Copperfox

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  Shadow_Kitty

• Dec 9, 2008

I started reading your story. I'm only through the first chapter but it looks really good. I only have two things to say so far:

1. I really liked how you say "That is how this story is launched like an arrow being launched from a bow" (or something like that

2. I tend to prefer stories that give more of the story rather than summarizing it. Like instead of saying that The girl was taught Kung Fu, show the scene where she first learned it and give her a little more personality.

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  Mercia

• Dec 9, 2008

er... I don't really know about Armenian population. All I know it's that in france there 's A LOT OF emigrates, from the whole world. and I know that there is lots of Africans, but i don't know about Armenian. in fact, the only Armenian I "know" is Serj tankian, the leader of my favorite music band, "system of a down".

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  umbrellaxscenexcore

• Dec 9, 2008

Where is St. Petersburg?

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  Mercia

• Dec 9, 2008

oh, you were in the navy! It seems to have been great
I love cordon bleu, it's my favorite meal, I think i could eat cordon bleu every days!! (well... maybe I exagerate a little bit ) anyways, I LOVE IT!

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  umbrellaxscenexcore

• Dec 9, 2008

Greetings there Copperfox!

*grins*

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  Jill_Pole_Wannabe

• Dec 9, 2008

Wow... it sounds cool whats its about???
Do you need my support or something or just inform me?

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  Shadow_Kitty

• Dec 9, 2008

no you haven't. I'll read it when I'm done with school!

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  Mrs Gil-Galad Took

• Dec 9, 2008

You asked me if I would make the Finneys find Joel but there's so much posting going on in the (now former) topic itself

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  Mrs Gil-Galad Took

• Dec 9, 2008

I just came on so I haven't checked my e-mail yet

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  Mrs Gil-Galad Took

• Dec 9, 2008

I didn't see the thread until you mentioned it. I posted

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  MeghantheDraygon

• Dec 9, 2008

I'll definitely check it out when I have some time!

Not exactly, that was our first time roleplaying, haha.
It started out as a few inside jokes and kind of... erm, "snowball"ed from there

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  MeghantheDraygon

• Dec 9, 2008

Aw, wow, there's a new monologue thread.
Sorry I haven't participated in awhile, finals are kind of eating me. I should be able to escape by next week though ^^

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  fernshirehobbit

• Dec 8, 2008

oh. it makes since that he would have it.

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  fernshirehobbit

• Dec 8, 2008

i like the fox weathervain picture

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  office

• Dec 8, 2008

I`ll try and read it soon. Thanks for telling me about it.

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  BarbarianKing

• Dec 8, 2008

I see? but use Bat-Bat as you see fit for this Background. I will try to post some before he migrates to MLII.

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  BarbarianKing

• Dec 8, 2008

Bat-Bat did good. I have no complains. Eventually though, he will migrate to monologues II. He already knows the location to one portal to the "Shrub Between the Threads."

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  BarbarianKing

• Dec 8, 2008

Sorry Joe. I was gone last night by the time you posted that message about Bat-Bat.

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  Nightcrawler_Fan

• Dec 8, 2008

I'm advertising my banner thread. It is called Nightcrawler_Fan's Banners.

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  queenaravis707

• Dec 8, 2008

Ooooooooooooh ok.