A Fantasy Story

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Suddenly Sherdac drew a long rattling breath, and his eyes rolled back into his head. Lief shuddered, he knew Sherdac was dead, but he couldn't, wouldn't except it. He ran his hand over Sherdac's chest, feeling, in vain, for a heartbeat. There was none. He felt for a pulse at his throat, and his wrist. Nothing. Sherdac was gone.
Lief slowly, and carefully picked up the body, he stumbled with the weight, but got to the side of the road, where he laid him, with the hope the body wouldn't get trampled. Then he pressed the tip of his sword against the palm of his left hand, and pressed down, cutting deep and long. "I swear, Sherdac," He whispered, making a fist with his hand, the blood already oozing from between his fingers. "I will avenge your death."
 
Frida stumbled and tripped on the hem of her long dress. She looked over her shoulder. The man on the horse was still following her, but now he'd caught up, and she felt the sharp tip of a spear against her back. "Stand up," He growled.
She obeyed, but her eyes flashed angrily. "Leave me alone!" She snapped.
The tip of the spear prodded her in the stomach. "You'll do what I tell you! And you will answer my questions." Frida scowled, but she didn't move. Where was her father? "Firstly, girl, what is your name?"
"Frida,"
"How old are you?"
"You know," Frida spat, "It's really none of your business!"
"Yes it is, girl." The man pulled his helmet off, black hair tumbled down to his shoulders. He grinned. "I can do what I like with you. It's not often I have the company of a pretty lady...such as yourself." He touched the necklace with the tip of his spear. "Where'd you get that, lass? Tell me now!"
"I...I..." Frida grabbed the spear with both hands, and tried to yank it away from the man. He was to strong.
He pulled the spear away from her, and rode his horse so close to her, that Frida could have touched the man's boot.
 
GO GET HIM GIRL! KILL HIM, SPIT ON HIM! sorry, I root for the hero girls :rolleyes: I don't like that guy...*sigh* its like a fantasy loooooooooove story...
 
Well it's not really a love story...you can hardly say they love each other...they only met once!
(Well it could be 'love at first sight' LOL!)
 
Well its got that kind of format. Evil guy takes princess, peasent saves her. really quite easy, unless there's some evil Grace twist where the princcess actually falls in love with the evil guy and the peasent goes to all that work for no reason. :rolleyes:
 
:p Hey! You never told me you don't like drama :p My story is exactly like this in the beginning, but it'll lighten up once the two conjoin.... :)
 
There is only one or two deaths that I have planned for the story, there may be more as it progresses...


Sorry Elindil this really isn't the place to be discussing my story is it? *blush*
 
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