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  • It's true that Steve has a sort of crush on Leslie, but it's a very healthy crush, not lending itself to petty jealousy. I agree that the jealousy could be cute in a way; but I'm trying to show that Steve has a much wiser head on his shoulders than Tanya has on hers.
    In my reply, I include Steve's best buddy in the dinner scene. He will be asking Leslie questions about college.
    I'm trying to edit to match your correction of your error, but the site keeps crashing for the usual reason, which is NO reason.
    I momentarily missed Leslie's remark about having cried before, but now I have edited in a response to that.
    Pardon my delay when I was the one who invited more posting; I had to write some real-world bill payments. But now you're up again, and I'll plan to post at least once more after that.
    Tia, since no one else is on at I.O.W., did you feel like adding a few more Leslie-Tanya posts? If so, it would resume with them driving away from the park.
    I'm reviewing all of it. I'm finding the Leslie-Tanya bonding story very sweet, if I say so myself.
    In poor Tanya's insecure mind, the fact that Leslie did not OFFER to go back up the hill and roll down after Tanya mentioned having the thought, is the same thing as if Leslie openly expressed utter disgust at the idea. Tanya is no longer suicidal, but has a long way to go in dealing with her fear of rejection.
    And one more thing. It has to be your original work. No images from the movies or anything else that's copyrighted. You can do it anyway you want, but it has to be original.
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