Hormon walked inside it. It lead to his hidden lair. He found himself in a dark room filled with dead bodies. Spiders, bugs, and snakes were crawling/slithering all over the place. Hormon then breathed fire on the bodies and lit a fire so he could see better. He walked down a spiral starcase(while stepping on several bugs) that led to another room. This room was filled with books of spells, crystal balls, magic mirrors, wands, etc. He had been collecting magical possesions from the dead villains of Narnia. He walked toward a mirror. "Ssshow me the ssstaff!" The mirror revealed to him Kaoden, in the chamber in the cave, holding the golden staff. "Ssso it has been found! That is why it is calling to me. The ssstaff belonged to one of my great ancessstors, Hathgrond. An evil god who created this ssstaff to dessstroy and takeover Narnia, and every other world. The ssstaff was powerful, and with it Hathgrond tookover Narnia, and ssseveral other worlds. But then that accursssed lion Assslan killed him! And he hid the ssstaff. Now that it has been found, I mussst have it!! With it I can rule every world. I will ssstart with Narnia, then I will dessstroy the earth which these childisssh bratsss came from! But first I mussst kill Kaoden. Kaoden is a ssskilled warrior who has been able to ssslay the living. But can he ssslay the dead?" He turned to the mirror and looked at the skeletons, and with a spell to bring them alive he shouted "Unradie dramui sssathronama, esta rithrfista!" The skeletons came to live. Hormon then whispered "Eat his flesssh!"
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Kaoden was still examining the staff when he heard movement. He turned around. The skeletons had stood up, and they were walking toward him.
 
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Josh said:
Kaoden had actually fallen into a huge hole in the cave. After falling for about 5 seconds he fell into an underground lake. He swam to the surface, and looked around him. About fifty feet from him there was land(or rock from the cave). He swam to it. Once he got out of the water he looked around. He had fallen far from the upper levels of the cave, and he couldnt find a way to climb to the surface. He turned around, and saw a dark tunnel. He decided since he couldnt find his way back up he should try to go see if the tunnel could lead him out. Adalia was still shouting "Kaoden, are you there!", but Kaoden was too far down to hear her. So he entered the tunnel. He walked in total darkness for about two minutes. He lost all senese of direction quickly. But he walked into something. He put out his hand and felt what it was. He felt a handle and pulled. It was a door. He had found a door to a underground chamber in the cave. There were some torches on the walls that lit it up. The floor was filled with dead skeletons. In the center of the room was a chest. Kaoden decided to open it. Inside there was some golden coins and diamonds. Kaoden digged into the gold and uncovered a skeleton clutching a large golden staff that had a head of a dragon(at the top). Kaoden picked up the staff, and as he did it glowed. There was some mystical power in the device he held. And he was eager to know what it was.

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Hormon and his army had almost caught Kaoden and Adalia, when they jumped off their horses and ran into the cave. "Stop!", he told his army. He pointed a little to the side of the cave. From a fair distance he saw Starstrom, Jill, and the children running towards him. The Centaur was trying to shoot him, but did not succeed. Hormon's army started shooting at the kids. The kids were outnumbered, and from Hormon's point of view, it looked like they were fleeing for their lives into the cave. The soldiers asked Hormon if they should go after the children. "No." Hormon said laughing. "The children think they are running to safety when they are really running into a dark, twisted maze filled with horrors, that even I would fear. They are all going to die." Hormon then traveled back to his castle. While he was eating dinner(a Narnian knight. Hormon likes to eat his prey alive so he can hear them cry in pain.) he felt something inside of him. It was like a magical force calling to him. He turned to the cave. His eyes grew wide open. He dropped every thing. And ran to his room. He turned to his wall and shouted in the tounge of the demon gods "Gathro esar Fithro Gamar!". Suddenly the wall opened a portal. Hormon walked inside it. It lead to his hidden lair. He found himself in a dark room filled with dead bodies. Spiders, bugs, and snakes were crawling/slithering all over the place. Hormon then breathed fire on the bodies and lit a fire so he could see better. He walked down a spiral starcase(while stepping on several bugs) that led to another room. This room was filled with books of spells, crystal balls, magic mirrors, wands, etc. He had been collecting magical possesions from the dead villains of Narnia. He walked toward a mirror. "Show me the staff!" The mirror revealed to him Kaoden, in the chamber in the cave, holding the golden staff. "So it has been found! That is why it is calling to me. The staff belonged to one of my great ancestors, Hathgrond. An evil god who created this staff to destroy and takeover Narnia, and every other world. The staff was powerful, and with it Hathgrond tookover Narnia, and several other worlds. But then that accursed lion Aslan killed him! And he hid the staff. Now that it has been found, I must have it!! With it I can rule every world. I will start with Narnia, then I will destroy the earth which these childish brats came from! But first I must kill Kaoden. Kaoden is a skilled warrior who has been able to slay the living. But can he slay the dead?" He turned to the mirror and looked at the skeletons, and with a spell to bring them alive he shouted "Unradie dramui sathronama, esta rithrfista!" The skeletons came to live. Hormon then whispered "Eat his flesh!"
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Kaoden was still examining the staff when he heard movement. He turned around. The skeletons had stood up, and they were walking toward him.
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ooc- WOAH...thats awsome :D:p
 
