Well I told another member, that Ramandu's Daughter bothered me, because it implies Ramandu owns her, that she is affilated with him. It imposes on her indivduality and makes it difficult to focus soley on her character.
It would be like is Arwen's name was Elrond's Daughter. It lacks the personalization, the unique attribute of a name that is her own.
It would be like is Arwen's name was Elrond's Daughter. It lacks the personalization, the unique attribute of a name that is her own.