tirian_son_of_erlian
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Well, that's not a bad idea at all. To show Jadis in her world before being placed in her dormant state would make things more interesting, as opposed to just having our first introduction of her being her sitting there on the throne when Digory awakens her. Hmm, you've got some good ideas Bob. But I get caught up in the details. Say they start that way. How would they then transition to London (after such a presumably intense scene)? I want the beginning of the story to focus on Polly and Digory's relationship and their knack for exploration.