The Tale of Mozart the Meerkitten

What do you think of my books? (Mozart, Fire Kitten, Catlition and Greatest Battle)

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“Well old granmother cat, now I’ll finish you!” Tigerclaw sprung, but a tiny voice cried,
“You leave Missy alone ya big ole mean cat!” tiny Frodo appeared out of nowhere and pounced onto Tigerclaw. The rats holding Missy down had fled when Tigerclaw came up, so the she cat rolled over before Tigerclaw landed on her. The huge orange cat landed on thin air, while being tormented by little Frodo.
“You a bad cat! I put you in your place!” squeaked the little creature.
“Yeeeow! Let go o’ my ear you little!” cried Tigerclaw as he tried every way he could think of to toss the kitten off his back. Actually though Tigerclaw only made it worse for himself, every time he tried to throw Frodo off, the kit dug his sharp claws deeper into Tigerclaw’s back.
Missy laughed helplessly as the small kitten tormented the terror of the slaves and free creatures.

^ I love that part! Its funny for sure.

And the main characters never die!:D
 
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Chapter Ten
The Price we pay​

Brightheart was semi-conscious when he was dragged down to the dungeons of Cogg. He wasn’t sure where he was anymore; all he knew was that he had to get back to Shadow.
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Toto was dreaming. He dreampt a large white cat visited him in that very dungeon cell.
“What do you want of me, sir?” asked Toto respectfully.
“My little Toto, you ask me for help to let you escape, do you not? Yet did the other creatures here your sister call?”
“No sir, they couldn’t, the noise was too much.” said Toto sadly.
“Creatures were right outside your window, young Toto, but I deafened them.”
“May I ask why, sir?” questioned Toto.
“Because, little one, your task in evil’s cells is not yet done. You will escape, but three of you shall leave this place. Watch for the gray cat with kind eyes who knows one named Shadow. I must leave you now, young Toto, trust me, you and your sister will soon be safe. The price you pay is not in vain.” Then the dream began to fade, Toto called into the mist where the cat had gone crying,
“Wait! Wait! Come back!” but the dream faded and Toto woke to noises and his sister gently shaking him.
“Toto wake up,” she whispered, “They’re bringing another cat in. In bad shape he is too.” she commented.
Toto looked up as the guards tossed in a gray lump covered in dirt and blood, blood of himself and his enemies… What had once been Brightheart the bold warrior was now a half-alive badly beaten young tom.
Dorthy and Toto did not hesitate. Many times their brothers had fought off evil creatures and been badly wounded for it, their mother Myrrh had made them (especially the girls) clean their older siblings wounds. At first t the young kits had hated the job, but gradually they began to feel important by helping. Now it was like an impulse. The two cleaned Brightheart thoroughly. The young tom slept with two kittens watching over him, the pair barely older than the kit he had near given his life to save.

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‘The price we pay,
Is sometimes great,
But other times,
It’s very small.
Sometimes we give,
Our life,
Other times,
We give a part.
War brings grief,
And sorrows too.
So many things,
Are wrong,
But yet we live,
In this place,
Safe it seems,
Till War and Darkness come,
And seem to overwhelm us all!
Yet it is,
The price we pay,
To keep all,
We love safe.
We’ve died and lived,
Defending, Dying,
For all those,
Who are now free!
We give them life,
But the price we pay,
May be our own life too.’


“That is a good song, little one.”
Mozart jumped as a voice sounded behind her.
“J-Jak, oh I didn’t know you were….”
“Yes I heard you, little one. It is a good song, one that should be remembered for many days.”
“I just made it up, it’s nothing good really.” said Mozart softly.
“Where is your brother then?” said Jak, choosing to change the subject.
“Oh he’s…. Around… Like he always has been….” she giggled, “He’s over in that bush, watching us.” she whispered.
Jak chuckled as he saw two small eyes peering at him from the bush.
“He always watches out for me.” The tiny kitten said admiringly, “He never let our older brothers pick-on me.” Then she turned to the warrior cat and said sadly,
“You should have never challenged him to fight. He may never fully trust you now.”
“Why?” asked Jak quizzically.
“Because you’ve attacked me and him and he can’t understand that I made the decision to fight you and you didn’t just, well, start to beat me up while he wasn’t around.” Mozart sighed, “Caspian’s odd that way sometimes.”
“My brother was like that too.” said Jak absently.
“Heeeeeeyyyyy!!!!!!!! Crazy cat, lazy cat, trazy cat, mazy ca- ow!” Caspian’s chanting was stopped by Mozart pouncing on him. The two tumbled on the grass laughing. Jak watched them, thinking of the times like that he had shared with his own big brother.
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I just feel like posting more.;)

so:

Ribbony was waiting in some bushes by the gate of Cogg’s palace. When he saw Shadow and her mother appear he stepped out. Tori hissed at him, but Shadow ran up to him and said,
“Ribbony, something’s happened to Bright! He held off the bad creatures so mama and I could get away but he’s still in there! Ribbony what’ll we do!?!”
Ribbony knew there wasn’t much good in going back in for Brightheart, the young tom would be captured and put in the dungeons.
“Must go find your siblings, young one, Bright ’s a big boy, ‘e can handle himself. C’mon kit, ma’m, we must go now.” said Ribbony grimly.

The whole of Catlition and the escapees went on an exodus from Cogg’s plantations. They made it out fine, but Catlition was minus one member.
Clancy and Shadow wept for Brightheart as they went into Wolf Woods. Tiny Shadow, who he had loved like a sister, and Clancy who was now without family. It was an altogether sad party that walked on doggedly through the woods. Shadow cried until she fell asleep, then Clancy insisted on carrying her. Gradually each of the little kittens succumbed to sleep.

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When Brightheart woke up he was confused. Where was he? Why was he there? Where were Shadow and Ribbony? Everything was blurry and he couldn’t tell whether he was outside or not.
“Where am I?” he asked.
“You’re in a dungeon cell.” a voice whispered to him, “Don’t be alarmed, my sister is reasoning with the guards to see if she can get medicine herbs, we will escape when you are well, my name is Toto.” Brightheart did not ask questions, instead he listened to the voices nearby who were reasoning with each other.
“But you haveta let me have medicine herbs to make him well,” Dorthy’s voice sounded as sweet as honey, “Or else he will not be a good slave to you. He may die you see, but if you let me have the supplies I need to make him well, he will be fit and strong again.” Her face the picture of innocence, Dorthy flashed her normally defiant green eyes at the guard, now though Dorthy looked as if she was a small angel.
“Fine,” said the guard roughly, “What’d ya need?” then Dorthy rolled out a list of items she needed,
“Poppy seeds, feverfew, clean cloth, cold water, paste, cobwebs and blackberries.”
“Seems a lot fer one cat.” Muttered one of the guards suspiciously, then the guards left the kittens alone for a few moments.
Toto and Dorthy burst out laughing,
“Blackberries, why didn’t I think of that, eh Dor?”
“Really Toto, I know! Blackberries! Haha!”
“Whats so good ‘bout blackaberries?” asked Brightheart groggily.
“They’re good eatin’ that’s what!” laughed Dorthy.

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“Midnight where in the world are we?!?”cried Flower exasperatedly to her brother.
“I don’t know!” her brother snapped back, “How would I know?!? It’s too dark to see anything!”
“We are so lost!”
“Fine we’re lost, what’d you say we do about it, eh?”
“You’re the one who’s been leadin me around on this wild Catlition chase, you tell me!”
“Catlition, y’say? Well that’s mighty good, or else who knows what’d happen to you, alone out here.” a voice spoke from the shadows.
Flower screamed, Midnight pushed his sister behind him and cried into the night,
“Get away, don’t you hurt my sister!”
“Yeah and don’t you hurt my brother, even if he did get us lost!” squeaked Flower.
“Whats it to ya kiddos, you lost you say? Come with me then, I’ll take you someplace safe.”
“Who be you? I can’t see ya, show yourself!”
“Alright, I will then.” a young tom with brownish red hair materialized out of the darkness in front of the frightened kittens.
“Jak? Blast it Jak, where are you? Leavin’ me hangin like that! Humph, better if I’d have stayed at Reandalawo instead.” A small cat, younger than Flower and Midnight walked out behind the tom. This tom-kitten had dark hair with whitish cream colored stripes down his sides.
“And who are they?” asked Caspian indicating to Flower and Midnight, Flower bore a striking resemblance to him.
“Midnight and Flower.” answered Midnight, “And your name is?” questioned the young black tom.
“I’m Caspian, this is Jaklikeo, but he’s called Jak.” said Caspian.
“Please to meetcha both.” said Flower a bit more perkily.
 
I'm tired and in a bad mood so I can't really appreciate this update but it was still good. I shall wait for more.

