A New Challenge

SlpNarniaQueen said:
Mary Sue dashed after her.

Peter stared up. "loreeeeeeeeeeeetta..." he called.
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They ran down the tunnel until they ended up at the woods, the wolves in hot persiut.


Edmunds face fell the moment he heard that name, "OH no! no no no no no pleeassee don't call Loretta!!!" Edmund protested, covering his brothers mouth with his hand, "Peter...shut up!!"
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
They ran down the tunnel until they ended up at the woods, the wolves in hot persiut.


Edmunds face fell the moment he heard that name, "OH no! no no no no no pleeassee don't call Loretta!!!" Edmund protested, covering his brothers mouth with his hand, "Peter...shut up!!"
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"Turn, quick!" Mary SUe ordered.

"Yes?" Loretta stepped beside them.
 
SlpNarniaQueen said:
"Turn, quick!" Mary SUe ordered.

"Yes?" Loretta stepped beside them.
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Alia did as she was told and turned quickly, the wolves were confused, they started sniffing the ground to regain the twos scent.



Edmund looked up at her, "Ed...nothing! really! were fine!!" he lied, his hand still over his brothers mouth.
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
Alia did as she was told and turned quickly, the wolves were confused, they started sniffing the ground to regain the twos scent.



Edmund looked up at her, "Ed...nothing! really! were fine!!" he lied, his hand still over his brothers mouth.
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The wolves came out in the woods. "Why are we here..." he saw a flash of fur dive for the tunnel and turned around and snarled. Alia and Mary Sue were no where to be seen, and the tunnel had dissapppered.

"Whew, we made it!" Mary Sue exclaimed to Alia in the tunnel. She had pulled down the invisable latch, which made the tunnels entrance not able to see. She set to work filling up the entrance. "Lets get back..." she said after the entrance was blocked a meter under.

"Really? Peter what do you say?" Peter looked up at her and smiled. "okay..." she said. She leapt on Ed and started tickling him.
 
SlpNarniaQueen said:
The wolves came out in the woods. "Why are we here..." he saw a flash of fur dive for the tunnel and turned around and snarled. Alia and Mary Sue were no where to be seen, and the tunnel had dissapppered.

"Whew, we made it!" Mary Sue exclaimed to Alia in the tunnel. She had pulled down the invisable latch, which made the tunnels entrance not able to see. She set to work filling up the entrance. "Lets get back..." she said after the entrance was blocked a meter under.

"Really? Peter what do you say?" Peter looked up at her and smiled. "okay..." she said. She leapt on Ed and started tickling him.
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"Good idea!" Alia panted, hearing the wolves snarl from outside. "Before Rex and the pack figure out what happend.." she dashed down the tunnel which ended up leading them back into Cair Paravel. the wolves from outside franticly sniffed around for them at Rex's command.


"No! No! Loretta!!!" But it was too late before he new it he found himself pinned by her on the floor. He glared at Peter. "This is all your fault.." he grumbled under his breath until he burst into fits of laughter when Loretta began tickling him. "Lo-Loetta!! stop!!"

Lucy grinned to Grace, whispering something in her air. The tiger cub grinned in responce and both of them looked towards Peter with mischiviouse looks. "Ohhh...Peter....RAOR!!!" Grace tried raoring at him thought it came out as more of a aqeak. "We have come to EAT YOU!!" Lucy exclained, trying to make her voice sound evilly. giggling her and Grace lept on Peter pinning him to the ground, they began tickling him.

Susan just shook her head from her place sitting by the windowseal on a soft cusion, staring out the window.
 
Loretta saw Susan. "You move, you die!" she told Edmund. Loretta snuck up behind Susan and poked her in the side, and then started tickling her.

Peter screamed in fake horror, as the youngsters tickled him. He rolled over and got Lucy down...tickling her.

Mary Sue dashed down the tunnel after Alia.
 
