So...Who's On Now

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Its for my pirate story, Nia(she's the mane charature) was ordered by the princess to go out on the deck of the ship they're on, after they were ordered by the captin to stay in the cabin. Nia went out and she saw the ship they were supose to meet completly desroyed, but she isn't allowed to tell the princess what she saw. Nia is 8 and the princess is 10. This is what Nia tells the princess.

"Um, well," Nia said as she tucked a strand of dark brown hair behind her ear. "I dont think I should tell you," she said, she was still trying to decide what to tell the princess she saw. "Nia! tell me," the princess demanded. "Oh, all right," Nia said, she leaned closer to the princess, "you cant tell anyone I told you." The princess sighed, "I wont, now come on tell me, what was the smoke from." Nia looked at the princess," the salors, on the other ship," she whispered, "mutanied, and burnt there uniforms, it was horifying to see." Nia said, shivering.
 
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