Fan-Fic, a different side of the heroes of Narnia

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Ed felt Cara move slightly. He looked down at her; she looked back into his warm brown eyes. He reached up and wiped away a stray tear off her cheek with his thumb. Ed could feel his heart start to beet faster as he moved his hand off her cheek and down her neck, brining his hand to a stop at the base of her neck; with half his hand on her neck and the other half on her shoulder. He searched her face as he moved closer. He knew what he wanted, but how would she react? Would she slap him? Or worse, would she hate him? He gulped slightly and looked into her eyes.​
 
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Cara looked back into his eyes; she could feel her heart racing. She watched as he moved closer, his breath was warm on her face. She trailed her hand up his arm to his shoulder. She closed her eyes as she felt his lips gently brush hers. It felt so wonderful, yet so strange. She stepped back and looked at him. He looked back, blushing. Ed coughed slightly to cover his embarrassment. They both jumped slightly as they heard a knock on the door.​
 
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Lucy looked from Ed to Cara and smiled slightly. “Ed why don’t you and Cara go ahead and I’ll wait for Su and Peter.” Ed looked at Lucy, “ok, if you’re sure.” Lucy nodded, “yep.” Ed grinned, “ok, come on Cara, lets go.” Cara looked questionly at Lucy then followed Ed outside.
Ed looked at Cara and smiled, “do you want to ride Philip?” Cara looked at him confused, “Philip?” Ed grinned, “my horse,” he walked into the stable and a beautiful brown horse followed him out. “This is Philip,” he said to Cara. “Hello Cara.” Cara jumped, “it..it talks.”
Ed laughed at her puzzled expression. “Of course I talk dear girl,” Philip said. Cara stepped closer to Ed, keeping him between her and Philip. “I think I’ll walk,” she said quietly. Ed looked at her, “its ok Cara, he won’t hurt you.” Cara looked up at him, “I’d rather walk.”​
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Hey, I love your story. But here's a little correction (1. Talking horses are free, they aren't owned. (2. Talking horses were only rode in times of great need, like battles and such.
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Keep up the good writing, I can't wait for your next post.
 
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Cara walked over to the door and opened it. Lucy stood there, she looked up set. Her eyes drifted past Cara to Edmund. “Ed, Peter’s sick.” Ed paled visibly; he walked over to the door. “What’s wrong with him? Is he going to be ok?” Lucy nodded slowly, “he should be. You should come see him.” Ed walked out into the hall, “how did he get sick? He was fine earlier.” Cara stepped into the hall and closed the door behind her. “He got hurt when he was fighting the giants and it got infected.” Ed started walking to Peter’s room. “Why didn’t he tell us?”​
 
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