SlpNarniaQueen said:
Loretta saw Susan. "You move, you die!" she told Edmund. Loretta snuck up behind Susan and poked her in the side, and then started tickling her.

Peter screamed in fake horror, as the youngsters tickled him. He rolled over and got Lucy down...tickling her.

Mary Sue dashed down the tunnel after Alia.
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Edmund darn't move from hearing Lorettas words, he gulped staying there on the floor, afraid to move.

Susan screamed in surrpize, bursting into fits of laughter, she had exspected to see Ed tickling her but instead she saw Loretta. "Lo-Loretta? wh-what are you doing!?" she gasped between fits of laughter.


Lucy couldn't stop laughing, Grace on the other hand managed to leap on top of Peter and was playfully bighting and clawing at him the way most kittens play with their owners.


Alia burst through the tunnel right into Cair Paravels kicthen. "Well this sure is an odd place for a scret entrance.." she panted, a small laugh in her voice.
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
Edmund darn't move from hearing Lorettas words, he gulped staying there on the floor, afraid to move.

Susan screamed in surrpize, bursting into fits of laughter, she had exspected to see Ed tickling her but instead she saw Loretta. "Lo-Loretta? wh-what are you doing!?" she gasped between fits of laughter.


Lucy couldn't stop laughing, Grace on the other hand managed to leap on top of Peter and was playfully bighting and clawing at him the way most kittens play with their owners.


Alia burst through the tunnel right into Cair Paravels kicthen. "Well this sure is an odd place for a scret entrance.." she panted, a small laugh in her voice.
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Loretta laughed, tickling Susan. "Ed, he really is scared of me..." she laughed.

Peter scooped Grace up and leapt off Lucy, tossing Grace in the air.

"It means I can start cooking right away!" Mary Sue exclaimed excitedly.
 
SlpNarniaQueen said:
Loretta laughed, tickling Susan. "Ed, he really is scared of me..." she laughed.

Peter scooped Grace up and leapt off Lucy, tossing Grace in the air.

"It means I can start cooking right away!" Mary Sue exclaimed excitedly.
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"I-I could have told you that when he first met you!!! Ed's such a panzy!!" laughed Susan.


Edmund looked up hearing his sisters comment. "I am not!! Don't forget I faught in the battle of Beruna!!"

"Oh you can't tell me you wern't scared then also!!" gasped Susan through fits of laughter.


Grace screamed, before she new it Peter had began to toss her up and down in the air. she giggled. "yaaayyy this is fun!!" she exclaimed, finding the experience most enjoyable. Lucy was sitting on the floor giggled. She grinned looking towards Ed she picked up a toy and threw it right at him, he was about to grab it but just before he did he heard her yell, "OH no you don't Ed! Loretta told you not to move remember?" Lucy smirked at Ed's reacion.


"I didn't know you could cook.." Alia said smileing, she looked around at the bueatiful kicthen in awe, never in her life had she seen anything so bueatiful. "Wow...this place is gorgorse....you live here?" she asked in wonder.
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
"I-I could have told you that when he first met you!!! Ed's such a panzy!!" laughed Susan.


Edmund looked up hearing his sisters comment. "I am not!! Don't forget I faught in the battle of Beruna!!"

"Oh you can't tell me you wern't scared then also!!" gasped Susan through fits of laughter.


Grace screamed, before she new it Peter had began to toss her up and down in the air. she giggled. "yaaayyy this is fun!!" she exclaimed, finding the experience most enjoyable. Lucy was sitting on the floor giggled. She grinned looking towards Ed she picked up a toy and threw it right at him, he was about to grab it but just before he did he heard her yell, "OH no you don't Ed! Loretta told you not to move remember?" Lucy smirked at Ed's reacion.


"I didn't know you could cook.." Alia said smileing, she looked around at the bueatiful kicthen in awe, never in her life had she seen anything so bueatiful. "Wow...this place is gorgorse....you live here?" she asked in wonder.
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"That's the truth!" Loretta exclaimed. She rolled her eyes.

