The Virtual Narnia

~JadisTheWhiteWitch~ said:
*Demon seen Jadis was getting out numbered and ran to her and picked her up on his back as he ran pass her and spoke quietly for only Jadis to hear*"we must fall back to where your second command is"*Jadis noded and yelled for all her troops to hear*"FALL BACK"*Jadis's army heard their Queen's command and killed the last of what they were fighting and fell back as Jadis commanded*
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star followed the rest of Jadis's army, falling back as she was commanded.
 
Efrinta smiled evilly and her army advanced. A reached cry of pain and anguish rang out louder than before as the bowmen's arrows found their marks in the backs of the Narnians. Edmund spun around just in time to avoid a lethal blow from Efrinta’s sward. A clash of metal echoed as their swards collided.
“ Give it up Son of Adam for you cannot win against my forces!”
“ I would not be so sure.” Again and again the metal clashed against metal as the two battled to the death.
 
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from the inside of the Cair Paravel castle by a small window Lucy and Susan sat on the sindowseil, holding eachother as tears of sorrowful deprair began poring down their cheeks. they could see a barely visible glimpse of the Great battle between good and evil as they dared to gaze out the window. despiaring sounds of battle cries acoed throughout all of Narnia as Susan and Lucy let brung thier gaze away from the window, "I can't stand it" Lucy whispered, Susan pulled her close, "try to have faith Lucy....the battles far from being over just have faith that we'll win the battle...remember Lu we've got Aslan on our side" she gave a slight smile seeming to betray the hurt and agony which showed clearly within her glossy borwn eyes.
 
The Forgiven Traitor said:
Efrinta smiled evilly and her army advanced. A reached cry of pain and anguish rang out louder than before as the bowmen's arrows found their marks in the backs of the Narnians. Edmund spun around just in time to avoid a lethal blow from Efrinta’s sward. A clash of metal echoed as their swards collided.
“ Give it up Son of Adam for you cannot win against my forces!”
“ I would not be so sure.” Again and again the metal clashed against metal as the two battled to the death.
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*Demon reared with Jadis back on his back and landed again as he ran up to a cliff and over looked the armies**Jadis put her sword away as she pulled her bow and arrows out she had black dwarf archs on either side of her and Demon**she pulled an arrow out and so did the dwarfs and places it on their bow strings and and pulled them back and arrows went flying striking Narnians and arrows kept flying from their posts*
 
~JadisTheWhiteWitch~ said:
*Demon reared with Jadis back on his back and landed again as he ran up to a cliff and over looked the armies**Jadis put her sword away as she pulled her bow and arrows out she had black dwarf archs on either side of her and Demon**she pulled an arrow out and so did the dwarfs and places it on their bow strings and and pulled them back and arrows went flying striking Narnians and arrows kept flying from their posts*
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Star stayed with the rest of Jadis's army.
a young wolf named Kania manage to dodge most of the enemy's attacks as she faught alongside Aslan.
a few of Kanias wolf friends ran up alongside Edmund and Peter, helping them fight the best they could.

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Susan and Lucy stayed at the window hearing the horrifying battles cries going on off in a faraway distance. fresh tears began runnning down Susan's pail face as thoughts of Peter and Edmund were all she and Lucy could think about. "oh, Aslan Dear Aslan please...please let them come back to us after the battle has ended..please Aslan please" Susan pleaded with the lion in a low whisper; helplessly staring out the window with fear and terror haunting her buetiful brown eyes.
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
Star stayed with the rest of Jadis's army.
a young wolf named Kania manage to dodge most of the enemy's attacks as she faught alongside Aslan.
a few of Kanias wolf friends ran up alongside Edmund and Peter, helping them fight the best they could.

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Susan and Lucy stayed at the window hearing the horrifying battles cries going on off in a faraway distance. fresh tears began runnning down Susan's pail face as thoughts of Peter and Edmund were all she and Lucy could think about. "oh, Aslan Dear Aslan please...please let them come back to us after the battle has ended..please Aslan please" Susan pleaded with the lion in a low whisper; helplessly staring out the window with fear and terror haunting her buetiful brown eyes.
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*Jadis and Demon were still ontop of the cliff with her arches still sending arrows flying hitting the enemy**Jadis placed another arrow on her bow string and aimed it at a percific target which was Peter and pulled back her string glaring and an arrow went flying toward Peter without him knowing*
 
Peter slashed through a minetuar cutting him to the ground. He turned to slay a wolf but as he did so an arrow lodged into his left shoulder. Reeling in pain he cried out in agony for this arrow was different than others…it was magical and had the power to burn and freeze whatever it struck.

