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The Evacuation

Finally Sir Godfrey and Balin reached Archenland. The sight was horrible, the villages where burning and the sky was coveredi n smoke. Godfrey moved up to the front and looked in horror. He then looked at Balin and said "We most help them". "agrred" replied Balin. "Troops, prepare for battle!" shouted Godfrey unsheathing his sword. behind Godfrey the masses of men and beast unsheated there sword and raised there shields in a war cry. Godfrey the pulled on his reigns and lifted his sword forward. Godfrey, Balin and the army trotted at great speed towards the nearest village

Before they reached the village a mass of dark creature approached moving slowly. Godfrey lead his men strait into them slicing and cutting through them like feathers. Godfrey thne lead thme on into the vilalge, where they where met by townsfolk trying to hold there ground. Godfrey dismounted and appraoched the man in charge. "Captian, what is the situation?" asked Godfrey. "We are overrun, Anvard has fallen, and most of the villages have been burned to the ground" replied the Captian. Godfrey sighed and asked "where is the King's army?". "Dead..." replied the Captian. Godfrey's face became grim as he asked "and the King?". "The same" replied the Captian.

Godfrey then covered his eyes with his grantlet, trying to hide the tears. He then looked up seeing mass of darkness approaching. As Godfrey eyes widened and his mouth dropped in aw, a scout approached. The scout walked over to the Captian, covered in ash and blood. "the remaining villages have fallen"-"We are all that's left!..". "What are there numbers, how big is this army?" asked Godfrey. "I don't know, there number increase with each victory" replied the Scout. Godfrey paused and looked at Balin. "what shall we do Godfrey?" asked Balin. Godfrey stayed silent for moment and then said "we shall evacuate". "Gather everyone you can, we will head back to Narnia" said Godfrey. Balin nodded and ordered the troops into seprate teams to serach for survivors. Meanwhile Godfrey and Balin helped the Captian gather the rest of the soldiers.
 
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Chloe was standing beside Eringuard looking out over the ocean. The sun was setting painting the sky in reds, pinks, and purples. "Beautiful," she commented with a smile. Eringuard nodded. She took his hand in hers, "Eringuard, what did you leav-" Chloe stopped abruptly, startling Eringuard, who had looked over to her. She turned pale, and seemed to stop breathing.
"Chloe?" Eringuard turned. She began to shake and suddenly doubled over. "Chloe?!" Eringuard caught her, helping her sit back against the banister. "Chloe? Chloe what's wrong?" She was trembling, and her eyes focused on something unseen. He grabbed her chin and tried to get her to focus on him, but she wouldn't.
Chloe spoke finally after several moments. "Eringuard, something terrible is going to happen," she prophecized, her eyes flickering to meet his, tears rolling down her cheeks. "Something terrible..."
 
Mizar Fallows Godfrey:

As Godfrey and the others prepared to evacuate, Mizar's forces headed towards the last village. When the reached the village, they found is desolate and empty. As the Commander scratched his head, Mizar appeared next to him. The commander bowed and said "my lord". Mizar scanned the area with his red piercing eyes. He then turned to the commander and asked "Where are villagers?". The commander shaking answered "We don't know, my lord..". Mizar looked at the commander with a awful frown, he then lifted him into the air crushing him from within. Mizar then turned to a sergeant and said "you!, congratulations you've just be promoted". the Sergeant bowed looking rather frightened.

Mizar then raised his hands and spoke in a strange ancient language. Mizar's eyes turned a bright blue, and he saw using darkness Godfrey's army escorting the villagers. Mizar cringed as his eyes turned fire like, he then looked to the new commander and said "The villagers are heading to Narnia, they are escorted by knights"-"Go and head them off..". The commander nodded and gathered the army. Mizar stood looking to the mountains with a piercing glaze, he then turned and shouted in an ancient language. And from the flames of the village a great beast arose in flight. It swooped down, landing next to Mizar. Mizar mounted it and took off into the sky.

