Aravis Kenobi
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I just got caught up; two pages were created while I was at church! 
The Servant and the Eye
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oxford girl
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I just got caught up; two pages were created while I was at church!
lol, yeah, do you still like it
Aravis Kenobi
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Of course. How could I not?
oxford girl
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Of course. How could I not?
lol, just wondering, its going to get really weird soon
Aravis Kenobi
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It's ok; I'm naturally weird. Me and weird stories go hand-in-hand. j/k. I am weird and very random though.
oxford girl
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lol, okay, here is more
Mar put Thunder into the stable, she walked up to the castle. Mar walked into the ball room, it was huge. "Ah, your here, finally," Elizabeth said. "Yes ma'am," Mar walked over. "Here," Elizabeth said as she handed Mar a bucked with soppy hot water in it, "clean the floor." "Yes ma'am," Mar said quietly. Elizabeth walked out of the ball room, leaving Mar alone. "You had better start," some one said from behind her. Mar turned around, there was a pretty girl with blond hair standing there. "oh yes, I guess I should." The girl smiled, "I'm Eva, your new aren't you." Mar nodded, "I'm Marlenna, you can call me Mar." Eva smiled, "nice to meet you, I guess we're cleaning together, we had...." She trailed off as a handsome young man walked down the stairs, he had black curly hair and deep blue eyes. He looked over at Eva and Mar, he looked at Mar for a few seconds, taking her beauty in. The he walked out the door.
Mar put Thunder into the stable, she walked up to the castle. Mar walked into the ball room, it was huge. "Ah, your here, finally," Elizabeth said. "Yes ma'am," Mar walked over. "Here," Elizabeth said as she handed Mar a bucked with soppy hot water in it, "clean the floor." "Yes ma'am," Mar said quietly. Elizabeth walked out of the ball room, leaving Mar alone. "You had better start," some one said from behind her. Mar turned around, there was a pretty girl with blond hair standing there. "oh yes, I guess I should." The girl smiled, "I'm Eva, your new aren't you." Mar nodded, "I'm Marlenna, you can call me Mar." Eva smiled, "nice to meet you, I guess we're cleaning together, we had...." She trailed off as a handsome young man walked down the stairs, he had black curly hair and deep blue eyes. He looked over at Eva and Mar, he looked at Mar for a few seconds, taking her beauty in. The he walked out the door.
Aravis Kenobi
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I thought this wasn't a romance. It's good anyway.
It's good anyway.
daughterofeve_11
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Oooh, this is good. You should add a little bit of romance. I think that'd be cool. So did Mara and will live "happily ever after"? (well, until they died that is...)
Lady Chloe
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It's great! Keep posting!
oxford girl
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lol, it isn't going to be, he just thinks she is prettyI thought this wasn't a romance.
np, I hate romance, and yes Mara and Will did live happily ever after
thanks, I'll try to post tonight, I have to finish my home work first
daughterofeve_11
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okay, cant wait!!
oxford girl
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Mar looked at Eva, "who was that," Mar asked. "The prince," Eva said dreamily, "his name is Nathaniel, but his brother calls him Nat, he is the oldest son of the king, he is amazing, and every girl wants him." Mar laughed, what have I gotten myself into, I'm stuck with a lot of love crazed girls. "Okay, we better get back to work." Eva stared at her, "how can you say that, he looked at you, actually looked at you, and all you can think about is getting back to work." Mar was getting irritated, "I'm here to earn money, not dream about a prince." Mar walked a few feet away and started cleaning the floor.
Aravis Kenobi
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From Mystery of the Princess, I wouldn't have guessed that you hate romance.
oxford girl
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From Mystery of the Princess, I wouldn't have guessed that you hate romance.
lol, I like them if I'm writing it, but I need to take a break from romances
Lady Chloe
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LOL yeah Melius Terra is most definatly not a love story...
oxford girl
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Mar looked up, she heard girls screaming, the prince ran back in, there was another guy with him, Mar assumed it was his brother. Over twenty girls were chasing them. Mar moved so she wouldn't get run into, the princes ran up the steps. "Stop," Mar called to the girls, "we just washed the floor, go a different way." The girls glared at her, but left. "Wow, they are so handsome," Eva said. "Who," Mar said as she got back to work.
Lady Chloe
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LOL! They must look really good to get that kind of attention!!
oxford girl
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LOL! They must look really good to get that kind of attention!!
lol, they do
Eva sighed, "the princes, who else." Mar rolled her eyes, "we need to get this done." they spent the next few hours cleaning. They finished just as the guests started to arive. Elizabeth can in, "Eva I need you to help in the kitchen, Marlenna I need you to go brush the horses." Elizabeth turned and walked out.
Sir Benjamin the Lion
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Write more, hurry. I think I know what's going to happen, but I am not saying a word.
oxford girl
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good, you are the only guy that has read any of my storys, I feel special now
"See ya later," Mar said she walked down to the stable and started brushing the horses. She looked up when she heard the door quietly open, then she heard screamming, the girls that she yelled at earlier ran in. "Where is he," they demanded. "Who," Mar asked. "What do you mean who, the prince that's who," a blond said. "I dont know what you are talking about," Mar said. "Just tell us where he is and we'll leave." Mar looked at them, "I am disinclined to acquiesce to your request." They looked at her in complet comfusion, "what, oh never mind, if you see him tell him we are looking for him." Mar nodded, "okay." Mar smiled as they all left. "There gone, my lord." The prince steped out of the shadows.