"Hidden Dreamer" (my songs and poems)

WillsGirl said:
Yeah, Thanks! It wasn't great because I was so nervous but once I started I did alright. I know I was better than a nice number of people because they were just awful LOL like on American Idol!!! LOL
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HAHA.....Im sure you were better than them if it was like on American Idol. I dont mean anything mean against American Idol I was referring to the beginning auditions. ( In case someone was going to get upset I thought I would clear that right now)
 
ha ha ha. LOL no, I'm still not even as confident as I would like.
But when someone finds a way to sing a song in three different key almost at the same time... well it's not so pretty ya know?
 
LOL, but I didn't get it, niether did anyone else I know... everyone is saying they chose unusual people but I got free seats out of the deal! I'm not so sure I wanted to sing in front of that many people anyway. LOL
So... I'm trying to write a duet with a friend of mine but it's not working so great.
 
Wow!

WillsGirl said:
I guess... I just want another place to get my feelings out.
And I wouldn't mind some feed back. I mean... I do kind of want to know if I'm on the right trach here. I LOVE to sing but I don't have a lot of expieriance writing lyrics so... I'm just going to post some things.

I wrote this song after my family went through "The Cancer Wars"


To See Your Face

Through the window I watched it rain,
Through my tears I watched your pain.
You were there in every thought,
I was scared but you were not.

Chorus:
And I will wait 'till kingdom come,
To see your face, the way it was,
Before the rain
Before the pain
To go back in time, and just play again.

I was lost,
In the darkness there,
I counted cost,
But didn't care.
I wanted you,
to be whole again.
I missed my cue,
And fell into sin.

Chorus

Through the songs
And through the nights
Oh how long,
Without light?
I saw you change, day by day
Stuck in a cage, with nothin' to say.

Chorus

We made it through one tough year,
But not without a thousand tears.
And I have yet, to see your face,
The way it was before life changed.

Chorus

Bridge:
To go back in time, and just play again,
Like the good 'ole times, my brother friend.

Now I know, we all have changed,
And life will never be the same,
But I still wait wait, to see your face,
the wat it was,
Before Cancer came
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Wow! :)
I have never seen anything like that before! I love those lyrics! You really do have a gift! You should like publish them or something! :)
 
~Wylla~ said:
Wow! :)
I have never seen anything like that before! I love those lyrics! You really do have a gift! You should like publish them or something! :)
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aaawww that is one of the sweetest compliments I have ever heard! Thank you!
 
OH NOW I REMEMBER! I knew it was tryouts of some sort just couldn't remember...its your fault you didn't respond for so long!:D
 
Lost in a world of eveire judgement.
Where is the love, where are the sentaments?
You know everything, or thing you do.
Really, you know nothing, and you know it too.
You have a mask, a great disguise,
giving me feelings, oh how I dispise.
you have to be in the middle of it all,
everyone is waiting to watch you fall.
Stop this pretense, I'm not the only one who sees through.
Everyone knows the REALL you.
Stop judging everyone, you don't know.
Your bring hate upon yourself JUST GO!

okay this was an on the spot thing because someone really upset me... :eek: :rolleyes:
 
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