Hovering above, Mizar watched as his army marched on to it's final
 
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Eringuard had been trying to force Chloe to return to her room for nearly an hour, but she refused to leave the balcony, continuously looking in the direction of Archenland, her lips moving, almost as though in a chant. He knew she was praying, but she wouldn't tell him more than what she had told him when she had collapsed. She barely moved even when the wind proved feirce as it rolled off the ocean. She fiddled with her necklace, just praying.
Eringuard remained by her side, placing his cloak around her after the sun set. He had called a sentry when she had collapsed, and the sentry was going to her room to collect a couple of items that Eringuard had asked for. He knew she knew something that she didn't want to let go of. She wouldn't leave until it was resolved.
She sighed shocking him, "they aren't out of the woods yet," she said before continuing with her prayers.
The guard returned giving Chloe a curious look when he handed Eringuard the bundle. Eringuard sent him away before he could asked questions.
Setting up a place to rest, he coaxed Chloe into the blankets. She sat looking towards Archenland, continuing to pray as she looked. She was worried, but she was stubborn. How long will we stay here? he wondered watching her.


She sat there for days, before he managed to force her into the castle to rest and bathe properly, on the condition that he stayed and watched over the horizon. He did, and watched as she reluctantly left. She was back within the hour, walking immediatly to the railing she scanned it. She continued to pray.
It was another few days before he realized what she was searching for;Within the forest a large group of people could be seen. She bolted from the balcony, recruiting sentries as she ran to the main entrance. She ran out to the gates forcing the guards to open them. She stood there, Eringuard coming up beside her, all the sentries looking on in curiousity. When the people became visible, they understood, and all went to help. Chloe did as well, much to Eringuard's dismay, he lost sight of her in the crowd, though her red hair was a hard thing to miss.
 
War on the Horizon:

After traveling several days without hardly any rest, Godfrey's scouts spotted Cair Paraval in the distance. "were almost there, pass the word on" said Godfrey. Several soldiers moved up and down the convoy encouraging the people to keep moving. As they moved a slow pace, a scout headed to the rear. There he climbed up on a large rock and looked back at the plains. as gazed at the tree line, he saw thousands of lights moving. As he fixated his eyes he saw that they where Mizar's army. The scout leapt off the rock and headed to the front of the convoy. there he told Godfrey, "Mizar's army is right behind us!". Godfrey was awestruck, he then told the scout "Tell everyone to speed up".

The scout nodded and passed the word on. The convoy began to move a steady pace. they finally made it over the mountain peaks and headed down a trail to Cair Paraval. Finally they reached Cair Paraval's gates. Horns and trumpets blew as the gates opened. Godfrey lead everyone inside, making sure that no one was left outside the gates. He then ordered that the gates be barricade shut. The villagers spread out catching there breath and talking to one another. The Surviving Archenland soldiers joined the Narnian forces in the barracks. There they told terrible stories of what had happened.

Godfrey, Bain and the Captain headed into the throne room, where they greeted King Peter. Godfrey then began to tell king Peter of the horrifying events that he saw in Archenland. "The king is dead!?" asked King Peter with shocked expression. "Yes my lord, the evil Sorcerer Mizar slayed him" said the Captain. King Peter swooned and mourned over his fallen friend. "My king, we have pressing matters" said Balin. "Mizar's army isn't far behind"-"They will reach us in a fortnight" said Balin. King Peter sat down on his throne and starred. He then looked up and Godfrey and Balin and said "Prepare the forces for battle"-"I won't lute Cair Paraval fall!". King Peter then dismissed Godfrey and Balin. Godfrey and Balin left the throne room and headed into the war room. There they began to plan there defenses and strategize how to bring down such a massive army
 
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Chloe helped the guards with the newcomers late into the night, most of the people were sleeping in the halls. Chloe willing gave up her bed for several children. It was early in the morning when Eringuard forced Chloe to rest.

