A New Challenge

slpnarniaqueen said:
Jadis *she said cooly* there's no way out...you do not recognize me...oh you foolissssh one, I am your cousin the one you tried to murder, Crystal, Yesssssss I remeber it well and it is still fresh in my mind...*crumbles the cave* and now I have paid you back for the losssss of my sssssisssster, now for the almossssst death of me...*rose her tail to strike Jadis*
~Dragon Girl

*Peter swung his sword at the dragons back* Take that you fool for killing my sister! *swinging sword wildly dreadfully injuring the dragon*
~PEter

Sssssssssssssssssssssss *hissing in pain she shot up in the air and flew away* Jadisssss, I'll be waiting...
~Crystal

*barely getting out alive for she crawled out last**breathing hard**examines her injurys**tries to get up but fails*
~LOretta

*crying* Lucy, oh Lucy, I'm so sorry...*kneeling by the cave* I am oh...
~Peter
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Edmund and Susan turned quickly after the dragon girl Crystal had already flew away. "LUCY LORETTA!" they both cried running to Peter, Loretta and Lucy franticly, Edmund, of course ran franitcly towards the back of the cave (for he sussed that was where Loretta would be), he lost no time in finding Loretta and taking her gently in his arms, "Loretta...please tell me you and Lu are going to be ok..." he said tears welling in his eyes for he desperately wanted to beleive that his sister was still alive...it couldn't be true..Lucy couldn't be dead....
after Loretta manged to pull the young Queen out of the cave Lucy took one glance at her loving family, "oh Peter.....I-I love you..." was the only things she could manged to whisper before everything went black and she fell limp on the ground not far from Peter.
"Lucy..." Susan whispered tears of pain rolling freely down her cheeks.
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
Jadis *she said cooly* there's no way out...you do not recognize me...oh you foolissssh one, I am your cousin the one you tried to murder, Crystal, Yesssssss I remeber it well and it is still fresh in my mind...*crumbles the cave* and now I have paid you back for the losssss of my sssssisssster, now for the almossssst death of me...*rose her tail to strike Jadis*
~Dragon Girl

*Peter swung his sword at the dragons back* Take that you fool for killing my sister! *swinging sword wildly dreadfully injuring the dragon*
~PEter

Sssssssssssssssssssssss *hissing in pain she shot up in the air and flew away* Jadisssss, I'll be waiting...
~Crystal

*barely getting out alive for she crawled out last**breathing hard**examines her injurys**tries to get up but fails*
~LOretta

*crying* Lucy, oh Lucy, I'm so sorry...*kneeling by the cave* I am oh...
~Peter
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*Jadis looked at Crystal studying her and spoke*"now I remeber you"*she watched as her cousion flew away and yelled*"WAITING FOR WHAT?"*she lowerd her head and spoke*"why do I keep crossing paths with my famliy members?"
 
*Peter saw Lucy* Lucy wake up...Susan wheres the cordial...I'm not risking her, she's not going to die! *picked Lucy up and laid her on his lap* here's the cordial Su, quick hurrry!
~Peter

*loretta laid lifeless and limp at the back of the rubble pile, she'd barely escaped, her tail still under the rocks**she heard things around her but could not respond**she wanted to call for help but the fall had bruised her head badly**'help help' she was calling but no words formed in her mouth**she just lay there alone waiting, barely breathing*
~Loretta
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
*Peter saw Lucy* Lucy wake up...Susan wheres the cordial...I'm not risking her, she's not going to die! *picked Lucy up and laid her on his lap* here's the cordial Su, quick hurrry!
~Peter

*loretta laid lifeless and limp at the back of the rubble pile, she'd barely escaped, her tail still under the rocks**she heard things around her but could not respond**she wanted to call for help but the fall had bruised her head badly**'help help' she was calling but no words formed in her mouth**she just lay there alone waiting, barely breathing*
~Loretta
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with huge tears of greif welling in her eyes Susan lost no time in opening Lucy's cordinal and carefully dripping a single drop of the firefly into Lucy's mouth, "oh Lu...please be alright....you just have to....we need you..." the older girl whispered, gently stroking her sisters silky brown hiar. atfisrt it seemed that nothing was happening but then Lucy began to stir and she opened her eyes slightly, seeing Peter and Susna looking over her, "Aslan.....?" she asked barely above a whisper, "no silly it's us your brother and sister" Susan said, letting out a huge sigh of relief and kissing Lucy on the cheek.

"Loretta? wheres Loretta?" Edmund said franticly noticeing his beloeved Loretta had gone missing, "LORETTA!!!" he franticly began to call running towards the back of the cave, "LORETTA LORETTA WHERE ARE YOU!?" he cried his vioce showing the desperation in his heart.

