The Tale of Mozart the Meerkitten

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Kthwump! Kthuwmp! The battering ram banged softly on the little northgate. A few more whacks and they’d be in, thought Shawnti.

BANG! The door fell with a resounding fall. But it wouldn’t have mattered anyway, Mozart and the whole army of Reandalawo (about one thousand fifty three strong) stood before them, barring their way.
Mozart instantly recognized Shawnti, and assumed that the other cat was Tigerclaw. A grim determined expression on her face she spoke calmly to them.
“If you give up now we will let you live, but I warn you, some of my friends are not as open to reason as me. Speak quickly.”
“Ha! Look, you creatures really are cowards! Sending a infant kit up against us! Haha!” laughed Tigerclaw.
“Do not underestimate her because she is small,” warned Shawnti, “For it was she who single-pawed took on the full might of Cogg’s army… And lived!”
“Ha, you are a coward Shawnti! I will show this kit that we are warriors! Now, CHARGEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” cried Tigerclaw as he surged forward.

Mozart nodded and a hail of arrows hit the front ranks.
“Archers down! Slingers, FIRE!” Dorthy cried out orders from beside her sister.
Tigerclaw was glad he had fallen back in the ranks.
“Slingers down! Archers FIRE!” Dorthy added her arrow to this group.

Mozart raised her sword as the enemy closed in, and cried:
“FOR FREEDOM, AND FOR THE WHITE CAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!” then she ran forward, leading her army.
 
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Mozart found time in the midst of battle to take a quick look about. Shadow, Smokey and Frodo had taken it upon themselves to ‘take out’ Tigerclaw and were mauling him. Caspian was fighting with some sort of large dog-ish creature, Toto and Midnight had set upon a group of the enemy who had set upon Flower and Dorthy. Mozart saw no sign of Shawnti for a moment, then noticed her, advancing on Caspian from the back.

“Caspian look out!” cried Mozart, then leapt on Shawnti.
As Mozart tussled with the she-cat a song her mother had sang over her when she was just a tiny kit came back to her.

‘Scared and unsure,
Everyone is.
But sometimes we must face
Our greatest fears.
My child,
Do not fear,
When you are not strong,
He will give you the strength to carry on.
Safe.
You are Safe.
Child,
Hang on through the storm,
‘Cause you’ll win
In the End.
Stay Strong,
He will see you through,
And you are never alone.’

The two broke apart. Shawnti drew her short-sword, which was as big as Mozart’s little sword.
“You die today kit!” she cried.
“I think not!” was Mozart’s reply.

Their swords flashed in the waning sunlight. Storm-clouds gathered, hiding the sun.

Mozart twirled her sword at an odd angle and Shawnti’s sword fell from her paw.

Sword-tip against her enemy’s throat Mozart picked up the short-sword and tossed it away.
Rain began to drip from the sky. Mozart shook her head sadly.

“You are a coward, cat. Your life is not worth enough for me to slay you. Now leave my sight!” removing her sword point, she watched Shawnti run into the woods.

Tigerclaw had thrown off his small adversaries, and was looking quite pleased. His troops were winning over the fierce Reanlawoins. Victory was in sight, but then…
A small figure materialized from the trees. Walking onto a rise he shouted:
“Go home to your master you sniveling cowards! Leave these good creatures alone!”
“And whose gonna stop me, eh?” Tigerclaw cried back triumphantly.

“US!” A black tomcat came and stood next to his little friend Sanga. Mozart recognized him instantly.

Other tough looking cats appeared beside them.
An extremely old she-cat came out last to stand by her son.

“When you mess with Mozart,” she cried, “You mess with her family too! I am Myrrh, leave you scum, or we will wipe you from the face of this earth!”

Tigerclaw’s mouth dropped open, then he said annoyedly,
“What is with these old she-cats?!?!”

“CHAAAAAAARGEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!” screamed Faith, Mozart’s eldest brother. The cats ran down the slope nonstop, plowing down anyone in their path. Mozart and her friends and siblings joined them, shouting,

“FOR THE WHITE CAT AND FREEDOM!!!!!!!!”
 
Tigerclaw knew he was beaten. He ran towards the woods, leaving his troops to fend for themselves, though at least fifty of their remaining force followed him.

Once in the somewhat safer confines of the woodlands, Tigerclaw slowed his pace from a frantic run, to a more measured trot. He heard a noise nearby and saw Shawnti sitting on the path nursing her wounds.
"Well, well if it isn't Cogg's pet Shawnti. Ha! Deserter and a coward, thats what you are!" cried Tigerclaw mockingly.
"And what about you, oh high and mighty one? Running from the slightest change in balance, with the slightest chance you might lose. Ha! No, it is /you/ who are the coward."