Chloe didn't sleep long, a child cried out for his mother, and she took to caring for the child. Eringuard helped, though he too was very tired. Lots of children had been seperated from their parents in the rush, and Chloe set around to making sure that every parent missing their child could find them easily in Chloe's room. She was stock full of nearly 40 children and they found friends and stayed together in groups. They adapted fast to knew surroundings, playing around in Chloe's room. Parent's were glad to discover their children and within the next 24 hours, most of the children had found their families. A few stayed, so Chloe kept them company.
A little girl was all that remained in the end. She didn't speak at all, only sat in silence. Chloe couldn't get her to speak, but she managed to get her to eat.
Chloe heard rumors that Mizar's army was following, and what she had heard from the people, he was terrifying. She was scared for everyone, and continued to pray as she took care of the girl she called Abby.
 
Mizar's Forces reach Narnia!:

the next day around evening, the mountain peaks around Cair Paraval lite up with thousands of lights. Up in the sky Mizar rode his beast, swooping down unto a peak. he looked down at the small castle and smiled. One of his commanders came before him and said "The forces are in position, my lord..". Mizar turned fixating his eyes on the commander and said "good, tell them to head down the peaks and surround the castle". The Commander bowed and said "It shall be done my lord". As the commander headed down the slope to give out orders, Mizar starred up in the sky glaring at the moon. he thne raised his had and said "Glazorock, Shada!". a large cloud of darkness covered the sky, casting shadows through out the valley.

Mizar then grabbed the reigns of his beast and soared into the blackened sky. Meanwhile his army marched down the steep peaks, moving like a slithery serpent down the mountains. after several hours of climbing down the steep slops, the army reached Cair Paraval. Like a massive wave of darkness, the army surrounded the castle.

Mizar swooped down on his beast and landed on the ground. he order the commander to begin the attack. the Commander grabbed a horn and blew it, causing the army to growl and move forward. Mizar smiled as he watched his legions move upon the castle like hand over a chess piece, only this time it was the King. The army laded catapults with stones burning, and they carried large latters forward. A mass of the creatures carried a battering ram towards the front gate. There was no denying it now, the battle has began...
 
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Chloe had been sleeping, Abby curled up in her arms, Eringuard comfortably snuggled up behind her. They were all fitful when suddenly Abby jumped up into a sitting position, startling both Chloe and Eringuard awake. "Abby? What's wrong?" Chloe asked touching the girls small face. She was covered in sweat, but her skin was cold.
She scrambled out from under the sheets, bolting to the door. "Abby!" Chloe cried, crossing the room to the girl, followed closely by Eringuard. Abby began trying to open the door, but Eringuard scooped her up.
"Abby calm down," he said as she fought against him.
"What do you want Abby?" Chloe asked her as she continued to struggle.
Eringuard looked at Chloe in confusion, but Chloe shrugged. "Shall we take a walk around the castle?" she asked.
Eringuard nodded, and Chloe being the only one with free hands, grabbed the cloaks and opened the door. Once out in the hall, Abby calmed down, though she still seemed tense. "I wonder-" Chloe began but stopped abruptly.
 
Enemy at the Gates:

At moment Godfrey and Balin where in the main hall talking with King Peter. They where trying to decide how to best position the troops on the roof. As they carried on, a scout came running down a flight of stairs slightly out of breath. King Peter, Godfrey, and Balin turned there attention to the scout. After breathing heavily, he said "Mizar's army.., is outside the castle!". King Peter, Godfrey and Balin's eyes went wide. Balin approached the scout and asked "are you sure?". "Positive, they have surrounded the entire castle" replied the scout. Godfrey turned to King Peter and said "Then we should position the troops at once". King Peter nodded and said "right, I shall go and get my armor". King Peter then parted and headed for the treasury, where a servant began putting on his battle armor.

