The Virtual Narnia

The Forgiven Traitor said:
Seeing the witch turn and start away from the war awoke a burning hate inside of Peter. Did she really think that she could have her army destroy his brother like that and then flee? No that would not be aloud, Edmund had to be avenged. Striking out against a minetuar that crossed his path he set his eyes on the path towards the witch. She would die before the day was spent.


Folding his wings in he took a few steps into the room and then bowed, “ My queens I fear I bring sad tidings from the battle field.” He could see them both tense up and the tears inching down their faces made his heart ache. “ Your brother Edmund has fallen.” His words seemed to echo in the hollow room reeking pain upon those who heard it.
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*Jadis was on the back of her horse Demon when something made her hair stand on end on the back of her neck**she turned Demon around and seen Peter was stalking her and she looked down at Demon with a look that said if he still wants to fight lets bring it to him**Demon reared in anger then came back down**and Jadis held her sword before her and Demon charged Peter with Jadis on his back holding her sword infront of her*
 
Peter seeing her charge him stood ready swards in hand waiting to strike. HE was fearless now and was determined, for his sisters’ sakes, for the well-being of Narnia, and for Edmund. As Demon came closer Peter stepped of to the side slashing at the chest of the horse. A shriek filled the air like none other and Peter knew is stroke was good.

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The Forgiven Traitor said:
Peter seeing her charge him stood ready swards in hand waiting to strike. HE was fearless now and was determined, for his sisters’ sakes, for the well-being of Narnia, and for Edmund. As Demon came closer Peter stepped of to the side slashing at the chest of the horse. A shriek filled the air like none other and Peter knew is stroke was good.

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*Demon shrieked as he fell to the ground dead**Jadis went flying off Demon and landed in some bushs back first with her sword in hand and she was in pain she didn't know how much more her body could take**Jadis's troops seen their Queen run back into battle and they joined back in two Minotaurs lept and landed before Peter with their axes to protect their Queen*
 
The Forgiven Traitor said:
Seeing the witch turn and start away from the war awoke a burning hate inside of Peter. Did she really think that she could have her army destroy his brother like that and then flee? No that would not be aloud, Edmund had to be avenged. Striking out against a minetuar that crossed his path he set his eyes on the path towards the witch. Sh would die before the day was spent.


Folding his wings in he took a few steps into the room and then bowed, “ My queens I fear I bring sad tidings from the battle field.” He could see them both tense up and the tears inching down their faces made his heart ache. “ Your brother Edmund has fallen.” His words seemed to echo in the hollow room reeking pain upon those who heard it.
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the words seemed to strike the girls hearts like a dagger peaceing right through them. almost emmiditely Lucy burst into uncontrollably sobs and Susan enveloped her younger sister in a tight embrace, hopeing to bring her some sence of comfort while tears ran freely down her own cheeks as she could feel her heart ripping inside, "n-no..." she whispered, stroking Lucy's silky hair gently, "n-no...E-Ed....oh Lucy...." she glanced up at the griphon breifly as if she were pleading for him to take back the painful words that would tear there world apart....for a long while the two girls stayed frozen in place while they greived and mourned the loss of there Dear beloeved brother...neither of them had ever emeagend that this day would come...when Edmund had told Lucy that he might not walk off the battle feild she hadn't wanted to believe him and had even concenced herself that it wasn't true...but now there was nothing she could do, as the grhyons vioce seemed to ecoe over and over in her head, 'your brother Edmund has fallen' the words that tore a hole through both of they're hearts and would soon tear a whole through the hearts of thousands of Narnias who would join the remaining Pevensies in there loss of a Great King and brother.....

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*the two Minotaurs sarted fighting Peter with their axes they were going to make sure their Queen would not fall**Jadis layed in the bushs in pain she tried to ignore her pain but it was to much*
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
the grhyons vioce seemed to ecoe over and over in her head, 'your brother Edmund has fallen' the words that tore a hole through both of they're hearts and would soon tear a whole through the hearts of thousands of Narnias who would join the remaining Pevensies in there loss of a Great King and brother.....
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Tears formed in the eyes if the great beast. He had nothing to comfort his beloved queans, he could tell them nothing that would ease their pain and suffering. Now the salty water rolled down his face and soacked into the golden fur and streaked his beak. How he wished King Peter would not have shoes him for this mission, to tell them these tidings of great evil and sorrow.

~JadisTheWhiteWitch~ said:
*the two Minotaurs sarted fighting Peter with their axes they were going to make sure their Queen would not fall**Jadis layed in the bushs in pain she tried to ignore her pain but it was to much*
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Fiercely Peter fought against the two guards both his swards clashing against their axes like mad. He would not let them win…not this time…not ever. Now that Efrinta had fallen Narnia would win and the witch would be destroyed. He had promised his brother that he would kill her and so he intended to do. Soon one of the Minotaurs fell and Peter fell upon the other foe with a vengeance.
 
