The Chronicles of Narnia: The Mistaken Lords

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iminlovewithedwardcullen said:
OCC:OHHH can i come save Kaoden??

Ill be my monster who lives in the cave and i can fit in now if no one minds, or do you wanna die??
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OOC: Sure you can save me. I wasn't planning on killing my character.

Kaoden screamed as the skeletons chewed on his flesh. He looked for any hope. Then he remembered, the staff. It was only three feet from him. He crawled toward it, as the skeletons tried to pull him back. He was loosing a lot of blood. In a matter of seconds he would pass out. He grabbed the staff, and it glowed. He aimed teh staff toward the skeletons. A golden beam shot out from the staff and disenegrated all of the skeletons, killing them permanently. Kaoden then heard thumping coming from the other side of the door. But before he could do anything, he passed out.
 
OCC: Give me a sec to think of a name

OCC: ok no name you can gve me one prtend i never had one

IC: She heard the comotion through the second wall and went to investigate. She pushed at the wall and it disintergrated at her touch. Before her wwas a (ARE YU A BOY OR MAN?) lying face down on the ground. He was holding a staff and there were remnanence of bones all around him.

She approached him cautiosly, once she was within three feet she crouched down and touched the (BOY?MAN?) on the face, he didnt move, she pulled at his eyelids with her long pale fingers and revealed his eye, it was unfocused, he was out cold.

She didn't know what to do at first but then she made up her mind to return him to her cave, she knew it couldn't be gd for him out hear alone, this place was filled with all manner of horid creatures. She picked him up and held him like a child in her arms, carrying him slowly she made her way back to her caven.
 
King Of The Hallows said:
Steven coughed and chocked. He couldnt get lose of Hormon. He kicked at his stomach but it didnt do anything. Then he reached for one of the arrows and stabbed Hormon in the neck.
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"FOOL!" Hormon screamed. "Do you really think a mere arrow could ssstop me! You will have to do much better than that!" He then gripped Steven harder. Hormon's claws dug into Steven's skin, causing him to bleed. "Painful isssn't it? I love it when my victumsss cry in pain. It bringsss me pleasssure. It makesss me feel powerful, controlling othersss." Hormon then through Steven against the wall, knocking him out. He turned to a gaurd. "Tie the boy up in the torture chamber. When he awakesss, I wan't you to whip him for asss long ass you can. But don't kill him. I wan't him to sssuffer, not die. As for the rest of the children, lock them up with the poisssonousss, bloodsssucking, ssserpantsss." So the gaurds took Steven away, and they locked the others in a large room filled with poisounus snakes that bite with Venom that kills slowly and painfully.
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Kaoden awoke to find himself resting in a cavern. He saw right next to him a huge monster. He crawled toward his staff(so he could use it to kill the beast), but the giant creature noticed him, and stopped him.

ooc: Kaoden is not a boy. He is a young man in his early twenties. Im thinking 20-24.
 
OCC:THANKS

IC: She took hold of the man by the waist and picked him off his feet, she was about 3 foot taller than him so this wasnt hard.

She looked down at him with her huge pale eyes. He was struggling hard but she didnt let go. instead she spoke in a raspy voice, as she hadnt had the need to speak for quite some time, "Stop struggling, I wont hurt you."
 
iminlovewithedwardcullen said:
OCC:THANKS

She looked down at him with her huge pale eyes. He was struggling hard but she didnt let go. instead she spoke in a raspy voice, as she hadnt had the need to speak for quite some time, "Stop struggling, I wont hurt you."
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"Who are you? What are you? And what do you wan't. Where is Adalia?"
 
Josh said:
"FOOL!" Hormon screamed. "Do you really think a mere arrow could ssstop me! You will have to do much better than that!" He then gripped Steven harder. Hormon's claws dug into Steven's skin, causing him to bleed. "Painful isssn't it? I love it when my victumsss cry in pain. It bringsss me pleasssure. It makesss me feel powerful, controlling othersss." Hormon then through Steven against the wall, knocking him out. He turned to a gaurd. "Tie the boy up in the torture chamber. When he awakesss, I wan't you to whip him for asss long ass you can. But don't kill him. I wan't him to sssuffer, not die. As for the rest of the children, lock them up with the poisssonousss, bloodsssucking, ssserpantsss." So the gaurds took Steven away, and they locked the others in a large room filled with poisounus snakes that bite with Venom that kills slowly and painfully.
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Kaoden awoke to find himself resting in a cavern. He saw right next to him a huge monster. He crawled toward his staff(so he could use it to kill the beast), but the giant creature noticed him, and stopped him.

ooc: Kaoden is not a boy. He is a young man in his early twenties. Im thinking 20-24.
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The last thing Steven heard was Elizabeth screaming. Then he was knocked out. He awoken a great while after. He got up and looked around. He was surrounded by four blood stained walls. " This is not the land of Narnia my father has told me about " He said glancing around, horrified. He still had his bow & Arrows on him. " They must have forgotten to take it off of me " He grabbed and arrow and quickly put it in the bow when he heard the stone door open. There stood a man dressed in all black, one of the men you would see chopping the head off someone in midevil times. Steven went to shoot but missed and the man came at him. Steven took his bow and smacked it over the Guards head, knocking him out. Steven grabbed the keys in the guards waist pocket and locked him in the torture room. Putting the keys around his belt he walked cautiously down the hall to look for his siblings. He put another arrow in the bow and aimed for the entrance up ahead of him.
 
