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Just as the reached the top of the hill, Susans eyes landed on something glistening in the distant. She gasped, as Jiplin came to stand beside her.
"Is that... is that it?" He questioned. Slowly, Susan nodded her head.
In front of them, not a mile away, stood a sleek and slender icicle castle. On either side stood two tall towers, shimmering in the sun, yet not melting, and in the middle stood a large iron gate. As if by instinct, Susan quietly knelt down behind a rock, she felt some unwanted presence. she motioned for the others to do as she did, as they met up with her at the top.
"What is it mylady?" Jiplin asked concernedly.
"Someones watching us." she whispered.
"Stand on guard." Jiplin commanded of the other three dwarfs. For hours they stayed stationed there, without any signs of life entering or leaving the castle. Susan began to doze off, when suddenly she was awakened by Jiplin.
"We shall be departing now, my lady." He said, reaching out his hand to help her up, with much effort seeing as he was much smaller than the former. With a slight heave, she was standing upright again. Dusting herself off, they began to make for the path down the hill. The desent down, was certainly not as tough as going uphill, and all were thankful to be safely at the bottom soon, or so they thought.
There was rustling in the trees, and Susan tensed up, grasping her bow tightly. Jiplin froze, and motioned to the others to arm themselves. Someone was coming. Before a moments notice, they were surrounded by no more than a dozen wolves, all snarling barking at the troop.
Susans heart sped faster than imaginable, and before a word was said she was stringing an arrow. Jiplin, noticed her restlessness, and held up his hand motioning for an attack. Gnashing teeth, bows, and flashing swords flew in all directions. Susan robotically strung arrows and shot them frantically, she knew they were outnumbered and the odds were not on their side.
"Queen Susan! Behind you!!" Jiplin's voice rung out. Susan whipped around only to see a giant mass of fur hurtling towards her, and then darkness.
 
I'm doing alright. I'm super tired and about to go to bed. My little sister will be sleeping with me tonight so that my parents don't wake her when they prepare to leave tomorrow.
Please pray for their safe journey.
 
Sorry if I take long. I have to write an essay with 750 words, no more or less, just 750, due tomorrow, and I'm on word #213.
 
Lady Chloe said:
I'm doing alright. I'm super tired and about to go to bed. My little sister will be sleeping with me tonight so that my parents don't wake her when they prepare to leave tomorrow.
Please pray for their safe journey.
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I will definitly be praying!! I hope that they have a safe and fun trip!! Sleep tight, dont let those bed bugs bite, lol! :D g'night.
im gunna go as well. so night everyone else!! :D
 
It was midday and Chloe's back was very sore from the ride, so Eringuard made them stop and rest against a tree.. She had dozed off almost immediatly, but not for long...
She could see Susan, she called to her. 'Susan! Susan! I'm here! Thank God you are Safe!' But Susan didn't hear her. Noticing the dwarves around her, she wondered what was happening. Chloe watched in horror as she saw them battling a group of wolves. She could see the dwarves fighting with all their glory, Susan's bow pinging with every shot. It was then that she saw it. 'No!' she cried as she watched terrified as a wolf bound directly at Susan's back. "My Lady! Look out!!" a dwarf called out from somewhere amist the battle. Susan turned only to be hit in the face by the Wolf. 'No!! Susan!' Chloe screamed. Suddenly she found herself being shaken awake by Eringuard.
"Chloe! It's alright!" he wrapped his arms around her as she fought against him.
"It's not alright," Chloe said tears pouring down her cheeks. "Susan! She was attacked by a wolf! She needs our help!" she said pushing herself out of his reach, she stumbled toward Sheerik, only to collapse after a step or two. Eringuard caught her again, holding her up. "We need to help her!" Chloe said trying to stand, she found herself unable to.
"Chloe stop!" Eringuard said gently. "It was just a dream-"
"No it wasn't! I saw Susan and a group of dwarves battling a pack of wolves! Susan was attacked! And every second we waste, the more time the pack has to finish them off!"
Eringuard listened to Chloe's words. While she had been asleep he had heard the sounds of a battle nearby, but had been more concerned with Chloe than with the battle. Scooping her up, he helped her onto Sheerik. Sliding on behind her, he held her close before directing Sheerik to where the battle sounds had originated.

