Fan-Fic, a different side of the heroes of Narnia

Susan walked past Peter and Lucy and stopped in front of Cara. “What are you doing?” Susan demanded, “how dare you cause a scene like that, you ruined the ball.” Peter grabbed Susan’s arm, firmly, but gently. “Stop it, can’t you see that Cara’s in shock.” He looked at Ed, “take her to her room.” Ed nodded; he took Cara by the arm and started leading her out of the garden. “Oh and Ed,” Peter said, “don’t leave her alone.” Ed nodded; he put his arm around her and lead her out of the garden.​
Peter turned back to Susan, she was glaring at him. “What do you think your doing?” She demanded, “I wasn’t done talking to her.” Peter sighed, exasperated, “yes, you were.” He turned and started to walk away. “Peter don’t you walk away, I’m still talking to you.” Peter stopped, he slowly turned around. Susan smiled, “now, you need to speak to Cara about her actions, she ruined the ball.”​
 
Stupid Susan. -.-'


Anyways Tess, by the time I get back on Tuesday I except at least 50 more updates. ;) And one of them has to be the part I'm looking forward to. :D *hugs* Byyee! Love ya!
 
Yep! And here is a wlcome back gift!!


Peter clenched his fits, he’d had enough of Susan’s attitude. “No Susan, I’m not going to talk to her, she didn’t ruin your ball; everyone is still enjoying themselves.” Susan opened her mouth to protest. “No,” Peter said quietly, “I’ve had enough.” He glanced at Lucy, “I’m sorry to cut our dinner short Lu, but I have things to do, excuse me.” Peter turned again and slowly started to walk out of the garden. Lucy and Susan watched him, he was walking slower than usual. He stopped and leaned against the wall for support. Lucy and Susan looked at each other, they ran over to him. “Peter,” Lucy said franticly, “Peter,” she said again when he didn’t answer. He looked at both of them. “Get a doctor,” he whispered weakly. Lucy and Susan stared at him for a moment. “Lucy, get a doctor, now!” Susan ordered as she helped Peter up the stairs and to his room. She felt Peter’s head after he lay down on his bed. “You’re burning up.” Susan looked up as Lucy ran, followed closely by the doctor.​
Lucy and Susan stood off the the side while the doctor examined Peter. The doctor walked over to them He was a old dwarf with a long white beard. “Queen Susan and Lucy, your brother is sick.” Lucy reached for Susan’s hand. “What’s wrong with him?” Lucy asked quietly. The doctor looked up at both of them. “He appears to have in injured in a battle, by a poisoned weapon and the cut has gotten infected.” Susan put her arms around Lucy, “will he be alright?” Susan asked, trying to comfort Lucy. The doctor nodded. “Yes, he’ll be fine, but he needs to rest.” Lucy and Susan nodded. “Thank you,” Lucy said quietly. The doctor nodded, “I gave him something to help him sleep so you won’t need to check on him for a few hours.” Susan nodded and walked out into the hall with Lucy and the doctor.​
 
Wow! Thanks so much for updating. I was already half dead with waiting. Is the Prince Charming mentioned under your banner Edmund? Keep up the good work.
 
I am SO SORRY that its taken me so long to post more! :eek:


Ed sat on the couch in Cara’s room. She stood on the balcony, staring at the water below. Edmund stood up and walked over to her and stood beside her. He glanced at her face; she was staring blankly ahead. He reached over and covered her hand with his. Cara turned; she looked up at him with tear filled eyes. “Dot let him hurt me,” Cara whispered. Ed pulled Cara against his chest and wrapped his arms around her. “I won’t, I promise.” He felt her body shake as she cried. “It’ll be ok, I promise,” he whispered, though not knowing what he was promising to protect her from.​
 
I did expect more after being away for over three weeks... I expect more when I'll be back next time, in two weeks!
No, just kidding, you did post a lot and it's all great. The part of Peter getting sick really gave me shivvers..(if that's even a word.;)
 
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