"Who I am i dont think anyone is sure, what I am is the same and I'm sorry but i don't know your friend," she answered. "If I put you down will you not try to kill me, ill help you find your firend if you need but the only reason your hear is because i had to rescue you."
 
King Of The Hallows said:
Steven took his bow and smacked it over the Guards head, knocking him out. Steven grabbed the keys in the guards waist pocket and locked him in the torture room. Putting the keys around his belt he walked cautiously down the hall to look for his siblings. He put another arrow in the bow and aimed for the entrance up ahead of him.
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But before Steven could escape Hormon came from out of nowhere, and blocked Steven. Hormon laughed. "My gaurdsss may have been foolisssh enough to have let you essscape, but you can't get past me!" Two gaurds came behind Steven. They knocked him to the ground and took his arrows. They then dragged him back into the torture chamber. They then ripped off his shirt. Hormon came into the room. "Whip him!" The gaurds whipped him brutally. "Harder!" Hormon yelled. The gaurds whipped him with all of their might. "MAKE HIM SSSCREAM!" They lashed Steven again. "MAKE HIM BLEED!" They lashed even harder, tearing Steven's skin. "MAKE HIM CRY IN PAIN!" Hormon yelled. He then laughed in a demonic way. But before the gaurds could whip Steven again, Hormon yelled "SSSTOP! If you whip him again he will die. For now jussst tie him up, and lock him in the room. We can't have him essscape again, can we?" The gaurds chained him to the wall. And left the room. Hormon took the keys, and turned to Steven. "Don't worry SSSTeven. We will be back, to make your life a living hell!" He shut and locked the door, laughing as he walked to his room. Hormon walked up the staircase. He came to a door and opened it. Inside there was a girl about the age of nineteen tied up. She was about five foot nine. She had black hair that went down to her waist. She had blue eyes that matched her blue dress. She was very beautiful. "Hello Midrial(pronounced Mid-dry-El). Itsss been ssso long sssince Ive ssseen you." Midrial looked spitefully at Hormon. "What do you wan't this time. Do you want to torture me, or beat me brutally! Why can't you just kill me and get it over with!" Hormon laughed. "I'm not going to kill you yet. I wan't you to die in front of Kaoden. I want him to sssee you die, to make him feel missserable." At the mention of Kaoden, Midrial cried. Hormon smiled. Kaoden and Midrial had fallen in love with each other. And he wanted both Kaoden and Midrial to feel the pain of being separated. Hormon then spoke again. "You know Kaoden tried to sssave you yesssterday? But he couldn't. He wasss too weak for a god like me. Besidesss he ended up ressscue another one of my victumsss. A girl called Adalia." Hormon then walked out of the room and locked the door, leaving Midrial to think sad thoughts about Kaoden.
 
Josh said:
But before Steven could escape Hormon came from out of nowhere, and blocked Steven. Hormon laughed. "My gaurdsss may have been foolisssh enough to have let you essscape, but you can't get past me!" Two gaurds came behind Steven. They knocked him to the ground and took his arrows. They then dragged him back into the torture chamber. They then ripped off his shirt. Hormon came into the room. "Whip him!" The gaurds whipped him brutally. "Harder!" Hormon yelled. The gaurds whipped him with all of their might. "MAKE HIM SSSCREAM!" They lashed Steven again. "MAKE HIM BLEED!" They lashed even harder, tearing Steven's skin. "MAKE HIM CRY IN PAIN!" Hormon yelled. He then laughed in a demonic way. But before the gaurds could whip Steven again, Hormon yelled "SSSTOP! If you whip him again he will die. For now jussst tie him up, and lock him in the room. We can't have him essscape again, can we?" The gaurds chained him to the wall. And left the room. Hormon took the keys, and turned to Steven. "Don't worry SSSTeven. We will be back, to make your life a living hell!" He shut and locked the door, laughing as he walked to his room. Hormon walked up the staircase. He came to a door and opened it. Inside there was a girl about the age of nineteen tied up. She was about five foot nine. She had black hair that went down to her waist. She had blue eyes that matched her blue dress. She was very beautiful. "Hello Midrial(pronounced Mid-dry-El). Itsss been ssso long sssince Ive ssseen you." Midrial looked spitefully at Hormon. "What do you wan't this time. Do you want to torture me, or beat me brutally! Why can't you just kill me and get it over with!" Hormon laughed. "I'm not going to kill you yet. I wan't you to die in front of Kaoden. I want him to sssee you die, to make him feel missserable." At the mention of Kaoden, Midrial cried. Hormon smiled. Kaoden and Midrial had fallen in love with each other. And he wanted both Kaoden and Midrial to feel the pain of being separated. Hormon then spoke again. "You know Kaoden tried to sssave you yesssterday? But he couldn't. He wasss too weak for a god like me. Besidesss he ended up ressscue another one of my victumsss. A girl called Adalia." Hormon then walked out of the room and locked the door, leaving Midrial to think sad thoughts about Kaoden.
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Steven was an inch away from death. Tied up to the pillar his head hung down and blood dripped from his nose and stained his pants. He was covered in whip marks. He was now ready to give up. " I hope he doesnt do this to the ohers " he thought sadly. But suddenly a light warm breeze fell upon the room. Next thing he knew a great flash of light filled the room and when it cleared, a great, magestic LION stood infront of him. Steven was frightened but felt happy at the same time. The lion opened his mouth and...spoke!

