Hey Gannon! How are ya?
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That's it--the Great One, Mark Levin! I heard him speak of it!
Thank you; I seem to have heard of Hillsdale.
I would feel released. I would probably still choose the audio form for it.
I have felt hesitant about it, since the story is not quite one hundred percent my invention, only about 96 percent. But as with "Sophia Renee," I do have thoughts of making a spoken-word audio recording of it.
So ya gonna ask N-Fan to show Brendan and Jennifer in some part of her story about Summer?
I can't see inside your head; but in the existing story there is hardly any development of Brendan's romance with Jennifer Williams. She is a junior and he a senior when they first meet; she has worked at Pansit Paradise at sometime before she met Brendan; she shares his love of lacrosse; and that's almost ALL that was ever said.
A much simpler thing to do would be to keep the Alipang thread alive by writing a post on it in which you offer any suggestions you have for N-Fan as she writes her parallel story.
If you're in a writing mood, consider this: the character of Patrick Hyland, Brendan's elder brother, has very little contact with characters in Smoky Lake. Therefore you COULD write a story about Patrick, beginning when he and Brendan were kids and going on into his USMC career, without worrying about contradicting the Alipang story. This would give you a platform from which to speak....carefully.
Well, do what you can to persuade friends of yours to read "Alipang Havens." After all, you can tell them that you're a character in it!
The story is ALL finished!!!
The wedding is now in progress!!
Somehow I didn't see your excellent Alipang post right away. Thank you for helping to make things clear. If it HAD been possible for Al and Chil to marry, then their transition TO open sexual feelings would have come as easily as walking through an open door; but as it is, they never ventured into anything intentionally sexual.
I hope that you did your arguing on the "Avoidance of Hijacking" thread.
I'm just waiting for faithful reader Unforgotten Memories to comment; then I'll start the wedding.
If you don't come back on soon, you may miss your job as Alipang's best man!
Merry Christmas!!!!!!!!
Alipang Havens and Kim Tisdale are now engaged!!
Repeating my previous.
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