By the time they arrived, the battle was over, only one wolf remained. Eringuard didn't wait, he removed his bow, skillfully shooting the wolf through the heart. Chloe who had regained her strength was already off Sheerik and running through the bodies searching for Queen Susan. Unable to find her, she cried. Eringuard however found a dwarf that was still living and questioned him.
Valiant Warrior... Was Queen Susan in your company?
Yes! You must save her... She was attacked by a wolf, they took her! They took her to Crystal's castle! You must save her!
At peace, warrior, that is our plan, Eringuard looked up at Chloe shocked. She had actually seen it.
A long, raspy sigh cut the silence of the moment. Eringuard didn't even have to look to know that the warrior had died.
"Sleep well," Eringuard whispered standing. He came to Chloe, he knew she was tired and didn't need the added adventure, but if he didn't tell her, she would be angry.
"They took Susan to Crystal's castle," he whispered.
"What?!" she cried, turning to run to Sheerik, but the added strain wasted her. "Help me! Eringuard," she said stumbling slightly. Sheerik walked to her side, and Eringuard helped her on. Following her up, he sat behind her. Chloe slept as they headed in the direction of the castle shining in the setting light of the sun.
 
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Mrs.Moseley~QueenofNarnia said:
Role Play Time Pleaz!! :( I Will Get On More Often! I Hate Homework!! :d
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Mesah might have to leave TDL. And mesah might have to leave computer someday

Mesah have homework

And you guys get on earlier than me. :D

Plus mesah gtg-
 
LOL How is everyone? Jadie why would you leave? *hugs* We love you!! I'm not going to be on much today, I have 17 journal writes for Chem to do today.... -.- Go figure.....
 
Sir Balin Warns of Mizar's Plot:

After walking a short while, Sir Balin reached the gates of Cair Paraval. He procceded inside where he was met by Godfrey. "Balin, Balin is that you?" asked Godfrey with a surpised look on his face. "Yes Godfrey, it is I" replied Balin. "Where have you been, King Peter sent a regenment to flook for you and your men" asked Godfrey. "I will tell you later, I must speak with the King".
 
ooc: I dislike living *goes to beach, puts arms in shirt, and falls over hoping to be landed on by a fence or something*

ic: *still in library, waiting for KoN and Sarah to come back, Becca to sign on, and-and-for new books*
 
Plans and Possibilities:

Well I've thoguht of changing a few things in my characters story lines. First off I'm gonig to make Godfrey single again. Once Mizar arrives and takes over he'll put a spell on Isebella and use her agaisnt Godfrey. Godfrey is then forced to kill her and hsi heart is broken. Afterwards Godfrey goes threw greiving proccess, and afterwards he returns to the Godfrey we all know and love.

The second idea I have is to make another villian after Mizar is destroyed. I'm thinknig of using Galahad, since he is used by Mizar anyway. I have deep backstory that woudl explain that Galahad was destined or darkness.

Finally I will conclude with Balin marrying Jocelyn and Godfrey contiueing ot defned Narnai and the rest of the lands.
 
Sir Godfrey said:
Well I've thoguht of changing a few things in my characters story lines. First off I'm gonig to make Godfrey single again. Once Mizar arrives and takes over he'll put a spell on Isebella and use her agaisnt Godfrey. Godfrey is then forced to kill her and hsi heart is broken. Afterwards Godfrey goes threw greiving proccess, and afterwards he returns to the Godfrey we all know and love.

The second idea I have is to make another villian after Mizar is destroyed. I'm thinknig of using Galahad, since he is used by Mizar anyway. I have deep backstory that woudl explain that Galahad was destined or darkness.

Finally I will conclude with Balin marrying Jocelyn and Godfrey contiueing ot defned Narnai and the rest of the lands.
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I gotta Rubik's Cube
 
wow I am so so so so sorry that I wasnt able to get on any sooner! i've been so busy with school and college applications, and I know this weekend I wont be able to get on much, if even at all. Chloe im so glad that you worked that post out, your posts are amazing, thanks again! I'll try to get in some juicy details about Susan asap. Try not to finish the battle without me... but you can for sure start it, i know its what a lot of you are looking forwards too!
God Bless, and I hope to be back on TDL soon!
 
brightlywound said:
wow I am so so so so sorry that I wasnt able to get on any sooner! i've been so busy with school and college applications, and I know this weekend I wont be able to get on much, if even at all. Chloe im so glad that you worked that post out, your posts are amazing, thanks again! I'll try to get in some juicy details about Susan asap. Try not to finish the battle without me... but you can for sure start it, i know its what a lot of you are looking forwards too!
God Bless, and I hope to be back on TDL soon!
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I gotta Rubik's Cube
 