" Even in the dark you can always find a light " He said magesticly. Steven looked up at the lion. He was now right infront of Steven and blew in his face. The whip marks and cuts went away and the rips in his shirt were mended. " I have just healed you son of adam, I ...the great lion...Aslan " Steven felt alot better and then the rope tied around him vanished and he was free. He stood infront of the Great Lion. " Thank you sir " He said bowing.
 
iminlovewithedwardcullen said:
"Who I am i dont think anyone is sure, what I am is the same and I'm sorry but i don't know your friend," she answered. "If I put you down will you not try to kill me, ill help you find your firend if you need but the only reason your hear is because i had to rescue you."
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"Sorry" said Kaoden. "I was just afraid you might have been a servant to Hormon, the demonic god of death and Torment. Hormon kidnapped the woman I love, Midrial. And he attacked several children in a forest. One of them is Adalia, the girl I'm looking for in this cave. The only way I know you can help me is if you can find a way to get to the upper levels of the cave. That way I can find Adalia, and get out. Once I'm free I will go to Hormon's castle and try to save Midrial." Kaoden picked up the staff. "By the way, do you know what this is?"

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Hormon was watching Kaoden from his Magic Mirror. "Ssso he sssurived my ssskeletons! How could he! He mussst have usssed the ssstaff! He mussst know itsss power! Well, I ssshal ssstop him before he can dessstroy me. Itsss time to die Kaoden! But if you mussst go, go with a bang." He then spoke words to create a spell to cause an avalanche in the cave.
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Before the monster could talk to Kaoden, Stactights started falling from the roof of the cave. The ground trembled. Kaoden shouted "We have to get out of here! The caveren is falling apart!"
 
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She studided the staff in the mans hand, she had seen it before but had no idea where it came from or what it did. "no sorry," she replied, "but i can help you with getting to the upper levels." She threw some more wood onto her fire so the man could see her properly and showed him her wings that sprouted from her shoulder. they were like bats wings, leathery and huge. They were a pale white colour like her skin.
"If you dont mind flying in my arms then I could carry you, i know all the passageways out of hear. I could help."
 
iminlovewithedwardcullen said:
"but i can help you with getting to the upper levels." "If you dont mind flying in my arms then I could carry you, i know all the passageways out of hear. I could help."
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"Well hurry! The lower levels of the cave are falling apart!"

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For hours Midrial had been trying to untie the ropes that bound her. She wasnt making much progrees. Next to the chair she was tied to was a little table with a burning candle on it. Midrial then thought to use the candle to burn off the ropes. She was able to slightly move the chair towards it. She used her hands(which were tied behind the back of the chair), to grab the candle. She had to be careful to burn the ropes and not herself. She managed to catch one of the ropes on fire, and the rope snapped. She quickly untied the rest of herself. She was free! She ran to the door to open it, but it was locked. "AGGGH!" Midrial yelled. She just was able to untie herself only to find out that the door was locked. She then thought if she could burn the ropes with a flame, she could burn the wooden door with one. So she took the candle and used it to set the door on fire. It didnt take long for the door to be bursting in flames. In a matter of minutes the door fell apart, and the firey wood crumbled onto the stone floor. Midrial ran out the door and down the stairs. She then ran into a boy. It was Steven.
 
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She took him up in her arms very carefully making sure she had one hand free to help her out then she spread her wings and flew upwards straight into the solid wall of the celing.

However before she reached it it slid open of its own accord and shs passed through easily.

Then they traveled along a passage and up another steep slope, suddenyl a piecs of rock dropped from above and hearly crushed her.

She swerved wildly and it missed her but she nearlt dropped the man she was holding. She took up a slightly tighter grip and flew onwards faster and faster swerving rocks and debry falling from abover until she came to the highest level and saw light ahead.
 
When they got to the surface Kaoden finnally got breather. "Thanks. But Adalia is still in the cave. She may be dead. I don't know a thing about her other than her name, but could you go back into the cave and try to save her as well?"
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Hormon screamed with furry from his seceret fortress. "IMPOSSSSIBLE! You evaded my army, sssurvived the fall in the cave and didnt get lossst, you avoided being eaten by the ssskeletonsss, and you sssurvied a cave inn! WHY CAN"T YOU JUSSST DIE!!! When all hope is lossst for you, you get ressscued by a cave freak!" Hormon thought for a moment. "I mussst kill Kaoden. Itsss time to think of another plan!"
 
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