Edmund hearing his brothers cry turned to run but Efrinta grabbed his arm laughing. She knew he could do nothing against her for only magic could kill her and he had no such power. Infuriated at her defiance he slashed his sward through her arm gashing it open. Shocked, startled, and a bit lost she immediately released watching her own blood drip from her arm. It had come…the one sward that could kill her. The sward that was forged in Aslan’s country was now wielded by a mere boy, yet he had the power to destroy her.

Edmund dashed across the battle field as fast as his legs would carry him to his brothers aid. Another arrow was released to strike Peter to his death but Edmund caught it with the blade of his sward deflecting it from its target and into one of her wolves. Kneeling beside him Edmund broke the end off the arrow that set buried in his brothers arm.

“Edmund, I know I am not going to make it. You must, Lu and Susan need you.”
“Don’t talk like that. It is one arrow, you will live and we will both see them again.”
 
The Forgiven Traitor said:
Peter slashed through a minetuar cutting him to the ground. He turned to slay a wolf but as he did so an arrow lodged into his left shoulder. Reeling in pain he cried out in agony for this arrow was different than others…it was magical and had the power to burn and freeze whatever it struck.

Edmund hearing his brothers cry turned to run but Efrinta grabbed his arm laughing. She knew he could do nothing against her for only magic could kill her and he had no such power. Infuriated at her defiance he slashed his sward through her arm gashing it open. Shocked, startled, and a bit lost she immediately released watching her own blood drip from her arm. It had come…the one sward that could kill her. The sward that was forged in Aslan’s country was now wielded by a mere boy, yet he had the power to destroy her.

Edmund dashed across the battle field as fast as his legs would carry him to his brothers aid. Another arrow was released to strike Peter to his death but Edmund caught it with the blade of his sward deflecting it from its target and into one of her wolves. Kneeling beside him Edmund broke the end off the arrow that set buried in his brothers arm.

“Edmund, I know I am not going to make it. You must, Lu and Susan need you.”
“Don’t talk like that. It is one arrow, you will live and we will both see them again.”
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*Jadis seen her second in command was wounded she took a crow that was sitting on her sholuder with something wraped around its leg and told it to fly to Efrinta quickly**the crow obeyed and flew off Jadis's shoulder without being seen to Efrinta**Jadis seen her crow made it to Efrinta she then looked up and held her bow and magical arrows she placed another magic arrow on her bow string and pulled back she wasn't going to lose this battle she placed her hand on the arrow and it glowed she had put a powerful magic in the arrow and release it and it struck Edmund in the back without him knowing**she spoke to herself*"I will not lose"
 
Edmund gasped in pain as the arrow lodged itself deep into his armor burning as it went, freezing the flesh surrounding it. Peter Jumped to his feet ignoring his own pain to help his brother. The forces of the witch attacked him hard wolf after wolf as he slew them one by one.
“Peter,” Edmund grabbed his brother’s arm looking deep into his eyes, “ Fight for Narnia… not for me.” Edmund gasped at the words for it hurt to even breath.
“ No! I will not leave you!”
“PETER! Listen to me.” Edmund’s eyes full of love and sorrow and pain, locked on his brother’s. “ Narnia Can’t lose both of us! The girls need you! Please go and save Narnia.” Tears brimmed in Peter’s eyes as Edmund gave a shove and pushed him away. He knew what Edmund said was true but how could he leave his brother to die in such a state. He was yanked out of his thoughts as the screams of a gargoyle came from behind him but to his luck his Narnian sward found its mark before the evil stuck him

Efrinta smiled at the note and sent the raven back to her queen. They would not lose this battle…not this time. All they had to do was finish off all the youngsters then Narnia would surly fall. She smiled seeing Edmund struggling to his feet the broken arrow jetting out of his back, as he fought weakly. She knew to live he had to die and the sward taken to her queen out of the use of Aslan’s army so she began to walk determined to be victorious.