Godfrey and Balin lead the troops up several flights of stairs, where they reached the roof. As Godfrey and Balin ordered them into position, they gazed at the endless lights and shadows surrounding the castle. For the first time in his life, Godfrey felt fear...
 
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ooc: oooh shoot this is intense!! shall i join the battle!?!

ic: Susan, after walking for hours around the castle gardens, heard much commotional going on at the main entrance. She took off in a run towards the great noise she heard. She saw crowds of people rushing into the great halls, and heard a loud horn blaring in the distance.
"hurry! everyone inside!" A man yelled from the doors.
Susan took no second to think, but quickly run for the doors and found herself surrounded by many people she knew not. She frantically looked around for someone she knew.
 
Chloe saw several groups of soldiers running this way and that when they got into another larger hall. Abby screamed suddenly, trying to weasle out of Eringuard's arms. "Abby! Abby calm down!" Chloe cried trying to help her. But Abby was to fast and took off down the hall. "Abby!!" Chloe yelled as she took off after her, followed by Eringuard. They caught up with her in another hall. "Abby stop! Come here!" Chloe called. Abby looked to Chloe tears on her cheeks, looking ahead to the dead end, before turning and running back into Chloe's arms. Eringuard and Chloe exchanged knowing looks. Mizar was here...


They returned to the hall, stopping one of the soldiers to ask where Godfrey was and he directed them to the roof. When they arrived there, Chloe who knew Godfrey, walked up to him.
"Sir Godfrey, what's going on?" she asked, but she stopped when she saw the army that surrounded the castle. She almost didn't want to breathe as she felt Abby trembling in her arms. Eringuard placed a hand on her back, looking down at her.
This was going to be bad...
 
ooc: ugh i gtg. i gotta big day tomorrow, so i needa sleep!!! So happy this thread is ALIVEEEEE :D if ya need to go ahead and take susan for a while if anyone wants to use her. tt you all later! bye
 
The Battle Begins:

Godfrey turned to Chloe and grabbed her hand. "Chloe you need to get back inside". Chloe looked into Godfrey's worn eyes and obeyed. As she looked back, she saw Godfrey standing strong as large fire stones landed next to him.

In the main hall, the front gate was rumbling and shaking, loud thumps echoed through out the castle. Several guards braced the barricades with there bodies, trying to hold it still. But after several more thumps, the gate was breached. masses of dark creatures began tarrying through the wood with there blades and teeth. The Soldiers stood firm grasping there blades. Several archers released streams of arrows at the main gate, hitting several of the troops. Finally the front gate broke open, and the hordes of Mizar's forces pored in like rushing flood, attacking the Narnian soldiers. Blades clashed, shields splintered and blood poured over the floor.

On the roof, catapults continued to fling burning stones at Godfrey and his men. Godfrey ordered the archers in place, and with the way of his sword they fired into the dark hordes below. Godfrey then ordered a volley, and then ordered to fire the catapults. Several large rocks flung into the air landing on the dark hordes. Godfrey continued this patter of attack for many more hours.

In the main hall, Balin lead a masses of troops against the hordes. Balin grasping his two blades ran into the hordes cutting and slicing them into pieces. Fallowing him the troops engaged the enemy doing there best to stop them. Within a short period of time Balin and his men defeated the first wave of troops. As Balin and his men rested, they heard the horn of the enemy. And as they gazed at the gate, they saw even greater masses of troops moving towards them. "Men prepare!" shouted Balin as he grasped his sword.

Back on the roof, Godfrey and his men prepared to engage in close combat. several latters latched unto the roof and climbing them was endless dark hordes of Mizar's army. Godfrey ordered the archers to head to the top spires of the roof, while he and the rest of the troops held there position. At last the dark troops reached the roof and engaged Godfrey and his men in combat. Godfrey swung his sword with great strength, crushing and slashing through the on coming hordes. His men fought valiantly beside him, giving there all.

The Entire castle echoed with loud grunts, clashing swords and splintering wood.
 