Adalia was walking through the cave when she heard some one come in. She drew her dagger and yelled "Who are you?" she was scared that she would hear Hormons voice and then be taken back to his castle.
 
Steven and the others, now loking for Adalia came upon a very dark and dismal looking castle. It was the most horifying thing Steven had ever seen. " Is she in there Starstorm " He asked her. He walked a little further and ran up onto the front steps. Suddenly he heard a large Lions roar and his back felt a little heavy. He looked back and there was a pouch of arrows hsitting on his back and a bow in his hand. " WOAH " he said almost dropping the bow. " How did... " buthe now saw the others had weapons to. His side also felt a little heavy and found a sword hanging on a strap. He put an arrow in his bow and shot towards a small window down around what seemed to be a dungen. He looked at the others and slid into the window. He looked around him and he was in a dark hallway. Off into another room he heard voices. Quickly placing an arrow in his bow he lifted it and walked forward. Keeping it placed at the door. Suddenly a bat like creature appeared at he door and saw him. It gave a screech and flew towards him savegly. Stevens eyes widened and he let go of the arrow. It flew right into the bats chest and it gave a little screech and fell to the ground...dead
 
starstorm looked I think she miight be lets go in there but stay close arrow to the string.

Starstorm walked in followed by jill and the others. They looked around. Starstorm held her sword out and handed jill a torch to light there way.
 
oh can i be some monster who lives in the cave but im not like evil so plz dont kill me and con somone fill me in a bit cas i cba to read 9 pages of posts if you dont mind/???
 
iminlovewithedwardcullen said:
oh can i be some monster who lives in the cave but im not like evil so plz dont kill me and con somone fill me in a bit cas i cba to read 9 pages of posts if you dont mind/???
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Sure you can be a monster in the cave. And you do need explaining.

Here is a summary of what has happened so far:
The Pevensies' children Andrew, Steven, Elizabeth, and Ruby go through the wardrobe in the proffesser's house during Susan's wedding. In Narnia they meet a girl called Jill and a Centaur called Starstorm. Then Hormon, the demon God of Death and Torment(who is the brother of Tash), attacks the kids. With his breath, Hormon traps the kids in a Ring of Fire. A girl called Adalia, comes to the area and tries to help the kids. But Hormon kidnaps her and Elizabeth and flies away(he has bat like wings on his back) to his castle, leaving the other kids to be killed by the spreading forest fire. Centaurs from below shoot Hormon with arrows. In the fight, Hormon accidentally drops Elizabeth into a lake. But he does manage to keep Adalia. He flies Adalia to his castle and logs her in the dungeon. Hormon tells Adalia that his monsters will eat her alive for dinner. Then a man in his twenties called Kaoden sneaks into the Castle of Hormon.

Meanwhile Elizabeth manages to swim out of the lake, and join the other kids. The Pevensies(and Jill and Starstorm) manage to stamp out the fire(that Hormon caused), and escape the burning forest. They then realize they cant' find a way to get home, so they decide to look for Adalia to see if she could help them. So the Pevensies children, Jill, and Starstorm travel to Hormon's castle to save Adalia.

While this is happening, Adalia manages to escape the dungeon(by pulling away loose stones in the wall. She tries to run out of the castle, when she is confronted by Hormon. Before Hormon can kill her, Kaoden comes and battles Hormon with his sword. Kaoden soon realizes that he cant kill Hormon in his own strenghth, so he and Adalia flee the castle. Kaoden and Adalia get on Kaoden's horse and ride away. Hormon sends his demonic army after them. During the chase Kaoden and Adalia fall off the horse. Kaoden then drags Adalia into a cave where he thinks they could hide. In the dark cave Kaoden and Adalia get sepparated by accident, when Kaoden falls into a huge hole that leads to lower levels of the cave. In an attempt to get back to Adalia, Kaoden travels through a dark tunnel(inside the cave) that leads to a seceret chamber. In the chamber he finds lots of treasure, and dead skeletons. But what he notices most is a golden staff with a dragonlike head on its tip. He picks up the staff and it glows. Hormon had a vision of Kaoden finding the staff. Hormon goes to his secret lair in his castle(which is filled with snakes, spiders, and bugs) and looks through a magic mirror to see if his vision of Kaoden finding the staff was true. When it turns out to be true, Hormon creates a spell which brings all of the skeletons to life(to kill and eat Kaoden). Hormon wants the staff, because the staff has the power to takeover Narnia and every other world. Hormon claims once he has the staff he will takeover Narnia, and destroy the Earth(our planet!).