((aww, I'm really sry but my parents are making me get off the computer... :( I hope to seeya guys later!!))
 
*a mysterious voice came to her just through her head 'because we all want to get you!*

*she felt Edmonds arms**she tried talking to him but no words came**she tried to lift her hand but no movement came**then she started breathing steadyer and her heart started beating regularly**she opened her eyes seeing Edmond* Edmond *she tried moving but was unable* I...I can't move! * she talked slowly, stammering*
~LOretta

*crying* LUCY!
~Peter

((aww see you later :( what time will you be on tomorrow *~Aslanfriend~* and JadisTheWhiteWItch))((i gtg too, see ya tomorrow at what time?))
 
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slpnarniaqueen said:
*a mysterious voice came to her just through her head 'because we all want to get you!*

*she felt Edmonds arms**she tried talking to him but no words came**she tried to lift her hand but no movement came**then she started breathing steadyer and her heart started beating regularly**she opened her eyes seeing Edmond* Edmond *she tried moving but was unable* I...I can't move! * she talked slowly, stammering*
~LOretta

*crying* LUCY!
~Peter

((aww see you later :( what time will you be on tomorrow *~Aslanfriend~* and JadisTheWhiteWItch))((i gtg too, see ya tomorrow at what time?))
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*Jadis was in a stage of shock seeing her cousion again and she spoke*"I thought I killed everyone on Charn unless they were on other worlds

((awww :( seeya two tomorrow now I'll be lonly now I get on my comp about 2:00PM))
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
*a mysterious voice came to her just through her head 'because we all want to get you!*

*she felt Edmonds arms**she tried talking to him but no words came**she tried to lift her hand but no movement came**then she started breathing steadyer and her heart started beating regularly**she opened her eyes seeing Edmond* Edmond *she tried moving but was unable* I...I can't move! * she talked slowly, stammering*
~LOretta

*crying* LUCY!
~Peter

((aww see you later :( what time will you be on tomorrow *~Aslanfriend~* and JadisTheWhiteWItch))((i gtg too, see ya tomorrow at what time?))
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"hang on Lori" Edmund shispered holding the beloeved sqiurrel gently in his arms, tears heated his eyes for he forced them back telling himself he had to be strong for Loretta....slowly getting up with Loretta securly in his arms Edmund stubleing to his feet and began quickly running out from behind the cave, trying to locate the others, "SUSAN JADIS PETER!!!" he cried but could see no sign of any of them anywhere.....then the horrible thought hit him...'what if...no no I couldn't have gotten lost....'

"Peter!" Lucy managed to stammer out, reaching up and rapping her arms around her older brothers qiuvering form, tears formwed in her eyes as she began to sob into her brothers left shoulder, "oh Peter....A-Aslan came to me and told me that it wasn't my time to enter his country yet....."
Susan had tears streaming down her pale cheeks as she too enveloped her younger sister in a tight yet gentle embrace, "oh Lu.."


((heh, I get on my computer ussaly (sp?) late in the evenings cause my parents ussaly have to use the phone line during the day...))
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
"hang on Lori" Edmund shispered holding the beloeved sqiurrel gently in his arms, tears heated his eyes for he forced them back telling himself he had to be strong for Loretta....slowly getting up with Loretta securly in his arms Edmund stubleing to his feet and began quickly running out from behind the cave, trying to locate the others, "SUSAN JADIS PETER!!!" he cried but could see no sign of any of them anywhere.....then the horrible thought hit him...'what if...no no I couldn't have gotten lost....'

"Peter!" Lucy managed to stammer out, reaching up and rapping her arms around her older brothers qiuvering form, tears formwed in her eyes as she began to sob into her brothers left shoulder, "oh Peter....A-Aslan came to me and told me that it wasn't my time to enter his country yet....."
Susan had tears streaming down her pale cheeks as she too enveloped her younger sister in a tight yet gentle embrace, "oh Lu.."