(sense some conflict here?)
 
(continued)

"You dare call me a coward?!?" roared Tigerclaw.
"Do you see anyone else around I may be talking to?" retorted Shawnti cooly.
"She cat, you will die for that!" Tigerclaw rushed at Shawnti, sword drawn.

Shawnti rolled over to one side, avoiding Tigerclaw's blade. Leaping up she grabbed her dagger, because Mozart had desposed of her short-sword. Jumping on top of Tigerclaw's back she dealt him a heafty blow to the back of his head.
Seemingly unfased, though really his head was throbbing, Tigerclaw fell on his back with a mighty Thump!
Rising triumphantly he yowled and stabbed at the un-protected she-cat.

Laughing like a crazed beast, he pulled back his sword and turned to his remaining soldiers.
"We head for Cogg's fortress, to tell him of victory and defeat." then he spead off with a small force following.
 
Shadow_Kitty said:
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MORE!!!!!!!!!!
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:D CLIFFHANGERS ROCK PEOPLE! WRITE A BOOK JUST SO YOU CAN HAVE THEM!:p

ok fine heres more:

Chapter 21
A Brave but not Ruthless Warrior​

Sanga saw it all. The fight, Tigerclaw's blade, Shawnti's glazing eyes.
Something in the young cat stired. Would he leave this cat to die as he had been left? Or would he have pity and Get help?
His mind in turmoil, Sanga looked at both points of the subject.

'I don't think she was one who helped take my parents... though I was very small. But she's, she's, she's scum! A murder of inocent creatures! I should just leave her to die as she has left many.' but as he turned away, Sanga saw the face of a large White Cat watching him. He spoke, (or did he?) softly and kindly, but also strictly to Sanga.
"My son, you were hurt long ago by evil, but evil hurts itself. Once this cat you see before you had a story much like yours. Though she chose the evil way, you two are much more alike then you relize." the image faded as Sanga looked slowly back to Shawnti's now limp form.

Staring upward into the sky he saw a small ray of sunlight poke through the black storm-clouds. Sighing he jumped down from the tree and walked over to Shawnti's body. Pressing his ear to her chest, he listened for her heart ('If she even /has/ a heart' he thought) and heard a faint noise.
Rising, he said softly to her.
"I dunno if you kin understand me, but I'm going to get help, try not to move."
 
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Sanga ran into the main hall of Reandalawo and skidded across the floor, stopping in front of a very suprised Flower.

"Were is Mozart?!?" he squeaked.
"Upstairs, tending to the wounded." Flower did not have time to say more, for Sanga rushed passed her and up the stairs.

Panting he reached the second level. Turning into the sickbay, he cried,
"Were IS Mozart?!?"
"Over here." came a small voice, and the tinest kitten Sanga had ever seen emerged. She carried a little bottle of something in her paw, and wore a belt with weapons and other things on it.
"There is someone who needs your help and healing skills. I was told you can cure even the most serious wounds..."
"Nope!" came the sweet reply, "I can't heal all wounds, but I can heal most with this." she held up the little bottle.
"Then come with me."
"Hey, wait for me, shady!" cried Caspian as he ran after the two.
"My name is Sanga, not Shady, silly!" then Sanga speed off, with the two running side by side with him.
 
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Character list:

Mozart main character
Dorthy Mozart's sis
Caspian Mozart and Dorthy's bro
Toto Mozie's, Dorth's and Caspy's bro
Ribbony Catlition leader
Dora Ribbonys sis
Missy old she cat, babysitter of FSS
Tori mom of FSS
Frodo Tori's son
Shadow Frodo's sis
Smokey Frodo and Shadows sis.
Clancy young tomcat
Brightheart Clancys bro
Jako Jak's bro
Jak Jako's baby bro
Mistyfoot Jako's son, Jaks BF
Shawnti evil she-cat (for now...)
Tigerclaw evil tomcat, Cogg's commader
Cogg main bad guy, big wolf-king
Sanga orphaned tomcat
Flower she-cat Mids sis
Midnight Flower's bro
Explorer Ribbony's bro
Creamy Ribbony's bro
Myrrh Mozart and co.'s surragent mom
Rita Jako's mate Misty's mom
And dun dunt da du!
The White Cat! Jesus representer (like Aslan)

Think thats all.:p
 
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