A Fantasy Story

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Chapter Eleven
When Argo finally awoke he looked around in despair. The light streaming in through the window wasn't evening light. Curses! He'd slept till the next morning. He pushed aside the blankets and got out of bed. "Have a good sleep?" Argo jumped, and spun around. His brother Chaim was standing in the doorway of his room.
"Hello brother," Argo muttered. "Why didn't you wake me up?"
Chaim shrugged. "Father said not to, anyway you wouldn't have slept for two days if you weren't dead tired."
Argo's jaw dropped. "WHAT!?!"
"You slept for two days. Can I come in?"
"Yes." Argo sullenly sat down on his bed. He didn't particularly want to talk to his brother right now. He was even beginning to doubt Chaim was his brother. They were just to different. Argo wanted to go find Petra, and talk to her. They'd had fun together, she had enjoyed his company, and he had enjoyed hers. Which was more than he could say of most everyone else. They'd talked and laughed together. He'd helped her with her work in the field, and he'd taken her for a ride on his horse. She'd shown him things that he hadn't even know had existed. Like slaves, whips, shackles, and gallows.
Then the time that his father had given him to be away had run out. He had to return, but he couldn't leave Petra, not with all the horrors in her world.
 
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WICKED AWESOME! Two romances in one novel...how good could it get? Oh right, this is GRACE we are talking about...it can get REALLLY good...:D
 
*bows* Thank-you



Once...his mind trailed back to the happy memory from only about a week ago. She'd kissed him. It had only been on the cheek, but now he knew that she was the one he was to marry.
He'd asked her to come away with him, but she'd refused...and so he'd brought her. By force.
He regretted it now, now he knew he shouldn't have. Ever since she'd been hurt...
 
Alexandra Pevensie said:
congratulations, elindil...i am officially addicted to your story...and therefore REALLY HOPING that you decide to write more tomorrow!!!
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YAH! Another reader! & Guys if you like this story, you'd probably like my other fantasy one too...The Seven, (just coz no ones reading it! :eek:)
Here's all I have at the moment...

Chapter Fourteen
" Nac I og dna ees Artep?" What the first think that Argo said to his father. "Esaelp?"
"T'nera uoy gniog ot ta tsael yas olleh ot em tsrif?"
"Thgirla, olleh. Won nac I og dna ees reh?"
"Ton yrev etilop si eh?" The king asked one of his nobles, who laughed.
"Father!" Argo snapped in the mortal language.
"Od uoy ezilaer, Argo, taht ecnis uoy emac kcab morf ruoy... 'pirt' ouy t'nevah neeb yrev ecin ot em, ro Chaim rof taht rettam."
 
good job Elindil! I love your story...although that's kinda obvious seeing as I just went through 36 pages looking for the story :D
 
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