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Another idea...

I came up with another story idea....


The characters are fairies. The fairies that we normally don't hear about. Those that live in the woods so far out that hardly anyone has ever found them. The race of fairies that fight for their home, their lives. Who do they fight? Whoever threatens them. The story is mainly about the "General" of their "military/army". I haven't decided of her name, yes it's a girl, I have Adela or Katari right now. But she's a "dark" girl as she has a past that has caused her to "forget to love" yet not hate....what do you think???

DestinyLies
 
Well, it has been a while since I've written....


It's been almost a year since he's been gone,
And it has not been an easy year.
From his resemblance,
To him so called being alive.
I've cried many times,
And its not something I like doing.
I hide inside myself,
Not allowing many-if any- in.

But the few that have come in,
Have made such an impact on my life.
Like the young man who wasn't planning
On being anything other than a friend,
Who can see straight through me,
To the damaged, and cowering heart beneath
My dark, flashing eyes.
And see the light inside of me.





DestinyLies
 
I found one

I found a poem I wrote over the summer....


Tears streaked down my face
As I watched you walk away.
I didn't wait very long,
Before running to my room.
I know you don't like it
When I am not OK.
But it's hard when I can't talk to you,
And I want to so badly.
My heart cries out
As the tears continue to fall.
I love you so much
And PLEASE don't forget that.


DestinyLies
 
Yes...we didn't break up or anything...it got better...than bad again...but it wasn't me or my boyfriend doing anything to each other it was our "bosses" who weren't agreeing with some stuff.
 
As promised---a poem "I Love You."

Here is a "poem" I wrote, the idea came when I was editing a picture of me and my love..here it is:


I love you. Three simple words spoken. Simple words that mean so much. They are simple, but there meaning is not so simple. It may seem easy to love someone, and sometimes it happens fast; too fast at times. To love some one appears to be an easy task to those who are viewing, and it is easy most of the time. It's not so much hard as it is dangerous. To say "I love you" to someone and mean it is the key. Meaning it is what is important. "I love you" is not a phrase just to throw around, or say to some one you hardly know. It is a fragile phrase, it can hurt both the people who don't mean it and the people they say it to. When love is truly felt, and felt strongly it is often tested. It is hard to understand sometimes the reason someone is loved by another, even by the one that is loved. But it is not what needs to be understood its what needs to be accepted despite the confusion.

DestinyLies
 

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Another poem

A poem I wrote the other day while at work about the previous night:
The longer I am
Away from him.
The more I realize
Just how much
I love him.
The more time I have,
Without having him close,
The more I want and cherish,
His embrace.
The longer I sleep alone
The more I love
Sleeping to the sound
Of his breathing,
And the feel
Of his heartbeat.

And another:
Laying alone in my bed last night,
Unable to sleep until late.
He had been asleep
For a few hours by then,
But I could not figure out
Why I had yet to slumber.
And then I realized:
I was lonely.
That I missed him.
I missed having him near me,
Holding me close against him.
But as I lie alone in the silence,
I noticed what, out of everything,
That I missed the most;
Sleeping to the sound of his breathing,
And the feel of his heartbeat.



Well?????

DestinyLies
 
Um, no. Some were about my friends death, some are about my boyfriend. And most are writings. Stories. What do you mean rhythmic measure??
 
Whoops! I just misidentified, the guy on your siggy as your dearly departed friend! Now that I saw the link, I've been mistaken. Forgive me for the mistake. BTW, I'm sorry about your friend's passing. I haven't lost someone close to me yet, so I can't know how you feel, but you do have my sympathy.

In my creative writing class, my teacher has been ranting about the rhythmic meter in poetry, the thought is that at a certain beat, the poetry should read/flow easily. But, then again I dislike writing poetry and didn't pay good attention in that lesson...
 
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Omg, I found this thread again!! The other day I was like "I remember reading these awesome stories on TDL. Especially one about a guy who lives on the moon." 0.o I've been looking for them ever since and I've found them! I haven't had a chance to catch up on all the writing that I missed, but I'll get on it. ;)
 
Aaaaaw. :D Thanks. I feel so honored and special. :D I hopefully will be adding more to this. Also my livejournal has a lot and I might make a tumblr for it. :D
 
Here is something I wrote late one night when I couldn't sleep:

Blessings: Gifts from God that we may or may not ask for, but because God's grace and love He gives us gifts. These "gifts" can be a variety of things; a person, for example, comes int oour lives at the right time. Or a check in the mail,mayube, comes just as we think we can't get by, can't pay that bill.
A blessing in the form of a person, a human being, doesn't have to be some one we know, or even some one our age. This "angel" can be an adult, a child, or a teen; they can be a bum on the street, or the richest person in town. A blesing can be received in a number of ways. One way is, verbally-- a compliment, perhaps, some one at work tells you that you look great today, or have been doing a great job lately, when, possibly, you were feeling down right headous or useless. Or maybe a blessing is received the second way, non-verbal (at the moment I can't think of a nicer word), via a nice e-mail or card left on your desk, or some other little gift to lift up your spirits. Maybe the third way of receiving a blessing from a person: presence. Presence is possibly something you need at the time, a shoulder to cry on, a listening ear, or simply just some one to sit by your side.
I have often heard stories about how God "blesses" some one by putting it on some one else's heart to send this person a check, not knowing why, or what for. And it just so happens to be that the receiver of this check was worrying, stressing, about how to pay the next car payment or power bill, and received the check in the exact ammount needed. Or a car is needed and that prayer is answered by, again, opening an individual's heart.


I am truly blessed by God. I have a great family that loves me, a awesome group of friends. I have a wonderful church to attend, and attend freely and publicly, with a great pastor, and a good job I can count on getting paid from every two weeks.
I have life. And I, being a four-month pre-mature infant, have the blessing of life. A double-blessing since I shouldn't live any way because of sin. My family was told multiple times that I wouldn't live. Five hours after I was born, give or take a few hours, a training doctor was working near by where I was laying in an incubator. This person mixed alcohol with Bedadine--two chemicals you NEVER mix together, and spilled it where I was laying. I laid in the spill for four hours, to the neglegance of the doctors. I was unable to scream or cry because of a tube down my throat, if I have gotten my facts right from my mom. I now have second- and third-degree burns from my mid-back down to my thighs, spread over on my calves, and a few blotches on my hands and feet. And then the scar across my stomach, aka my "zipper", was made a month after I was born because or a whole in my stomach. This scar is sunk into my skin, not flat like most scars.
The doctors didn't, and still don't, know the reason that I lived. One answer: God. The power of prayer as well, I guess. Many prayers were lifted to God for me and my family then...and that was almost 20 years ago. I still suffer mild, or rarely, major, pain from my scars, but that is a reminder that I am alive, and can feel pain. And also, that I am truly, truly, blessed to be.

So, the next time you think about shrugging off that compliment, or throwing that unopened card in the trash, think about the blessings of life, and what all God has done, and given you.


Well??
DestinyLies
 
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