Peter caught Grace, tossing her at Ed.

"O' course I cook! And no, this be the Pevinsie's house, I live wereever I set up me camp..."
 
SlpNarniaQueen said:
"That's the truth!" Loretta exclaimed. She rolled her eyes.

Peter caught Grace, tossing her at Ed.

"O' course I cook! And no, this be the Pevinsie's house, I live wereever I set up me camp..."
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"It is not!!" Edmund started to retort but he looked up quickly and caught the tiger cun gently in his arms when she was tossed to him. "phew! that was a close one!" he wiped a few sweat beads from his forhead. Grace giggled licking him in the face. Edmund smiled but it wasn't long before his smie turned into a glare to his older brother. "Now look what you've done Peter!! you made me move!! I wasn't soppose to move! Loretta told me not to!" at that time he sounded more like a 5 year old then a King of Narnia.


"Oh...well...I used to live with the wolf pack some of them wern't much of a family but I didn't really have much of a chioce...I guess I'll be doing the same as you now" Alia sighed, a flicker of sadness flshing across her face but the next moment it seemed to dissapear.
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
"It is not!!" Edmund started to retort but he looked up quickly and caught the tiger cun gently in his arms when she was tossed to him. "phew! that was a close one!" he wiped a few sweat beads from his forhead. Grace giggled licking him in the face. Edmund smiled but it wasn't long before his smie turned into a glare to his older brother. "Now look what you've done Peter!! you made me move!! I wasn't soppose to move! Loretta told me not to!" at that time he sounded more like a 5 year old then a King of Narnia.


"Oh...well...I used to live with the wolf pack some of them wern't much of a family but I didn't really have much of a chioce...I guess I'll be doing the same as you now" Alia sighed, a flicker of sadness flshing across her face but the next moment it seemed to dissapear.
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Loretta glared at Ed. "I told you not to-" suddenly a shout was heard from above. "THEY ARE COMING!"

"There ain't nothin' wrong wit the way I be livin', advetures galore, lonely at times, but lonliness makes ye wise..." Mary Sue commented then hearing the shout. "I wonder who'd be coming..."
 
SlpNarniaQueen said:
Loretta glared at Ed. "I told you not to-" suddenly a shout was heard from above. "THEY ARE COMING!"

"There ain't nothin' wrong wit the way I be livin', advetures galore, lonely at times, but lonliness makes ye wise..." Mary Sue commented then hearing the shout. "I wonder who'd be coming..."
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Edmund looked u[ quickly hearing the shout from amove. "Who's coming!?!?" he asked in panic. Grace lept out of Ed's arms and hid behind Peter, wondering who had shouted down to them.




Alia listend to the chipmunks words,taking them into care consideration. "I guess your right..." she heard the shout and looked towards the ceailing. "I have no idea.."
 
A guard ran down. "The witch is coming!" he shouted.

Loretta leapt back. "Jadis..." she hissed out.

Mary Sue looked at Alia. "Who other than the witch would attack? No one."
 
SlpNarniaQueen said:
A guard ran down. "The witch is coming!" he shouted.

Loretta leapt back. "Jadis..." she hissed out.

Mary Sue looked at Alia. "Who other than the witch would attack? No one."
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"AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!" screamed Edmund the moment he heard the words 'White Witch' practicly jumping 50 feet in the air, he hid behind the cound. "OH no! no no no no nooo!! hasn't she tried to kill me enough!?!?!?!?"

Grace gasped, she remembered how Jadis used to beat her, she lept up in Peters arms wimpering in fear.

Alia rolled her eyes. "Oh no...not Jadis...if she sees me I'm dead!!" it was true since she had ran away from the wolf pack she new the witch would come after her. "Oh this is all my fault..I'm SO SORRY!!"
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
"AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!" screamed Edmund the moment he heard the words 'White Witch' practicly jumping 50 feet in the air, he hid behind the cound. "OH no! no no no no nooo!! hasn't she tried to kill me enough!?!?!?!?"

