A Fantasy Story
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Peter's_Unicorn
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I like those guys, too! And I LOVE the language, it's fun to read! 
Georgie the Valient
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WHERE IS LIEF??PLEASE post more Elindal....pleeeeeaaaase
Elendil
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Chapter Five
Leif slowly counted the men he could see. Five, and they'd just poisoned Frida...or perhaps it wasn't poison, she didn't look dead, more like asleep, but whatever it was, they had her prisoner. He had to do something.
What Leif didn't know was that there were many more than five men. Six other archers were still in the trees, and three more, were at this very moment, tracking him down. Two others were very close, having just caught the horse, and were bringing him back. Leif wouldn't stand a chance. But he didn't know this.
Now I have to write some more...*thinks*
Leif slowly counted the men he could see. Five, and they'd just poisoned Frida...or perhaps it wasn't poison, she didn't look dead, more like asleep, but whatever it was, they had her prisoner. He had to do something.
What Leif didn't know was that there were many more than five men. Six other archers were still in the trees, and three more, were at this very moment, tracking him down. Two others were very close, having just caught the horse, and were bringing him back. Leif wouldn't stand a chance. But he didn't know this.
Now I have to write some more...*thinks*
Georgie the Valient
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Are these men good or bad?Something tells me that Lief or Frida is going to die.Tell me i am wrong Elindal
SlpNarniaQueen
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OH NO! THE BLACK HAIRED GUYS ARE EVIL!
SlpNarniaQueen
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Elindil said:Well maybe...they aren't actully men though...they are...I'll let you figure it ou!
ELVES!
you know, the ones up at the north pole...
Peter's_Unicorn
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Haha, hehe, that's funny, Slp! (No, I really was not trying to make that rhyme, it just DID.) I was thinking... oh, I got nothing, elves fit the best.SlpNarniaQueen said:ELVES!
Peanut_Butter
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I second the elves proposal choice thingy!
HAHAHAHAHA...ELVES!!!!!
HAHAHAHAHA...ELVES!!!!!
Georgie the Valient
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I third it!It is a nice idea!Peanut_Butter said:
But elves are good........Have you made up some wierd creature Elindal?
Peanut_Butter
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She kinda did...little men with black hair...and now they're called elves.
Georgie the Valient
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She has not said that.And only Christmas elves are to that descreiption physically.Read Eragon or LoTR.Their elves are SUPPOSED to be good
Peanut_Butter
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well...someone did...
SlpNarniaQueen
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elves elves elves...watcha' gonna do...PB just called you little...watcha' gonna do!
Peanut_Butter
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I didn't call anyone little!
I was talking about the "elves".
I was talking about the "elves".
SlpNarniaQueen
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elves elves elves...watcha' gonna do...PB says she ain't called ya little so watcha' gonna do!
Peanut_Butter
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Elendil
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Here's some more....
Leif slowly counted the men he could see. Five, and they'd just poisoned Frida...or perhaps it wasn't poison, she didn't look dead, more like asleep, but whatever it was, they had her prisoner. He had to do something.
What Leif didn't know was that there were many more than five men. Six other archers were still in the trees, and three more, were at this very moment, tracking him down. Two others were very close, having just caught the horse, and were bringing him back. Leif wouldn't stand a chance. But he didn't know this.
He drew his sword, and dashed into the clearing. The five sets of green eyes looked at him, they didn't seem surprised, they only seemed to think him incredibly stupid. Leif rushed at one of them, Dov.
Dov side stepped so fast Leif could barely see him, even his magical sword wasn't fast enough. He didn't see Dov's foot and fell over it, onto his stomach. He rolled over onto his back, and saw the five bows pointed at him.
"Drop you sword," said one, the one who had talked to Frida, and seemed to be in charge. Leif obeyed, the minute it left his hand it stopped glowing. The man raised an eyebrow, and picked up the sword. Leif's jaw dropped when he saw the sword begin to glow. "Where did you get this sword?" The man asked.
"It was given me." Leif replied shortly, "Now give it back."
"You can't have weapons if you're going to hurt us."
"I had good reason," Leif snapped, "you poisoned Frida."
"I did no such thing, she's only asleep."
"Yes," Sneered Leif, "And I wonder what you planned to do to her while she was asleep?"
The man raised an eyebrow. "Take her to my father, which is what I'll be doing with you too. Now please tell me where you got the sword from."
"I already told you it was given me." Leif spat. "Why does it matter to you?"
"Because it's elfish made, and mortals should not be carrying our weapons."
"You're a shee?" Leif asked, looking more stunned then before.
"A what?"
"A shee?"
The man turned to another of the five. "Tahw seod eh neam yb 'eehs'? I evah ton draeh siht drow erofeb."
Leif slowly counted the men he could see. Five, and they'd just poisoned Frida...or perhaps it wasn't poison, she didn't look dead, more like asleep, but whatever it was, they had her prisoner. He had to do something.
What Leif didn't know was that there were many more than five men. Six other archers were still in the trees, and three more, were at this very moment, tracking him down. Two others were very close, having just caught the horse, and were bringing him back. Leif wouldn't stand a chance. But he didn't know this.
He drew his sword, and dashed into the clearing. The five sets of green eyes looked at him, they didn't seem surprised, they only seemed to think him incredibly stupid. Leif rushed at one of them, Dov.
Dov side stepped so fast Leif could barely see him, even his magical sword wasn't fast enough. He didn't see Dov's foot and fell over it, onto his stomach. He rolled over onto his back, and saw the five bows pointed at him.
"Drop you sword," said one, the one who had talked to Frida, and seemed to be in charge. Leif obeyed, the minute it left his hand it stopped glowing. The man raised an eyebrow, and picked up the sword. Leif's jaw dropped when he saw the sword begin to glow. "Where did you get this sword?" The man asked.
"It was given me." Leif replied shortly, "Now give it back."
"You can't have weapons if you're going to hurt us."
"I had good reason," Leif snapped, "you poisoned Frida."
"I did no such thing, she's only asleep."
"Yes," Sneered Leif, "And I wonder what you planned to do to her while she was asleep?"
The man raised an eyebrow. "Take her to my father, which is what I'll be doing with you too. Now please tell me where you got the sword from."
"I already told you it was given me." Leif spat. "Why does it matter to you?"
"Because it's elfish made, and mortals should not be carrying our weapons."
"You're a shee?" Leif asked, looking more stunned then before.
"A what?"
"A shee?"
The man turned to another of the five. "Tahw seod eh neam yb 'eehs'? I evah ton draeh siht drow erofeb."
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