Fan-Fic, a different side of the heroes of Narnia

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Cara smiled and set the box on the bed, she slowly opened it. There was a beautiful dark red velvet dress in it. She slowly lifted it out of the box. It was long, the long sleeves were made of with white silk, the round neckline was surrounded with lace. “Its beautiful,” Cara whispered. She quickly changed into it and looked into the mirror, she looked like a princess. She looked at the door suddenly, someone was knocking. She walked over and opened it, it was Lucy.​
“Cara!” Lucy exclaimed, “you look amazing, it fits you perfectly.” Cara smiled, “yes, thank you for it.” Lucy grinned, “come on, we don’t want to be late.” Cara closed the door and followed Lucy down the hall, she heard something and glanced behind her, Peter was standing at a door, staring at her. Cara turned and almost ran to catch up with Lucy.​
“Ed,” Lucy called. Cara saw Ed a little ways ahead of them. He turned around and stared at Cara. “H..hi,” he stuttered. Cara smiled slightly, “hi.”​
 
I'm enjoying it so far.
May I ask what the different side of our heroes is? Why were there such knights in the beginning? Never mind if you don't answer me at the moment. I guess I'll find out from the story sooner or later. I'm just curious.
 
I'm enjoying it so far.
May I ask what the different side of our heroes is? Why were there such knights in the beginning? Never mind if you don't answer me at the moment. I guess I'll find out from the story sooner or later. I'm just curious.

You'll find out soon. :)


Lucy looked from Ed to Cara and smiled slightly. “Ed why don’t you and Cara go ahead and I’ll wait for Su and Peter.” Ed looked at Lucy, “ok, if you’re sure.” Lucy nodded, “yep.” Ed grinned, “ok, come on Cara, lets go.” Cara looked questionly at Lucy then followed Ed outside.
Ed looked at Cara and smiled, “do you want to ride Philip?” Cara looked at him confused, “Philip?” Ed grinned, “my horse,” he walked into the stable and a beautiful brown horse followed him out. “This is Philip,” he said to Cara. “Hello Cara.” Cara jumped, “it..it talks.”
Ed laughed at her puzzled expression. “Of course I talk dear girl,” Philip said. Cara stepped closer to Ed, keeping him between her and Philip. “I think I’ll walk,” she said quietly. Ed looked at her, “its ok Cara, he won’t hurt you.” Cara looked up at him, “I’d rather walk.”​
 
Its pronounced like car-uh. :)

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Ed shrugged, “alright, we can walk.” They started walking across the thick green grass. Ed glanced at Cara, “so where are you from?” Cara kept looking straight ahead, “Calorman.” Ed’s eyes widened, “really? I’ve been to Calorman, it’s a nice place.” Cara shrugged, “I guess.” She could see Lucy up ahead, with Susan, and Peter. They were to them in a few minutes. “Hello Cara,” Susan said, “you look very nice today.” Cara smiled slightly, she’s trying to make up for what happened last night, she thought. “Thank you, you’re majesty.” Everyone stared at her; Lucy started to giggle, “we were wondering when you would figure out who we are.” Susan smiled slightly, “we should eat.” Cara sat down beside Lucy on the blanket, she was as far away from Peter as she could get. Peter glanced at her, he needed to talk to her. “That was delicious,” Ed said after he had finished eating, “how about a game of croquet?”​
Lucy grinned, “that is a wonderful idea Ed.” She stood up, “come on Su. Peter are you coming?” Peter looked up at Lucy, “no Lu, I’ll watch.” Lucy stared at him for a moment, she saw something in his eyes, something she hadn’t seen in a long time. A sparkle, Lucy smiled. “Alright,” she grabbed Ed’s hand and pulled him a few feet away. “Hey Lu! I know how to walk!” Lucy rolled her eyes, “come on Susan.” Susan sighed and walked over. Lucy grinned at looked at Susan and Edmund. “Now there is only one rule I must remind you of, I win.” Ed playfully pushed her, “not before I win.” Lucy grinned and glanced over to Peter and Cara. Oh dear, Ed is not going to be happy. “Well, come on, let’s play,” Susan said.​
Peter tried to watch the game, but he couldn’t help but notice that Cara seemed absolutely terrified of him. He glanced at her quickly. There was something about her, he didn’t know what, that had captured him and wouldn’t let go. She wasn’t a simpleton, he knew that much. He looked back at the game for a second, Lucy was winning, but not by much. He glanced back at Cara, he could hardly take his eyes off her. Something hit his cheek, he looked up. The sky had darkened, it had started to rain. “Everyone in side, it’s going to poor any minute,” he shouted as he grabbed the blanket and secured it to his saddle. Peter glanced up from his horse, Cara was with Susan on her horse. He got on his horse quickly, it was raining harder now.​
“Well that was fun,” Lucy said as she walked in dripping wet. “I would have won to if it hadn’t started to rain.” Ed closed the door behind Peter, “no you wouldn’t have, we both know I would have won.” Lucy glared at him, “you can believe that if you want, but I would have won.” Ed laughed, “no you wouldn’t…” Peter slammed his sword onto the table, “that’s enough!” He took a deep breath, “now I think we better all go to bed, we have to be up before sun rise tomorrow, and no arguing.” Susan nodded, “you’re right, off to bed everyone.” Cara followed Lucy out of the room, Ed trailed after them.​
“Peter,” Susan said after she heard three doors open and close “are you alright?”Peter slowly looked at her. “I don’t know Su. I can’t keep doing this. I get almost no sleep, I can’t talk to anyone without getting mad, and I can’t even have fun anymore.” He sighed, “I don’t know what to do.” Susan gently touched his arm, “everything will be alright, you need to relax.” Peter nodded, “I think your right. Good night Su.” He hugged her quickly and walked to his room.​
 
