Adventures during the Golden Age in Narnia

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True. However, there's something about that guy who brought Alana to Narnia that's making me think there's more to him than he's letting on. I guess the only way to find out is to wait.
 
That's him (I couldn't remember his name off the top of my head). The reason why I think he's up to no good is this: He happens to find out that a pack of werewolves have surrounded the escort, they happened to be in that particular spot at the time when the werewolves attacked, and there had been no reports of werewolves until then. But like I said, I'll wait and find out if my reasons to be suspicious were viable.
 
Wait u did not post tonight....:( uhhh I wanted to see what would happen?!?!?!
 
Here is the next chapter..

Chapter 8
"Peridan, look at this." Edmund said as he slid off his horse. They had been scouting the area, in search for any evidence of who was behind the attacks that had been launched on Narnian subjects and even people just passing through. They had stopped at a town near the delta of the Great River. The town was in ruins. No one inhabited it.
As they walked through the town, they saw broken down houses, things that had been on fire, probably burned by the attackers. "It is like a ghost town." Edmund commented. "What do you make of it, Peridan?"
But Peridan was not paying attention. He was kneeling down in front of one of the houses, looking at something on the ground. Suddenly he jumped up and shouted. "Your Highness, look!" He exclaimed..
"Peridan?" Edmund said looking quizzically at Peridan. "What is.... Oh, my. Aslan save us." He said.
Lying in front of him was a silver wand, embelished with snowflakes and ancient spells. It had points on either side. The White Witches wand.
Edmund knelt in front of it, rolling it around in his hands. He recalled what had happened to him, his experiences with this wand. He was a traitor, he should not even be king. But he was king, and that was all because of Aslan. Thank Aslan Edmund was still alive! The witch had wanted to kill Edmund, but Aslan sacrificed himself in Edmunds stead. Edmund never forgot that, nor did he forget the moment that the White Witches wand pierced his chest.
Snapping back into reality, Edmund stood up, wand in hand, and turned to Peridan.
"We shall bring this to the High King, he should know what to do." Edmund said, and they got back on their horses and turned to gallop off towards Cair Paravel.
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"I honestly do not know what to do, Ed." Peter said worriedly. " I really do not know. What I do know is that Aslan will come to our aid if he is needed. If we can not defeat this alone, he will come, and he will prevail. He has triumphed over the witch before, and he can do it again. For now, we must do what we can to handle this situation."
"But Peter, we have not seen the witches wand since the Battle of Beruna! I feel that we will not be able to handle this on our own. But Aslan has not come, so I suppose that we must." Edmund replied in a panicky voice. " I have a bad feeling about this."
"So do I, Your Majesty." Peridan interjected. "I suggest that we keep this between ourselves. There is no use worrying anyone else about this. Besides, there could be a spy in our midst, and we will not know who it is. We do not want any information leaking into the wrong hands."
Peter and Edmund looked at eachother and nodded gravely. Peridan was right.
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Susan noticed her brothers change in behavior since Ed and Peridan came back from their scouting trip the previous week. She suspected that something was wrong, and that they did not want to tell anyone about it. She was determined not to show her worry, especially in front of Lucy. She was going to talk to Peter when she could, but now she had to continue preparations for Prince Rabadashes arrival.
 
Thanks!! I will post the next two chapters tomorrow. I was down at my dads shop doing school and I got done, but he was not there to tell me what work I could do, plus my Ipod was running out of battery, so I wrote two chapters. They are really good, in my opinion. It is starting to get intense, I can tell you that. :p
 
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