The Forgiven Traitor said:
Tears formed in the eyes if the great beast. He had nothing to comfort his beloved queans, he could tell them nothing that would ease their pain and suffering. Now the salty water rolled down his face and soacked into the golden fur and streaked his beak. How he wished King Peter would not have shoes him for this mission, to tell them these tidings of great evil and sorrow.



Fiercely Peter fought against the two guards both his swards clashing against their axes like mad. He would not let them win…not this time…not ever. Now that Efrinta had fallen Narnia would win and the witch would be destroyed. He had promised his brother that he would kill her and so he intended to do. Soon one of the Minotaurs fell and Peter fell upon the other foe with a vengeance.
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*Jadis seen one of her guards fall she seen the other one was putting up a good one and was destracting Peter so she took this chance to run she faught the pain she was feeling and got up and ran off from the felid quickly toward her ice castle*
 
Peter killed the second guard and seing jadis run took off after her.
"I will not let you win this time." He said to himself.
As Jadis was running up the hill towards her ice castle Aslan came bopunding up behind her, jumped and stopped three feat from where she stood.
"You have ran far to long, Daughter of earth. I will no longer suffer my people to live with your tiriny." With that he gave a mighty roar.
 
The Forgiven Traitor said:
Peter killed the second guard and seing jadis run took off after her.
"I will not let you win this time." He said to himself.
As Jadis was running up the hill towards her ice castle Aslan came bopunding up behind her, jumped and stopped three feat from where she stood.
"You have ran far to long, Daughter of earth. I will no longer suffer my people to live with your tiriny." With that he gave a mighty roar.
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*Jadis slide to a stop when she seen the great lion she felt fear strike her whole body she feared nothing but when it came to Aslan she feared him greatly**she looked over Aslan's shoulder slightly at her ice castle for she wanted behind them gates badly and hide somewhere in her castle*
 
The roar shook the ground greatly knocking Jadis to her knees, Aslan’s great lion eyes seeing through her.
“Not this time Daughter of earth.” He said in a low rumbling growl.” Your castle will provide you no longer with refuge nor shelter.” Again he growled, much louder now and in the distance it sounded as shattering glass and cracking ice and all who could see it saw the great abode of the queen fall with a great noise to the ground.
 
The Forgiven Traitor said:
The roar shook the ground greatly knocking Jadis to her knees, Aslan’s great lion eyes seeing through her.
“Not this time Daughter of earth.” He said in a low rumbling growl.” Your castle will provide you no longer with refuge nor shelter.” Again he growled, much louder now and in the distance it sounded as shattering glass and cracking ice and all who could see it saw the great abode of the queen fall with a great noise to the ground.
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*Jadis went to her knees and sadness was in her eyes as she heard her castle crumble to the ground and she was in pain cause she seemed to be connected to her ice castle icy tears were seen slowly falling from her cold green eyes that froze instenly when they touched her cold face**she knew she was had now she had lost again**this time she had lost everything**she wondered to herself why did she pick the path of evil over goodness**two of Jadis's wolf followers were hid good and watched their Queen with sadness they wanted to help her badly but didn't know how and they were feeling bad for Jadis they lowered their ears and head and tail sadly as they seen their Queen break down**Jadis couldn't take the pain of her soul that seem to shatter like her ice castle and she fell off her knees and landed on her side on the ground before Aslan's front paws**the two wolves seen their Queen fall to her side to the ground before the lion's paws and they thought she was dying slowly*
 
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Panting Peter now stood beside the great lion watching the queen die and for some odd reason a pang of sorrow filled his heart. Why had such evil lead this young woman to do what she had done? But soon the thought of Edmund filled Peter's mind. the thought of his younger brother lying there dieing at the hand of this vicious woman drove such anger into his heart he rose his sward above his head and was ready to strike when Aslan stretched out his paw and stopped him.
"No son of Adam...you should not kill her. She is dieing of her own accord. You should not dirty your sward with her blood."
 
The Forgiven Traitor said:
Panting Peter now stood beside the great lion watching the queen die and for some odd reason a pang of sorrow filled his heart. Why had such evil lead this young woman to do what she had done? But soon the thought of Edmund filled Peter's mind. the thought of his younger brother lying there dieing at the hand of this vicious woman drove such anger into his heart he rose his sward above his head and was ready to strike when Aslan stretched out his paw and stopped him.
"No son of Adam...you should not kill her. She is dieing of her own accord. You should not dirty your sward with her blood."
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*Jadis was fading away slowly and she seem to breath her last breath of life and her green eyes closed and she layed there lifeless before Aslan and Peter**the wolves seen Jadis was gone and they layed on the ground sadly staring at Jadis's lifeless body*
 
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