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Cara looked around quickly; she heard footsteps. Peter came around the corner, holding a sword. There was an evil glint in his eyes. He raised his sword and pointed it at her. Cara ran; she could hear him right behind her. She came to a dead end; Cara turned around, Peter was standing in the door way. He came closer. Cara stepped back, her back touched the wall. Peter stepped in front of her, he drew his sword back. Cara screamed as he thrust it into her.​
Cara jerked awake, she sat up. Someone was calling her name, her door was flung open. Peter stood there. Cara jumped out of her bed, clad only in her silky pale blue nightgown that had been a gift from Queen Lucy.​
“Cara, it’s alright,” Peter said, stepping towards her, away from the door. Cara ran around the end of her bed and out the door. She could hear Peter behind her. “Cara stop!” She kept going, he wants to kill me! Peter ran after her down the hall, he saw a door open but didn’t stop to see who it was. Cara ran into the garden. “Stay away from me,” she screamed. Peter stopped at the entrance, “Cara, I’m not going to hurt you.” He stepped closer. “Stop!” Cara picked up a pot to hit him with if he got to close. “You want to kill me! Don’t pretend you don’t!” Peter stopped and stared at her. “What are you talking about? Cara I’d never hurt you.” Cara stepped back, “just like your knights would never hurt my family? They killed them! You’re knights killed my family and you expect me to trust you? I should kill you!” Peter stood still, he didn’t know what to say. “I’m sorry Cara, but I didn’t have anything to do with that. Narnia doesn’t have any knights.” He took another step towards her. She raised the pot to hit him if he got to close. “I won’t hurt you Cara,” he stepped closer, he was right in front of her now. “I promise.” Cara looked at him for a moment; she knew he was telling the truth, she dropped the pot. “I..I’m sorry, I…I,” She started crying. Peter pulled her into his arms; he could feel her body shake with sobs. Peter held her till she stopped crying, he gently picked her up. He looked down at her, she was asleep. Peter walked out of the garden and carried her across the hall to his room. He quietly closed the door after him and walked over to his bed, he gently placed her on it. Peter sat down and watched her sleep, what have you been through? He wondered.​
Peter looked up; someone was knocking on his door. He put a blanket over Cara and walked to the door; he quietly opened it. “Lucy,” he whispered, “what are you doing up?” Lucy looked up at him, “I heard someone walking in the halls.” Peter smiled slightly, “I couldn’t sleep.” Lucy smiled slightly, she knew he was lying but didn’t say anything, “ok, good night Peter.” She turned and walked back to her room, Peter closed the door after her. He walked back over to his chair and sat down. Cara was still sleeping. Peter watched her, he wished he knew who she was. His room suddenly got extremely bright, Peter quickly looked away. The light was gone. Peter slowly looked back. His heart stopped. “Aslan.”​
Peter slowly stood up. Aslan stood on the balcony, looking at him with big golden eyes. Peter stood as Aslan walked closer. “Hello Peter,” Aslan looked at Cara. “Lucy has been worried about you, she was right to be worried.” Peter stared at him for a moment, “Lucy? Worried? I don’t understand.” Peter sat down. “Aslan, what’s going on? Who is Cara?” Aslan stopped beside Cara, she was still sleeping. He gently breathed on her. “You will know all when the time is right Peter. But know this; Cara’s future will affect all of Narnia. Protect her with your life.” Peter blinked, Aslan was gone.​
 