Now with several other wounds Edmund stumbled about gasping for air still driving his sward through the enemy.
“ Did you think that you would win against us?” The cool milky voice seeped from behind him. Turning around to face her he gave a bold reply,
“ It is not over yet!” their swards collided and her strength knocked him off his feet landing on his back driving the arrow in deeper.
“ It is over! Son of Adam, It is!” she screamed brining her sward down with might of a great warrior. Edmund had strength enough to roll out of the way.
“ No! For Aslan and NARNIA!” Jumping to his feet with the last bit of strength that was left within him he brandished his sward high above his head to strike her down as a pain once more wrenched at his body. That did not deter him for he knew she feared the sward he carried. Swinging it back for the final time it found its mark in her evil black ridden heart. Instantly she fell to the ground lifeless, and dead. At that moment her host of which she bragged began to vanish one by one disappearing into the air never to return. The two armies looked on the fighting ceased for just a moment as this sight unknown to any of them reviled its self. All two hundred of them were gone in a matter of minutes and now the armies were more than even.

Edmund looked down to the source of the searing pain and now realized her sward was lodged into his stomach. Falling to his knees he closed his eyes trying to kill some of the pain. Grabbing the handle of her weapon he tried to extract it but it was no use, he had no more strength left. He opened his eyes watching friends and foe alike fall to their death or run to their victory and slay another. All sound ceased as his last breaths were gasped in pain and in a strange way victory. He smiled despite the pain and the black cloud of death that lingered over him for he knew Narnia would now be free. The prophecy had been fulfilled, they had been crowned kings and queens, and now the great host of magic unbeatable was beat and Narnia would win.
“ Aslan,” He gasped as he felt strong hands lift his head his vision was blurry but he knew to whom he looked now, “Peter, Tell them…tell them I love them…and I…I will…will…miss them.” For one last time he looked into his brothers loving face and smiled a week and feeble smile, “ Hail, High King Peter. The deliverer of Narnia.” He placed his fist over his limply beating heart and gasped, “ Free them and rule them as I know you can…and Aslan be with you brother.” His eyes slowly closed his hand falling to his side, his heart stopping for once and for all.

A cry bitter sorrow could be heard rising from the battlefield to every corner of Narnia. Peter, face to the sky, roared with pain and sorrow, his younger brother dead in he arms. Slowly standing to his feet his tears still glistening upon his cheeks anger and hate written upon his face took up his sward in one hand and that of his brother in the other. He looked towards the hill atop which the witch sat.
“ You will DIE for this!” he screamed but she could not hear him but in his heart he made an oath that evil would die before the sun had set.
 
The Forgiven Traitor said:
Edmund gasped in pain as the arrow lodged itself deep into his armor burning as it went, freezing the flesh surrounding it. Peter Jumped to his feet ignoring his own pain to help his brother. The forces of the witch attacked him hard wolf after wolf as he slew them one by one.
“Peter,” Edmund grabbed his brother’s arm looking deep into his eyes, “ Fight for Narnia… not for me.” Edmund gasped at the words for it hurt to even breath.
“ No! I will not leave you!”
“PETER! Listen to me.” Edmund’s eyes full of love and sorrow and pain, locked on his brother’s. “ Narnia Can’t lose both of us! The girls need you! Please go and save Narnia.” Tears brimmed in Peter’s eyes as Edmund gave a shove and pushed him away. He knew what Edmund said was true but how could he leave his brother to die in such a state. He was yanked out of his thoughts as the screams of a gargoyle came from behind him but to his luck his Narnian sward found its mark before the evil stuck him

Efrinta smiled at the note and sent the raven back to her queen. They would not lose this battle…not this time. All they had to do was finish off all the youngsters then Narnia would surly fall. She smiled seeing Edmund struggling to his feet the broken arrow jetting out of his back, as he fought weakly. She knew to live he had to die and the sward taken to her queen out of the use of Aslan’s army so she began to walk determined to be victorious.