Susan found herself cold, clammy, and exhausted. Opening her eyes, she could see no light. She feared moving for all her joints and muscles ached in uncomparable pain. She realized her body was slumped up against a stone wall, and something reeked as she breathed in slowly. Trying to position herself more comfortably, she found she was incapable of doing so,try as she might, her arms would not budge. The sensation in them made her realize that she was chained and bound to the wall she rested upon. It would be fruitless to force movement, the rings around her wrists were cutting into her flesh causing a sharp pain every few moments.
The images of Gimlik sending them out, were the last things that she could remember. She had simply no idea of where she was, nor how she had gotten there. But she did know one thing. She was a prisoner in this wretched place, and she needed to somehow get out.
 
They were nearing the castle, it was quiet... Too quiet, especially for the likes of Eringuard. He had aroused Chloe when they had come within a mile. It was dark, a moonless night, the stars hidden behind thick, threatening clouds, that would rumble and crackle with lighting once every so often. It was well past midnight, and yet they still walked, Eringuard in front, Chloe, her face hidden beneath the shelter of her hood, behind. Sheerik, he feared that the noise of his hooves would alert them, had let them continue on without him. Eringuard couldn't argue with the logic.
Shivers ran up and down his spine as they walked. Maybe it was the silence of the surrounding area that unnerved him, or possibly it was because Chloe showed no signs of fear, her body seemed to walk with an agility, and grace that he had never seen in a human before. So quiet that even he, a great hunter and warrior, would have had trouble keeping tabs on her.
As they rounded a tree, Crystal's castle, in all it's horrifying glory, stood out against the dark landscape, it's sharp pointed towers rising like needles out of a pin cusion. He turned to look at Chloe, yet her face was hidden, shadowed by the darkness of the night, and that of her hood. He searched for any signs in her composure of fear, but found none.
Turning back to the castle he listened and watched for signs of life. It appeared as if no one was there at all, almost as if it had been deserted. Suddenly, Chloe reached out and grabbed his hand. Stunned he looked back at her, but suddenly felt a seed in his mind, familiar to him, he knew she was connecting, but he was utterly shocked. He didn't know that Humans could do it as well. Allowing her in, he waited.
Something tells me that around the other side, there is a sleeping soldier. He will be able to tell us what is going on.
What tells you that?
I just know, she seemed sure, and he found himself unable to argue.
Follow me then, he replied, keeping her hand in his, he led her back into the woods. When they came around to the other side of the building, Eringuard immediatly heard the immense sound of snoring, and spotted a troll, in all his hidiousness, sleeping near a small back entrance. Oh this is going to be easy... Too easy. he thought to himself. He signaled to Chloe that he wanted her to stay, she complied slipping farther back into the wood. Her silence made him curious as to whether or not he would be able to find her again.
He slid across the ground, the stillness of the air annoying. Coming up beside the loudly snoring troll, he gently touched it's arm, and as much as it revulted him to do so, he entered his mind. Images of murder, blood and demons flashed through Eringuard's mind as he winced, trying to push back the images. He knew he would live with the memories from now on, but he didn't need to brood upon at the moment. After he reached the center of what you could concider the creatures conscience, he trapped it, exhuming it into a deeper state. Working he tediously, removed information peice after information peice until he found what he was looking for. He let out an audible gasp when he realized the truth...
 
Mizar Invades the Lone Islands Part I: Avra Burns

It was foggy night, and the Lone islands of Felimath, Doorn and Avra where peaceful. On Avra two gaurds where portalling the west wall, they wehre bored and very cold. after looking into the black sea for hours they both sat down to rest. In the merky waters, several black sail ships apaproached. They where massive, and theytm oved across the water in ocmplete silence. Within minutes the ships docked nado ut of them came beasts, spirits, undead and even darker more fouler things. They poured into the city like locust, killnig and burning everything in there path. Before the gaurds and soldiers could even get ready, the barracks where stormed and all of them where slaughtered in there night garments. After city was covered in flames, a dark man walked unto the dock watching the siege with a vile smile on hsi face. A undead creatur approched the Dark man and asked "My lord, Avra has bene taken". "Good, now procced to Doorn and turn it into flames" said Mizar. "It shall be done, my lord" said the creature bowing and then heading back to one of the ships. Mizar then walked threw the burning city, he smiled as he looked upon the burnnig corspes. Before he got far, a shadow being approached him and said in a whisperious tone "my lord, we must be going". Mizar turned and nodded, he then headed back to the ship.
 
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