((heh, I get on my computer ussaly (sp?) late in the evenings cause my parents ussaly have to use the phone line during the day...))
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*Jadis walked to Peter and spoke*"I'm here"

((oh ok))
 
~JadisTheWhiteWitch~ said:
*Jadis walked to Peter and spoke*"I'm here"

((oh ok))
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"JADIS PETER LUCY SUSAN!!!" Edmund continued to yell franticly, "ANYONE PLeASE HELP!!!" he stepped back a few paces, running right into Jadis, "AH!" he jumped back in surprize with Loretta still gently clucthed within his strong arms, "oh, Jadis...am I ever glad to see you...." he said breathing breaths of releif apon recizing who it was who he had accidently bumped into, "Lorettas hurt badly! we need Lucy's cordinal and quick! I won't lose her not now!"
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
"JADIS PETER LUCY SUSAN!!!" Edmund continued to yell franticly, "ANYONE PLeASE HELP!!!" he stepped back a few paces, running right into Jadis, "AH!" he jumped back in surprize with Loretta still gently clucthed within his strong arms, "oh, Jadis...am I ever glad to see you...." he said breathing breaths of releif apon recizing who it was who he had accidently bumped into, "Lorettas hurt badly! we need Lucy's cordinal and quick! I won't lose her not now!"
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*Jadis got bumped into and jumped being startled and spoke*"oh ok Edmund can I help in anyway?"
 
Dear ones, I'm sorry to say that it is time for me to leave this journey. I entrust Narnia in your care and I will return in the near future...I must go away for a while, but I do promise I will return to you soon!!! I love you my dear children...oh, and Edmund has come back to us(Slander will be rp as him)... I wish you the best of luck!!
 
~JadisTheWhiteWitch~ said:
*Jadis spoke*"ok"*takes Edmund by the arm and leads him and Lorretta where she seen Lucy and them last*
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Susan looked up, her eyes widening at what she saw.....for when Jadis led Edmund up to her and the others, it was plain to see that Loretta had been badly enjured for some of her wounds were bleeding even now...."oh Loretta..." she whispered, releaseing the crying Lucy and handing her to Peter. scrambleing to her feet Susan quickly rushed over to Edmund, Jadis and Loretta, "Su...quick we need Lucy's cordinal!" she heard Edmund say and in a flash the young Queen of Narnia had the cordinal out and was poring a few drops into Lorettas mouth. Edmund looked up at Jadis with tears in his eyes, hopeing Lucy's cordinal would work on his beloved Loretta.
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
Susan looked up, her eyes widening at what she saw.....for when Jadis led Edmund up to her and the others, it was plain to see that Loretta had been badly enjured for some of her wounds were bleeding even now...."oh Loretta..." she whispered, releaseing the crying Lucy and handing her to Peter. scrambleing to her feet Susan quickly rushed over to Edmund, Jadis and Loretta, "Su...quick we need Lucy's cordinal!" she heard Edmund say and in a flash the young Queen of Narnia had the cordinal out and was poring a few drops into Lorettas mouth. Edmund looked up at Jadis with tears in his eyes, hopeing Lucy's cordinal would work on his beloved Loretta.
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*Jadis pulled Edmund close to her and spoke*"she'll be ok dear"
 
~JadisTheWhiteWitch~ said:
*Jadis pulled Edmund close to her and spoke*"she'll be ok dear"
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Edmund relaxed slightly for feeling Jadis bring him close to her seemed to send a comforting feeling throught his body though he still worried a great deal about Loretta, "b-but what if she isn't?" he asked looking up at Jadis two single tears beginning to make there way down his cheeks.
Susan held her breath while watching as Lorettas wounds slowly began to heal from Lucy's cordinal.
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
Edmund relaxed slightly for feeling Jadis bring him close to her seemed to send a comforting feeling throught his body though he still worried a great deal about Loretta, "b-but what if she isn't?" he asked looking up at Jadis two single tears beginning to make there way down his cheeks.
Susan held her breath while watching as Lorettas wounds slowly began to heal from Lucy's cordinal.
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*Jadis spoke*"she will my dear"
 
~JadisTheWhiteWitch~ said:
*Jadis spoke*"she will my dear"
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a glimmer of hope seemed to pass through Edmunds eyes the moment he looked down and seen Lorettas wounds were closeing themselves up and slowly beginning to heal....for this meant that maybe Jadis was right after all...."come on we should get her somewhere to rest" he said picking up her limp body in his hands and carrying her over to small soft patch of grass. Susan glanced up at Jadis for a moment before she, Lucy and Peter (who was carrying Lucy) followed Edmund over to the small patch of green grass.
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
a glimmer of hope seemed to pass through Edmunds eyes the moment he looked down and seen Lorettas wounds were closeing themselves up and slowly beginning to heal....for this meant that maybe Jadis was right after all...."come on we should get her somewhere to rest" he said picking up her limp body in his hands and carrying her over to small soft patch of grass. Susan glanced up at Jadis for a moment before she, Lucy and Peter (who was carrying Lucy) followed Edmund over to the small patch of green grass.
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*Jadis followed Ed and spoke*"yes lets lay her down somewhere"*Jadis looked to Susan and spoke*"yes?"
 
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