Now with several other wounds Edmund stumbled about gasping for air still driving his sward through the enemy.
“ Did you think that you would win against us?” The cool milky voice seeped from behind him. Turning around to face her he gave a bold reply,
“ It is not over yet!” their swards collided and her strength knocked him off his feet landing on his back driving the arrow in deeper.
“ It is over! Son of Adam, It is!” she screamed brining her sward down with might of a great warrior. Edmund had strength enough to roll out of the way.
“ No! For Aslan and NARNIA!” Jumping to his feet with the last bit of strength that was left within him he brandished his sward high above his head to strike her down as a pain once more wrenched at his body. That did not deter him for he knew she feared the sward he carried. Swinging it back for the final time it found its mark in her evil black ridden heart. Instantly she fell to the ground lifeless, and dead. At that moment her host of which she bragged began to vanish one by one disappearing into the air never to return. The two armies looked on the fighting ceased for just a moment as this sight unknown to any of them reviled its self. All two hundred of them were gone in a matter of minutes and now the armies were more than even.

Edmund looked down to the source of the searing pain and now realized her sward was lodged into his stomach. Falling to his knees he closed his eyes trying to kill some of the pain. Grabbing the handle of her weapon he tried to extract it but it was no use, he had no more strength left. He opened his eyes watching friends and foe alike fall to their death or run to their victory and slay another. All sound ceased as his last breaths were gasped in pain and in a strange way victory. He smiled despite the pain and the black cloud of death that lingered over him for he knew Narnia would now be free. The prophecy had been fulfilled, they had been crowned kings and queens, and now the great host of magic unbeatable was beat and Narnia would win.
“ Aslan,” He gasped as he felt strong hands lift his head his vision was blurry but he knew to whom he looked now, “Peter, Tell them…tell them I love them…and I…I will…will…miss them.” For one last time he looked into his brothers loving face and smiled a week and feeble smile, “ Hail, High King Peter. The deliverer of Narnia.” He placed his fist over his limply beating heart and gasped, “ Free them and rule them as I know you can…and Aslan be with you brother.” His eyes slowly closed his hand falling to his side, his heart stopping for once and for all.

A cry bitter sorrow could be heard rising from the battlefield to every corner of Narnia. Peter, face to the sky, roared with pain and sorrow, his younger brother dead in he arms. Slowly standing to his feet his tears still glistening upon his cheeks anger and hate written upon his face took up his sward in one hand and that of his brother in the other. He looked towards the hill atop which the witch sat.
“ You will DIE for this!” he screamed but she could not hear him but in his heart he made an oath that evil would die before the sun had set.
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*Jadis seen her second command fall dead and she seen her host vanish making her army look small now**Jadis glared*"you will die for this!!!"*she was hurt cause Efrinta was her friend**Jadis placed two magic arrows on her bow string and pulled back and release them toward Peter for she wanted revenge cause of her friend being killed**a Minotaur that was not far from Jadis seen how her army was falling he wanted to tell Jadis to retreat but couldn't find the words to do so*
 
Peter full of rage whirled around cutting the arrows in half and striking down a wolf in one foul swoop. The queen’s army was falling fast now that Efrinta and her host were both gone. Darting behind a bolder Peter breathed franticly trying to compose himself. He motioned for a Gryfin to come to him and the lion like creature swooped down. Peter whispered something to it and just like it had come it flew fast and far to the glimmering castle of Care Paravel.

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Landing on a balcony just outside the room where Susan and Lucy sat he cleared his throat trying to gain their attention.
 
The Forgiven Traitor said:
Peter full of rage whirled around cutting the arrows in half and striking down a wolf in one foul swoop. The queen’s army was falling fast now that Efrinta and her host were both gone. Darting behind a bolder Peter breathed franticly trying to compose himself. He motioned for a Gryfin to come to him and the lion like creature swooped down. Peter whispered something to it and just like it had come it flew fast and far to the glimmering castle of Care Paravel.

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Landing on a balcony just outside the room where Susan and Lucy sat he cleared his throat trying to gain their attention.
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the two girls jumped at the sight of the gryhon sadness and worry echoed within thier features, "whats happaned? are they alright?" Susan asked, hot tears beginning to heat her eyes once again. she looked pleadingly at the grphone.
 
