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"Kandie, you all right?" Joe asked, coming up behind me.
"I'm fine, Joe." I hated when he worried about me, especially when he did too much.
"Are you sure?" He rubbed one hand up and down my back.
I, again, took a deep breath and let it out. "I don't know." I whispered in reply.
"What's wrong?" Joe's hand stopped at my shoulder, he turned me around.
"I don't feel good." I said looking up at him.
"Do you want me to take you home?" Joe reached up and brushed his thumb underneath my right eye where a tear had started to appear.
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Aww that is soo sweet. Sounds like something my shane would do....*happy sighs*I love the romance...very awesome!

Keep writing!!!!!
 
cfsgirl said:
Aww that is soo sweet. Sounds like something my shane would do....*happy sighs*I love the romance...very awesome!

Keep writing!!!!!
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haha. Thanks Sarah!! :D I'll write and post something different...Elements for NightCrawler and LBT... :D I'm a romantic...most of the time.
 
A Letter

Here's a letter I wrote....


“I would be lying to you if I said that everything was OK. I am not OK, I like you, and I don’t know if I should. Two weeks I went without talking to you, and it made me like you more; instead of less. You said I wasn’t excited to talk to you. I was happy, but it’s hard liking some one who doesn’t like you back, and who you have BARELY A CHANCE with. I would stop talking to you, for a while, if I knew it helped and if I wanted to. I don’t want to mess up the friendship that we have. I just want to figure out what you want me to do.

I would be lying to you if I said it doesn’t hurt. I told you I didn’t need to like you, this is why. Why like someone you have never seen, probably never will see, and who isn’t available (right now)?? I try to stop, and find that I can’t. So I stop fighting. I cried for and about you, and I wanted to cry because of you. It’s not your fault, you’re not doing anything to me. I am afraid to say much of this to you, that’s why I’m writing this. Because, if you respond, it won’t be immediate. So, I’m going to stop now, before I say even more things that I don’t need to say.

~Candi
 
A Poem I wrote last night:

I knew I shouldn’t have

But I let my feelings out.

So now I lay here

With red, stinging eyes

And a pain in my heart.

There is only one thing

That can slide through

The ice that covers my heart:

Daggers.

Thrown by, not him this time,

But her.

The one who hates me,

Because I like him…

Or I did.

There is only one thing

That can BREAK the ice:

An arrow.

That arrow has not yet

Been shot.

It is the arrow

Of TRUE LOVE.
​

P.S That "letter" was suppose to be a poem type thing.


DestinyLies
 
I really like both. :D Did you see that I posted some of the rose fairy banners I'd finished in my banner thread??? If you want I can repost them here. I finished them all.
 
The peom was well written. Vivid imagery. (ooo. that sounded proffesional! 0.o)
I suppose it was based on what you're going through? I'm praying, Des. *hugs*
 
Thanks to you both!!! If you don't mind reposting the banners here that would be good. Thanks .I'll go look in your thread as well though.

It is something that I'm going through (the poem)...thanks for the prayers.
 
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