Little does Hormon know, the Pevensies are sneaking into his castle.
 
Steven put another arrow into his bow. He turned the corner and saw Hormon talking to one of his guards. He gasped. " I hope he didnt hear me " he said to himself. He walked among the shadows of the room and stopped at a pillar and hid behind it. " I got a clear shot but shouldnt risk it " He wispered.
 
King Of The Hallows said:
Steven put another arrow into his bow. He turned the corner and saw Hormon talking to one of his guards. He gasped. " I hope he didnt hear me " he said to himself. He walked among the shadows of the room and stopped at a pillar and hid behind it. " I got a clear shot but shouldnt risk it " He wispered.
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"No you ssshouldn't" said Hormon. He walked toward Steven. "I am more powerful than you think. Do you really think I can't hear you? You ssshould have learned from my visssit in the foressst, that I am not one to interfere with!" Hormon grabed Steven by the neck and lifted him up. "Intrudersss mussst pay a price. Torture!" He pulled Steven closer so they were face to face. "Why don't I jussst pluck out your eyesss, and eat them. Than have your blind ssself whipped, beaten, burned, and cut up by my ssservants. Than I ssshal eat your juicy, bloody, flesssh."
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Meanwhile in the cave Kaoden was surrounded by the skeletons who were walking towards him to eat him. They suddenly ran towards him and pounced on him. They started biteing his skin, ripping his flesh out. Kaoden cried in pain. "ADALIA! ADALIA HELP!" Kaoden kicked one of the skeleton's head, causing it to fall off and role across the floor. He then used his sword to slash at the other skeletons, and they eventually fell apart. His legs were badly injured so he couldnt walk. He crawled toward the exit. But before he could get out, the skeletons put themselves back together. They ran towards him and grabbed him. Some skeletons held him the the ground while others began biting into his skin. Kaoden cried in pain. The skeletons kicked his sword out of the way. He tried to get the skeleons off of him, but he was weak and there were too many. He then picked up a small golden idol next to him and used it to wack the skeletons. He kocked them to pieces again. He crawled toward the exit. But one skeleton pulled a lever that caused the stone door to seal shut, trapping Kaoden in with the skeletons. The skeletons then jumped on Kaoden again. Kaoden was too weak to fight back. And the skeletons started eating him. He didnt try to stop it. There seemed to be no hope. In his heart he knew he was going to die.
 
Josh said:
"No you ssshouldn't" said Hormon. He walked toward Steven. "I am more powerful than you think. Do you really think I can't hear you? You ssshould have learned from my visssit in the foressst, that I am not one to interfere with!" Hormon grabed Steven by the neck and lifted him up. "Intrudersss mussst pay a price. Torture!" He pulled Steven closer so they were face to face. "Why don't I jussst pluck out your eyesss, and eat them. Than have your blind ssself whipped, beaten, burned, and cut up by my ssservants. Than I ssshal eat your juicy, bloody, flesssh."
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Meanwhile in the cave Kaoden was surrounded by the skeletons who were walking towards him to eat him. They suddenly ran towards him and pounced on him. They started biteing his skin, ripping his flesh out. Kaoden cried in pain. "ADALIA! ADALIA HELP!" Kaoden kicked one of the skeleton's head, causing it to fall off and role across the floor. He then used his sword to slash at the other skeletons, and they eventually fell apart. His legs were badly injured so he couldnt walk. He crawled toward the exit. But before he could get out, the skeletons put themselves back together. They ran towards him and grabbed him. Some skeletons held him the the ground while others began biting into his skin. Kaoden cried in pain. The skeletons kicked his sword out of the way. He tried to get the skeleons off of him, but he was weak and there were too many. He then picked up a small golden idol next to him and used it to wack the skeletons. He kocked them to pieces again. He crawled toward the exit. But one skeleton pulled a lever that caused the stone door to seal shut, trapping Kaoden in with the skeletons. The skeletons then jumped on Kaoden again. Kaoden was too weak to fight back. And the skeletons started eating him. He didnt try to stop it. There seemed to be no hope. In his heart he knew he was going to die.
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Steven coughed and chocked. He couldnt get lose of Hormon. He kicked at his stomach but it didnt do anything. Then he reached for one of the arrows and stabbed Hormon in the neck.
 
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