For once I'm in a good mood, maybe its cause I'm tired.:p

I wish I could send one of my kittens to cheer you up.;):D

And I know its short but I think this update is funny!
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Chapter Eleven
Newcomers and New Friends​

It was the third day since Dorthy, Toto and Brightheart had met. Brightheart was doing better under Dorthy’s care, though the little she-cat was very insistent about what she wanted him to do. Toto never laughed so much in his whole life then he did those three days in a prison cell. His sister’s insistentness and Brightheart’s unwillingness gave way to a hilarious show.

“Now look Mr. Brightheart,” Dorthy would begin, “You gotta take your medicine or you’ll never get well an’ you’ll never see that lil snippet of a kitten Shadow again.”
“Now look little Dorthy cat, I’m a big warrior, I’ll get well without your smelly poultices and odd concoctions.” Brightheart would contradict.
“Tsk, tsk, mama’d have a thing to say about you iffin she was here, that’s fer sure! Taint that right, Toto?”
Toto only got about one line in this entire show and this was it; “Oh, of course, Dorthy, mama’d shove it down his throat and make him eat it all day, like she did with Faith and Kenny when they wouldn’t take their medicine.”
“Tis right, Tote! And I’ll do the same if an unmentioned cat doesn’t take his medysin!”
“Alright, alright, you little squeakin’ excuse for a medicine cat!” Brightheart would always reply, “I’ll take my medicine.”
Then Dorthy would nod in satisfaction, turn and miss Brightheart dump most of the concoction out the window onto the head of an innocent bystander, and Toto would laugh helplessly at the entire episode.

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Ok here is more:

While Toto, Dorthy and Brightheart made friends in a dungeon cell, Mozart and Caspian were worried about their siblings.
“Caspian, do you think Dorthy and Toto are O.K.?” Mozart would ask her brother anxiously
“Oh I’m sure they’re O.K. Mozie.” Caspian would reply absently.

Flower and Midnight, on the other paw, were having a grand time in Reandalawo. The two young cats thought it amazing and beautiful, which it certainly was. The two were found to be about seven months old and inseparable. The two refused to be parted, period, much like Caspian and Mozart.
The four, Mozart, Caspian, Flower and Midnight, soon became fast friends. Though Flower and Midnight were much older than Mozart and Caspian they became best friends nevertheless. This helped take the worry about Dorthy and Toto off of the shoulders of Mozart and Caspian.

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“Is it much furtherwer Ribbony?” asked little Smokey as he stumbled along.
“That’s further, lil Smoke, and no it isn’t much further.” replied Ribbony.
“Whatsit called again, Ribbony?” asked Frodo.
“Tis called Reandalawo, Frodo. It is a magnificent place… And safe as well. It is where the heart of the rebellion lies. I know their leader well.” said the big gray cat.
“If she is who I am thinking of I do also.” added Missy.
“She?” said Tori quizzically.
“Aye she, ma’m. And she’ll welcome us when she knows who we are.” said Ribbony confidently.
“Good, ‘cause my babes need a place to lay their lil heads.” said Tori kindly as she watched her little kits tumble and stumble along in the middle of the procession.


Sometime latter Clancy looked up and saw something. In was a clearing ahead, with a large black spot in the middle.
The young cat gasped and cried out,
“Rean-da-law-o!!!!”
All the party looked up and before them saw the fortress of Reandalawo.
“Lets say it together now kits,” said Ribbony, then he and the kits and the others all raised their voices in a loud earsplitting call,
“CATLITIOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”

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Will wait for more. In another bad mood so can't really appreciate it....

Lets see, stamp *fragile* all over a box with air hole containing a kitten and ship it to Kitty....

haha, here's more:

Flower jumped, Midnight stared, Caspian and Mozart’s mouth’s dropped open.
Catlition had come to Reandalawo.