The Forgiven Traitor said:
Peter full of rage whirled around cutting the arrows in half and striking down a wolf in one foul swoop. The queen’s army was falling fast now that Efrinta and her host were both gone. Darting behind a bolder Peter breathed franticly trying to compose himself. He motioned for a Gryfin to come to him and the lion like creature swooped down. Peter whispered something to it and just like it had come it flew fast and far to the glimmering castle of Care Paravel.

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Landing on a balcony just outside the room where Susan and Lucy sat he cleared his throat trying to gain their attention.
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*Jadis seen Peter cut her arrows in two and her eyes widen she seen her army was weaking and falling**the Minotaur finaly found the courage to run to Jadis and spoke*"your majesty we must retreat and regroup at your castle cause you will surly lose and die and I don't want that you already lost your dear friend Efrinta and I see sadness in your cold and raging green eyes come on your majesty lets go"*Jadis lowered her bow and looked at the Minotuar speaking to her and spoke*"I know Efrinta was the only one that showed me what friendship was and I cherished it and now my friend is gone"
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
the two girls jumped at the sight of the gryhon sadness and worry echoed within their features, "what’s happened? are they alright?" Susan asked, hot tears beginning to heat her eyes once again. she looked pleadingly at the grphone.
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Folding his wings in he took a few steps into the room and then bowed, “ My queens I fear I bring sad tidings from the battle field.” He could see them both tense up and the tears inching down their faces made his heart ache. “ Your brother Edmund has fallen.” His words seemed to echo in the hollow room reeking pain upon those who heard it.

~JadisTheWhiteWitch~ said:
*Jadis seen Peter cut her arrows in two and her eyes widen she seen her army was weaking and falling**the Minotaur finaly found the courage to run to Jadis and spoke*"your majesty we must retreat and regroup at your castle cause you will surly lose and die and I don't want that you already lost your dear friend Efrinta and I see sadness in your cold and raging green eyes come on your majesty lets go"*Jadis lowered her bow and looked at the Minotuar speaking to her and spoke*"I know Efrinta was the only one that showed me what friendship was and I cherished it and now my friend is gone"
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Peter gathering the remainder of his courage lashed out from behind the rock where had had been sitting and struck an evil wolf down. His strength renewed and a vengeance burning in his utter being he slashed at the enemy. He would never stop till the witch was dead for he was the high king of Narnia. His brother had not stopped when he could have turned and lived and neither would he. The words of Aslan echoed over and over in his head, “Courage Son of Adam for I am with you.”
 
The Forgiven Traitor said:
Folding his wings in he took a few steps into the room and then bowed, “ My queens I fear I bring sad tidings from the battle field.” He could see them both tense up and the tears inching down their faces made his heart ache. “ Your brother Edmund has fallen.” His words seemed to echo in the hollow room reeking pain upon those who heard it.



Peter gathering the remainder of his courage lashed out from behind the rock where had had been sitting and struck an evil wolf down. His strength renewed and a vengeance burning in his utter being he slashed at the enemy. He would never stop till the witch was dead for he was the high king of Narnia. His brother had not stopped when he could have turned and lived and neither would he. The words of Aslan echoed over and over in his head, “Courage Son of Adam for I am with you.”
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*Jadis listen to her Minotaur and spoke*"very well cause I'm going to need a bigger army I'm going to have to find more allies cause I will not lose"*with that she called to her remaining troops to fall back and return to there camp**the troops stoped what they were doing and listen to Jadis and vanish quickly**Jadis and Demon vanish quickly along with the archers that were with her**Jadis was filling sadness for the first time she morn Efrinta death*
 
Seeing the witch turn and start away from the war awoke a burning hate inside of Peter. Did she really think that she could have her army destroy his brother like that and then flee? No that would not be aloud, Edmund had to be avenged. Striking out against a minetuar that crossed his path he set his eyes on the path towards the witch. Sh would die before the day was spent.

Aslansfriend
the two girls jumped at the sight of the gryhon sadness and worry echoed within their features, "what’s happened? are they alright?" Susan asked, hot tears beginning to heat her eyes once again. she looked pleadingly at the grphone.
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Folding his wings in he took a few steps into the room and then bowed, “ My queens I fear I bring sad tidings from the battle field.” He could see them both tense up and the tears inching down their faces made his heart ache. “ Your brother Edmund has fallen.” His words seemed to echo in the hollow room reeking pain upon those who heard it.
 
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