Lost Dreamer
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No prob. Thanks for pointing it out to me 
If you ever write some more fiction, you should definitely post it on here.
-Mandy
If you ever write some more fiction, you should definitely post it on here. -Mandy
My first (short) story EVER! In celebration of Narnia Day.
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DestinyLies
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Should I write??? post some stuff?? I know I have some posted but not a fanfic or a short story. Just tidbits.
Lost Dreamer
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You talking to me? Go for it! Fanfic stuff is always fun. It's always neat to hear someone fill in the pieces that the books skip, you know? So totally. You should write something. (And I'll have to check out your other writing...I've been bad about keeping up lately )
-Mandy
)-Mandy
I think you should write a story and post it here. Definitely!
well, not here in this thread, unless you really want to, but you know... give it it's own thread.
Lost Dreamer
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Hey Destiny, do you have a link to your stuff? I can't find it.
I'm thinking about posting this story of mine. Would either of you guys read it if you did? I need someone to sway me either way...
I'm thinking about posting this story of mine. Would either of you guys read it if you did? I need someone to sway me either way...
Yes, of course I would read it! Go ahead and post it.
DestinyLies
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I would love to read it...hold on I'll get you the link.Hey Destiny, do you have a link to your stuff? I can't find it.
I'm thinking about posting this story of mine. Would either of you guys read it if you did? I need someone to sway me either way...
Where's the link?
DestinyLies
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Here http://narniafans.com/forum/showthread.php?t=22623 you know where they are don't you. Also I think I'm going to start posting them on my LJ here: http://destinilies.livejournal.com
I see you started a Live Journal too!! I mean, like others have done. Not me, cause I don't have one.
DestinyLies
Active member
Yes I did!
I may go read it sometime.
And I am bumping up my story in case there are new readers around. Please comment if you read it.
DestinyLies
Active member
Thanks!!!!!!
You're welcome!
And talking about resurrecting. Why not this one?
And talking about resurrecting. Why not this one?
Ginny_JillPole
Banned
Awww, I remember our dear Rhendelmir heehee, I'm glad everyone liked the name I proposed. ^^ And it is a beautiful short story, Mike I'm bad writing short stories... probably because I feel like make them longer xD xD
heehee, I'm glad everyone liked the name I proposed. ^^ And it is a beautiful short story, Mike I'm bad writing short stories... probably because I feel like make them longer xD xD
A new reader!!! Wow! Thanks for commenting!
Since there are new readers AND writers, maybe they'll like to read this story sometime. *Bump!*
Sir Cabbage
New member
Great idea to right the back story to the mice of Narnia. I really like the idea of the link between a particular mouse that helped chew the bonds and the eventual Reepicheep; it was nicely thought out.
A very small critique I could think of in my tiredness: There are a few sentences that didn't flow quite so well and a few -minor- spelling/typo errors. Aslan calling the mouse 'love' didn't quite fit for me.
Overall, a good job on a short story; nicely thought out. I was kept engaged, which is a positive plus because usually I cannot bring myself to read long writing on the computer.
(Oh, just noticed the last post was quite a while back... I did get the right short story, didn't I?)
I really like the idea of the link between a particular mouse that helped chew the bonds and the eventual Reepicheep; it was nicely thought out.A very small critique I could think of in my tiredness: There are a few sentences that didn't flow quite so well and a few -minor- spelling/typo errors. Aslan calling the mouse 'love' didn't quite fit for me.
Overall, a good job on a short story; nicely thought out. I was kept engaged, which is a positive plus because usually I cannot bring myself to read long writing on the computer.
(Oh, just noticed the last post was quite a while back... I did get the right short story, didn't I?
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Woohoo! Thank you! Another reader. And thanks for the comments. I agree that some parts don't flow well. I was kind of hurried (deadline to submit) and my only experience in writing had been those silly college papers, yuck!