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Chloe feared for Godfrey, knowing full well that she may never see him again. She carried Abby's trembling form, Eringuard leading her along. He had thought of staying, but knew that Chloe would need him for what she had planned. When they reached the main hall, Chloe caught sight of King Peter. "Take Abby," she instructed Eringuard over the noise, handing Abby who cried out to Chloe as she turned away. Chloe never heard it but Eringuard did.
Chloe grabbed King Peter's arm. "King Peter!" she shouted. "Where is the hidden exit located? I want to evacuate the women and children!"
Peter looked at her, and shouted in response, "the dining hall, and the chambers all have one. All the women and children are in the dining hall! Behind the large statue of Aslan is a knob, push it down, and it will open a secret door in the Cook's closet, take them and get out! Head to Tashbaan! Its the only place left! Go now!" Chloe nodded, hugging him before taking off to find Eringuard. Abby practically jumped back into Chloe's arms, but Chloe thought nothing of it. "Come on! We have to get the women and children out of here!"
She led the way to the dining hall, pushing down the lever behind Aslan before walking in. She shut the door and bolted it. Everyone in the room was terrified. "What's going on?" they asked.
"We're evacuating you. Everyone follow me!" she called. Turning to Eringuard, "take up the rear please."
She kissed his cheek before heading off to the kitchen. The hidden door was exactly where Peter had said it would be. She led them into the tunnels, Abby still shivering in her arms.
To the south... Chloe repeated to herself over and over again, forcing herself to keep herself calm. They walked for what seemed like forever, complete silence except for the occasional cry of a child. Oddly enough, all the lamps were lit and they had no problem walking through the tunnels. Chloe seemed to know which turns to take, and they never ended up at a dead end. It was late morning when they finally exited the tunnels, into the sunshine.
 
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Godfrey vs. Mizar Arial Battle:

On the roof, Godfrey stood grasping his blood stained sword. in the sky he saw figure moving closer each passing moment. Godfrey fixed his eyes on it and realized who it was. It was Mizar preparing to attack. Godfrey turned to his captain and said "Hold this line, I shall return shortly". Godfrey moved swiftly to the back of the roof where he mounted his old trusted friend Thorn. thorn soared into the sky, heading towards Mizar. "Alright Thorn, get me as close as you can" said Godfrey grasping his sword. "Ok, hang on" said Thorn as he speeded up. Finally Godfrey and Mizar came face to face. Mizar's burning red eyes pierced Godfrey's heart, filling him with fear. But despite his feelings Godfrey grasped his sword and encouraged Thorn forward. Mizar smiled vily and said "Ah a knight, how quaint". "I shall enjoy this" said Mizar with a vile smile. Godfrey pulled on Thorn's reigns evading Mizar's swooping attack.

thorn then turned around facing Mizar and his beast. "Alright, lutes do this together" said Godfrey. Godfrey pulled un the reigns causing Thorn to take off towards Mizar's position. Mizar smiled as he nudged his beast forward. the tow flew past each other causing there blades to clash. Mizar then turned his beast around and swooped towards Godfrey and Thorn. Godfrey pulled on the reigns and Thorn turned just in time to dodge Mizar's attack. Thorn then emitted fire from his mouth and blew it towards Mizar. The flame stopped in font of Mizar and vanished. Mizar's beast increased speed, coming strait at Godfrey. Godfrey and Thorn increased speed clashing with Mizar and hsi beast.

As Thorn grabbed a hold of the beast's neck with his teeth, Godfrey leapt unto Mizar's sattle and began attacking. Mizar blocked the blows with his dark blade and raised his hand sending Godfrey off of the beast. Godfrey grabbed the harness below, hanging hundreds of feet above the ground. thorn continued to bite and claw the beast, but Mizar leapt unto Thorn and stabbed his dark blade into his neck. Thorn roared and shook his head trying to get Mizar off. Finally Godfrey crawled unto the beast and leapt unto thorn attacking Mizar. Mizar vanished and appeared on his beast once again.