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Peter looked at Cara as she slept. Now what am I going to do? He wondered. Peter stood up and walked over to the balcony, he looked out over the clear blue water. What did you mean Aslan? Who is she? Peter sighed, he needed to clear his head. He looked back, Cara was still sleeping. He grabbed his coat and silently walked out into the hall. He took the back stairs down to the beach and walked out. He took a deep breath of the clear air and started walking. How could one person affect all of Narnia? She would have to be queen. Peter stopped walking. That’s it, her parents, maybe they ruled…something? Peter sighed, this isn’t helping. He turned and started walking back. I could check the records to see if any rulers had a daughter that would be about her age. He walked back in to Cair Paravel using the back stairs.​
Peter silently went down to the treasury where the records were kept. He stopped and stared at them.​
 
Maybe this wasn’t such a great idea, he thought, seeing the thousands of books. Peter walked over the shelf and scanned the books, searching for the right one. He reached out and grabbed a large book bound with black leather off the shelf. He walked over to his desk and sat down.​
Peter flipped through the book then slammed it shut. Nothing, he thought frustrated. He stood up suddenly, knocking the chair over. It landed on the stone floor with a loud crash.​
Cara’s eyes snapped open. She looked around the room, she wasn’t in her room. Her eyes came to rest on a sword with a lion on the hilt. She gasped. She was in High King Peter’s room, in his bed. Everything that had happened a few hours before came flooding back. She sat up quickly, scrambling out of the bed. Her foot got tangled in the sheets, she fell face head first onto the thick rug. She pulled her foot free and ran to the door. Cara jerked the door open and stepped into the hall as she silently closed the door behind her. She took a deep breath and ran down the hall toward her room. She heard something behind her; Cara glanced over her shoulder. She suddenly ran into something hard, and warm. She turned and found herself face to face with King Edmund. They stared at each other for a moment. Cara could feel him get closer, his hand brushed hers.​
 
oh Ed! Come on why is she so terrified of Peter?
You'll find out. ;)
*raises eyebrows* So where's the story that you promised you would post today? :p;)

Sorry. :eek: I was really busy.


“Ed,” someone called from behind them. Cara stepped back quickly. Lucy was walking towards them. Relief washed over Cara. “Did you hear that noise,” Lucy asked when she reached them. Ed nodded slowly, “yeah, it sounded like it came from down stairs.” Lucy nodded, she glanced at Cara. “Oh dear, you must be freezing.” Cara looked down; she had forgotten to put a robe on over her nightgown. “Su,” Lucy called to Susan who was just walking out of her room. “Bring a robe for Cara with you.” Susan nodded and ducked back into her room. She re-emerged a moment later carrying a black robe. Susan handed the robe to Cara once she reached them; “here, this should keep you warmer.” She said with a smile. Cara put the robe on and pulled the belt tight; she smiled shyly, “thanks…your majesty.” For the first time she noticed what the others were wearing. Lucy and Susan were both wearing nightgowns and robe, but Edmund was wearing black pants and a loose black shirt, it looked as if he had planned to go somewhere after they were all asleep. Lucy and Susan both seemed to notice the same thing Cara had, they looked at each other then Ed.​
“Where’s Peter?” Lucy asked suddenly. Ed and Su looked at each other. “The noise,” they said in unison. Lucy looked at Ed then turned and ran down the stairs. Ed and Su looked at each other then ran after her. Cara stood still for a moment, not wanting to go down stairs but also no wanting to be left by herself. She sighed and slowly followed them.​
Peter reached down to pick up the chair; he noticed a piece of paper sticking out of a book. He moved the other book carefully; he didn’t want to stir up too much dust. Peter looked at the only book left on the floor and curiously picked it up. The book was covered with some kind of wood, with carvings in it. Odd, Peter thought as he opened the book. He felt is heart stop beating; this wasn’t a book of any Narnian. This was a book the White Witch’s. What’s this doing here? He wondered as he flipped through it; he got to the page with the letter. Peter looked at the letter, he couldn’t believe what he was reading. He sank down into his chair. How could she? He thought angrily, how she could murder an entire royal family and all their knight? He looked away, the women and child, all of them, murdered. He crumpled the letter in his hand and threw it across the room. Peter looked up suddenly; someone was coming down the steps.​



here is a pic of Cara: http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k315/oxfordugirl/ist2_3909019_beauty_shot.jpg
 
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