Dora jumped out of her seat when she heard the call. She had been dozing until her brother’s war-cry reached her. Her reading glasses fell off the bridge of her nose where they had been resting and fell onto the oak desk where scattered papers, ink pens and quills and many other things were placed. A young squirrel ran up to her room and said,
“M’lady, some cats by the odd name of Catlition have come, should they be let in?”
“Huh! If my brothers have become so unknown that young ones are not taught of them…” muttered Dora, “Of course let them in, young fool! Asking me if I’d like to let my own brothers in, well! Never thought it’d come to this!” shaking her head she brushed passed the perplexed squirrel and down the steps to where the four kittens were.
“Come little warriors, there are some cats I’d like you to meet…”
Surprised the four young cats followed Dora down to the gate. Jak was already there with a dozen warriors.
“Ma’m, we outnumber them greatly and could easily shoo them off if you wa- Yowch!” Jak rubbed the side of his head where Dora had whacked him.
“Really Jak I’m surprised at you. Don’t you remember Catlition, and uncle Ribby?”
Jak’s ears glowed red and he stood aside for Dora.
“Open the gates!” cried the she cat.
Catlition entered Reandalawo. *Two parts of one destiny were about to combine for the very first time.
Mozart climbed onto Caspian’s shoulders to see better. She beheld a rag-tag bunch of cats who looked half alive. But it was something, something in their eyes that made Mozart shiver. The cat who lead them was big and gray with little white stripes down his side. Mozart guessed he must be the leader. Then a big black and white cat and a large cream colored cat entered, side by side. Then a brownish tan cat, younger than the other toms. He looked sad the kitten noted. A mother cat who was a tortoiseshell came in with her kittens also. They didn’t look like warriors, they looked more like refuges! Yet in the kitten’s eyes Mozart saw that, though they were young, their eyes held a fire like the one which burned in her siblings eyes, and in her own. The two little gray tomcat’s, the little black she-cat and their mother, all looked like good brave creatures to little Mozart, as did Catlition.
Smiling the little kitten called out, “Caaatliiiiitiiiiooooooooon!!!!!” everyone stared at her, even the arriving cats. The three little kittens called back to her,
“Caaaaatlitiooooooooon!!!”
And in that moment a bond had been formed between Mozart, Catlition, and the little kits.
(end chapter)
*that line is not a quote from anything
 
Ok I know this update is short, but seriously I've run out of chapters. This one I'm posting next, isn't even finished. So now I can't just post crazily....yeah.

So here is a little more:

Chapter twelve
LFF Catlition​

It was that same evening that Dora and all the kittens and Catlition were talking about the past days. The three youngest kittens had been put to bed, but Mozart and Caspian were still up, as were Flower, Midnight and Jak.

“Ribbony I still can’t believe you walked right into Cogg’s fortress, and got in and out alive too!”
Ribbony chuckled, I wasn’t sure if it was Reandalawo here or Cogg’s place, but I had a feeling I should go in and have a look around. Twas a good thing I did to, eh? Or else them kittens, ole Missy and Tori here wouldn’t be around with us to-nigh.”
Mozart could not resist asking, “Did you happen to see two other kittens? About the size of me and Caspian, well rather Caspian, golden haired tom, and a pale golden haired she cat?” asked little Mozart.
“Well sorry young one, but I don’t remember seeing any- ” he was cut off by Clancy who said,
“I saw them, I did! Some guards were takin them to the dungeons when I saw them!”
Mozart and Caspian looked gloomily at each other.
“Eh, why’d you ask, young un?” inquired Ribbony.
Mozart burst into tears and sobbed,
“They were are siblings, sir. Dorthy and Toto!” cried the little kitten.
Ribbony frowned, but he wasn’t exactly sure what to do. Neither was anyone else in the room when they heard the statement.
Creamy broke the silence by saying, “Well it’s no good doing a thing tonight, we should all get some shut-eye and speak more in the morn.” This simple logic brought the others back to reality. Mozart stopped crying, then Caspian took his sister’s paw and the two walked upstairs in silence. Soon the others followed them.

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Mozart was sad but she knew that is wasn’t going to do any good for anyone if she curled up in a corner. So Mozart thought up a fun idea.

It was sometime after lunch. The kittens were outside, just sitting about doing nothing.
Then Mozart came in.
She stared at them for a moment, then cried out,
“Well what are you lot all sittin around for an this beautiful day?!? C’mon, I got an idea!”

The other kittens- which consisted of Frodo, Smokey, Shadow, Flower, Midnight, Caspian and Mozart herself- marched off following Mozart to a spot behind the main building in Reandalawo.
“Mozart what is this all about?” asked Flower somewhat impatiently.
“Oh I have an idea you see. We are all sitting around moping, but from what I’ve heard and known, Brightheart, Toto and Dorthy wouldn’t want us crying and being serious and sad enough to knock the walls of Reandalawo down!”
“Mozie what are you saying?” asked Caspian.
“I’m saying we should do something…”
“And what is that, missy Mozart?” said Smokey
“I was just about to tell you, ya silly fuzz ball! We’re gonna be our own Catlition!”
“What?” came six surprised squeaks.
Mozart grinned “Don’t you worry, you’ll understand soon…”

Thus began the LFF Catlition.
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