Godfrey noticed Thorn's wound and said "Thorn are you ok?". "Don't worry about me, keep you head in the battle" replied Thorn. Godfrey then pulled up on the reigns flying over Mizar and his beast. Mizar fallowed firing bursts of purple energy towards them. As Godfrey and Thorn turned, Godfrey pulled out his bow and aimed at Mizar's head. He released, missing and hitting the beast in the eye. The beast shrieked and began to spiral downward. Godfrey and Thorn fallowed. As they reached Mizar's position, Thorn emitted a flame burning the beast. Once the flame and smoke was gone, Godfrey looked for sight of Mizar. But he was gone. The beast then slammed into a large peak, crushing it instantly.

Godfrey searched the entire mountains for Mizar but he was no ware to be seen. Suddenly, Mizar appeared behind Godfrey and attacked. Godfrey rolled, almost falling off. he then leapt on to Thorn's torso and began swinging his sword. Mizar blocked his blows and casted a spell causing Godfrey to stop moving. Inside Godfrey felt his veins burning and his heart throbbing. Mizar began closing his hand and speaking strange words. Godfrey's eyesight began to blur and all noise in his ears faded. Godfrey collapsed unto thorn's hide, feeling his insides beginning to stretch. Mizar's eyes became black and his face pale. he smiled with glee as he moved his hands into position. But before he could finish the spell, Thorn grabbed him with his tail.

Godfrey still un able to see, could hear the loud roars Thorn made, as Mizar began cutting thorough his tail. Godfrey then focused and he could see a dark image moving. Godfrey grasped his sword and moved towards the figure. Godfrey then stabbed Mizar in the shoulder, cutting through him and stabbing Thorn’s tail. Mizar forced Godfrey back and vanished. He then reappeared and stabbed thorn in the back, causing him to shriek. Thorn then began to sway and spiral towards the ground. Godfrey crawled to the sattle and harness himself in. Mizar hung on to the loss strap, as Thorn spiraled and crashed on top of the castle.

Godfrey rolled off of Thorn and ran to his head. "Thorn!" shouted Godfrey. Thorn moved his head and said "I'm sorry Godfrey, I wasn’t strong enough..., forgive me...". "It's ok, you did the best you could" said Godfrey as tears ran down his eyes. "Godfrey, you have always been my best friend..."-"Please remember me fondly..." said Thorn with a gasp. "No Thorn!, don’t die..." said Godfrey hugging his head. Thorn then wrapped his wings around Godfrey and closed his eyes. Godfrey heard his heart beat drop and in time it stopped. Godfrey swooned and cried bitterly.

Godfrey then arose grasping his sword, tears pouring down his face he moved towards Mizar. in Godfrey's eyes there was an anger to terrible to describe, and as he moved closer to Mizar it grew stronger. Mizar arose with a vile smile on his face. "Your dragon was foolish to save you"-" because of you he is dead" said Mizar. Godfrey starred at Mizar with eyes so intent and so full of hate. Godfrey then raised his sword upward and said "He was my friend.., you pay for what you have done!". Mizar smiled and with the extending his hand, his dark blade floated into his hand. "shall we continue?" asked Mizar with vile smile. Godfrey then rushed him in furious rage, swinging his sword wildly. With each swing Godfrey's arms shook and his bones cracked.
 
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OOC: Mizar has taken seige to the castle. You're with me, we're walking in a tunnle with a bunch of villagers from Archenland. We're going to Tashbaan. Just stay with me....
 
Um is a battle going on or something? Where is Mizar and Lucy and Piyralis and Peter and Godfrey and Susan and Chloe and Joey and Puffy and Edmund (THAT LAZYBUTT! I haven't seen anyone rp him in months O_o) and Balin and Eringuard and Fury Ocean and Neva and Arie and eveyone else?
 
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