Grace gasped, she remembered how Jadis used to beat her, she lept up in Peters arms wimpering in fear.

Alia rolled her eyes. "Oh no...not Jadis...if she sees me I'm dead!!" it was true since she had ran away from the wolf pack she new the witch would come after her. "Oh this is all my fault..I'm SO SORRY!!"
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Loretta shook her head. "I don't think she's here for any of you. I think we have something she wants..." she trailed off, for she hadn't thought it all through, but there was something in Cair Paravel Jadis wanted.

Jadis came to a halt outside the doors. "Tell the royalty I wish to meet with them and their little friends...including that squirrel to disscuss something..." her ice cold voice echoed through the walls.
 
Edmund looked at Loretta, he was completely puzzled. "What!? What could she possibly want besides one of us!?" he still wasn't convince, he jumped, suddering in fear when he heard the false Queens ice cold voice ring throughout the castle. OH NO! SHES HERE!!!" he his behind Peter, using him as a sheild. Lucy and Grace were equally scared and clung to Peter and Loretta. Suddenly a gaurd ran in and told the Pevensies what Jadis had said.
"What!? Tell her to DIE! becuase shes sopposed to be DEAD!" by now Edmund was freaking out completely, memeries flooded back to him, horrible memeoires of how he was traped in the icy cold cell. Then the face of the Great Lion Aslan flashed before his eyes, it was a look he would never forget the look Aslan gave them right after he came out of his tent after talking with the witch.
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
Edmund looked at Loretta, he was completely puzzled. "What!? What could she possibly want besides one of us!?" he still wasn't convince, he jumped, suddering in fear when he heard the false Queens ice cold voice ring throughout the castle. OH NO! SHES HERE!!!" he his behind Peter, using him as a sheild. Lucy and Grace were equally scared and clung to Peter and Loretta. Suddenly a gaurd ran in and told the Pevensies what Jadis had said.
"What!? Tell her to DIE! becuase shes sopposed to be DEAD!" by now Edmund was freaking out completely, memeries flooded back to him, horrible memeoires of how he was traped in the icy cold cell. Then the face of the Great Lion Aslan flashed before his eyes, it was a look he would never forget the look Aslan gave them right after he came out of his tent after talking with the witch.
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"ED, JUST CALM DOWN!" she shouted at him. "Don't ever forget I was down there too. I know what she does...I know her cruelty. I've seen it and felt it, so get over it!" she growled. "Pull yourself together!"
 
SlpNarniaQueen said:
"ED, JUST CALM DOWN!" she shouted at him. "Don't ever forget I was down there too. I know what she does...I know her cruelty. I've seen it and felt it, so get over it!" she growled. "Pull yourself together!"
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"But...But..." Edmund stuttered, it seemed her words hadn't had much of an effect on him, he new she had witnessed and felt the same as him and probaly even worse, though it still didn't make the fact that the witch was standing right outside the castle gates, and easier...
"She never gave up on wanting MY LIFE!!! you should have seen her trying to kill me in the battle of Burna!! she wanted me DEAD!!!!! WHY IS SHE EVEN ALIVE!?!??!?"
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
"But...But..." Edmund stuttered, it seemed her words hadn't had much of an effect on him, he new she had witnessed and felt the same as him and probaly even worse, though it still didn't make the fact that the witch was standing right outside the castle gates, and easier...
"She never gave up on wanting MY LIFE!!! you should have seen her trying to kill me in the battle of Burna!! she wanted me DEAD!!!!! WHY IS SHE EVEN ALIVE!?!??!?"
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Loretta grabbed his throat. "She is alive becuase she wants to be, and guess what she want's my life too, so get over it. And if you continue freaking out, she won't be after your life cuz I'll kill you for her!" she growled. "So just calm down and lets all think this through!"
 
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