The Witch's Sister


(Sorry this chapter was short. I`ll try and post the 13th Chapter today as well to make up for it. Enjoy.)
Chapter 12-
Soon everyone came inside Cair Paravel`s grand doors and all settled down at the long marble table for a wonderful dinner for all were quite hungary by now. Everyone spoke kind words to each other at the wonderful feast except Edmund who did not once look Jaden in the eye the whole time. He kept to himself and quietly waited for a moment when he could speak to Peter alone. Soon after dinner he recieved his chance for now Jaden , Lucy and Susan had all gone up to their bed chambers and Peter and Edmund were left alone in the throne room.
Edmund sank back into his throne and began to relax for once in these past few days, he then turned his head toward Peter and said simply
"Do you believe me?"
Peter didn`t return Edmund`s gaze and said nervously
"I.. I don`t know, Ed."
Edmund who didn`t relize he was so angry then exclaimed
"But Peter, you know I wouldn`t do any thing to harm you! I`m your brother! Your acting as if you were a slave to Jaden and she was your master. You do everything for her, and treat her much more highly than yourself."
"I do not"
said Peter while jumping to his feet. Edmund raised to his feet as well and said back
"Yes you do. You defend her and I do not have the slightest idea wh. Don`t you see she set me up, so it looked like I injured you? She`s evil and you don`t want to admit it."
Peter sighed then said
"Calm down,Ed."
And before Edmund could say somthing back, Peter left the room and went up to bed. Edmund watched him go then walked to his own room. He had to get Peter to that his thoughts about Jaden were true, but how?
 
It doesn't look like anyones going to believe Edmund, so he's going to have to do something before its to late.
I really like this story.
 
Madman said:
It doesn't look like anyones going to believe Edmund, so he's going to have to do something before its to late.
I really like this story.
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I agree. Someone better believe Edmund. I have such a terrible feeling that Jaden is going to try and kill Peter and Edmund and Susan and Lucy...
Shouldn't Peter (and possibly the girls - but I don't know about them 'cause it's more about Peter and Edmund) be suspicious and more on Edmund's side b/c Jaden was Jadis' sister? I mean, they never heard stories about Jaden from what we know, so how do they know she isn't just like her sister (though she is!)?
 

Chapter 13-
That night Edmund couldn`t sleep once again but he didn`t know why. Soon he decided to take a walk outside. He slowly crept down the hall way, very quietly so as not to wake anyone. Soon he opened the large door that led outside and he took a deep breath of the fresh salty sea air. He walked quickly over to the edge of the cliff which overlooked the roaring ocean that stretched as far as the eye could see. He slowly sat down and ran his hand through the soft green grass that was blowing swiftly in the wind. As he relaxed in the comforts of the fresh air he thought back to all the trouble that had been going on with Jaden. He wished he had never played those pan pipes in the first place. Why couldn`t he ever do as he was told?
Just then as Edmund was deep in thought he saw a golden colored light coming towards him.
Oh no. thought Edmund I`ve been caught.
He hurried and jumped up and began running as fast as his feet could carry him, but maybe it wasn`t fast enough for the light was getting quite closer. Edmund thought this light was coming from a latern of some sort and he wondered who was after him. Could it be Jaden? The light now was right beside him and going exactly at his same speed and Edmund braced himself for somthing horrible that he believed would happen quite soon and before he knew it the light came in front of him and blocked his path and before Edmund could stop himself he ran smack into the light and tumbled into the grass.
He slowly lifted his eyes upward to stare into the face of the person who had been chasing him and when he did he was awe struck to see the great lion himself. Edmund could not contain his excitment and said happily
"Aslan! I am so glad to see you again."
Aslan looked at him thoughtfully and said kindly
"And I am quite joyful to see you my child."
Edmund looked Aslan up and down, his golden color sparkled in the night and his eyes shone more beautiful than the best looking jewel you probly have ever seen. Edmund then frowned once again, thinking about his problems and said
"Aslan, I need your help. You see..."
Edmund did not even have to explain, for Aslan knew exactly what was what happening and replied
"I know Edmund, and that is why I have come. Your thoughts about Jaden have all been correct she is the very evil her sister was and she has a plot to destroy you all."
Before Aslan could say more Edmund burst off running toward Cair Paravel saying over his shoulder
"I have to warn the others!"
As he ran on he heard Aslan exclaim
"Wait, Edmund!"
But Edmund did not turn around nor did he slow down at all from his quick run. Soon he went back through the familiar castle door and burst into Peter`s room. When he looked inside he was completly horrified.
 
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Its not really an surprise to see Aslan in this story, i kind of thought he would be.
All i want to know is what Edmund is seeing at the ned of the chapter.
 
this is a very intresting story. I am writing one to.
I like your story Turk(thats what i've decided to call you), but i think i like narnianprincess' more... :confused:
 
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