A Fantasy Story
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Alexandra Pevensie
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it could be less confusing if you'd post more, elindil!!! not that i'm confused...i think everyone else is lost w/ the whole elf-killer thing...lol...but i still want more story!!!!
SlpNarniaQueen
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Gracey girl is evil...she likes killing people...get used to it!
Elendil
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Argo groaned. "Chaim... Esaelp od ton eid!"
Chaim mouthed the words in little more than a whisper. "I ma gniyrt ot dloh no Argo...Tub siht dnouw spas ym htgnerts..."
A splat of blood landed on Chaim's hand. Argo glanced up. A soldier was standing in front of him a deep gash down his arm. His sword blade was pointed at Argo's heart. "What have we here?" He asked, snearing. "A man? With the elves?" He laughed. "I've found him!" He called to the others.
Argo blinked dizzily, he knew his head injury was bad, blood was already running down his neck and soaking the shoulder of his cloak. Where was his father? Who were these men? What was going on? More soldiers marched into the room.
"What's this!?!" The leader shouted, "I told you not to hurt him!"
"I'm sorry," snapped the first soldier. "But he put up quiet a fight."
"You may have killed him!" The leader snapped, "see how he bleeds!"
Argo winced and half fell onto his hands and knees. "Chaim..." he whispered. "Father..." he fell over onto his stomach.
"You idiot!" The soldier's leader snapped, "He's half dead!"
One of the soldiers reached down and yanked the lance out of Chaim's chest. Then kicked him, the groan the escaped Chaim's lips proved he was alive. "What do we do with this elf?" He asked.
The leader grinned. "Bring him along." He ordered, "He'll make good sport for the king...if he lives."
Chaim mouthed the words in little more than a whisper. "I ma gniyrt ot dloh no Argo...Tub siht dnouw spas ym htgnerts..."
A splat of blood landed on Chaim's hand. Argo glanced up. A soldier was standing in front of him a deep gash down his arm. His sword blade was pointed at Argo's heart. "What have we here?" He asked, snearing. "A man? With the elves?" He laughed. "I've found him!" He called to the others.
Argo blinked dizzily, he knew his head injury was bad, blood was already running down his neck and soaking the shoulder of his cloak. Where was his father? Who were these men? What was going on? More soldiers marched into the room.
"What's this!?!" The leader shouted, "I told you not to hurt him!"
"I'm sorry," snapped the first soldier. "But he put up quiet a fight."
"You may have killed him!" The leader snapped, "see how he bleeds!"
Argo winced and half fell onto his hands and knees. "Chaim..." he whispered. "Father..." he fell over onto his stomach.
"You idiot!" The soldier's leader snapped, "He's half dead!"
One of the soldiers reached down and yanked the lance out of Chaim's chest. Then kicked him, the groan the escaped Chaim's lips proved he was alive. "What do we do with this elf?" He asked.
The leader grinned. "Bring him along." He ordered, "He'll make good sport for the king...if he lives."
SlpNarniaQueen
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...........NO! That's not nice, bad men, bad bad bad... *Cries*
Lady Chloe
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Ah! Elindil!!! This is torture!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Elendil
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Chapter Nineteen
"Does it hurt?" An unfamiliar voice asked.
Argo blinked his eyes. His head felt like it had exploded. "Sey..."
"He's awake!" Argo winced at the noise and tried to focus. Where was he?
"What did he say?" A second voice asked.
"It sounded like 'Say'." The first replied
"Does it hurt?" An unfamiliar voice asked.
Argo blinked his eyes. His head felt like it had exploded. "Sey..."
"He's awake!" Argo winced at the noise and tried to focus. Where was he?
"What did he say?" A second voice asked.
"It sounded like 'Say'." The first replied
Lady Chloe
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Yay! Thanks for posting... can we have some more? *begs* Please?
Georgie the Valient
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LOADS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!What happened to Lief? Who got Argo?Did Cham die?If Argo met Dov again, was Dov friendly to him? Did Lief and Frida eventually marry? What happened to Petra?
Lady Chloe
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I agree with Georgie's questions....
Lady Chloe
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By the way, Elindil... I love your siggy It's awesome
It's awesome
SlpNarniaQueen
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GRAAAAAAAAAAAACEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEYYYY! I wanna know what happens...
(by the way, I plan to be the first American person to buy your book! )
(by the way, I plan to be the first American person to buy your book!
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Elendil
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GRAAAAAAAAAAAACEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEYYYY! I wanna know what happens...
(by the way, I plan to be the first American person to buy your book!
Might be a bit hard...I could buy you a copy... but since I don't know your adress...
looks like I'll be keeping it!
Alexandra Pevensie
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please post more, elindil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lady Chloe
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Yeah.... PLEASE?! *begs*
Lady Chloe
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Oh.... I'm sorry *hugs* Hope you get better soon!! God Bless!!!
God Bless!!!- Status