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  • They are sleeping five miles apart so the baby is brought by an invisible underground elevator :p And kids these days don't know anything *cough cough*
    Really?? I didn't know that..... but then, I've never read it or seen the movie..... Everyone says that it's really good, but so far I haven't got around to reading it yet.... I've got so much on my "to read" list.
    Just to let you know that I have read what you have sent so far. :)

    THOUGH....There are six that I have not yet even touched and I'm not sure why:|
    Okay, at the moment I have no time for studying anything but Plant Ecology and BusCalc. But maybe tomorrow night I will be able to check it out. I really shouldn't be on NF right now but I am taking a 15 minute break from studying.
    i hope ur dad gets better i am still praying.

    also, i think u may have misunderstood me about u helping people. i didn't mean to seem rude or be like they were drunks. i just wanted to ttry and gently tell u to look out for yourself too and not be foolish. i know u know this, so don't take me wrong. i wish u all the luck and prayers and blessings that God sees fit to give u.

    let me know how ur dad is doing. sorry if it has been a while since i have been on. i have a fb now and i have to maintain it
    Hey Copperfox! Hope you're doing well today. I just read the first chapter of your fairy tale and I love it! Lu-Mao reminds me of a Cinderella type figure with all the misfortune in her life up to this point. Maybe she will have a fairy godmother looking after her; I'll just have to wait and find out. I loved the way you began your story. I have trouble starting stories because my introductions sound too much like an introduction of a paper a person would write for school. Do you have any advice you could give me on that subject. Thanks!!!
    I started reading your story. I'm only through the first chapter but it looks really good. I only have two things to say so far:

    1. I really liked how you say "That is how this story is launched like an arrow being launched from a bow" (or something like that

    2. I tend to prefer stories that give more of the story rather than summarizing it. Like instead of saying that The girl was taught Kung Fu, show the scene where she first learned it and give her a little more personality.
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